Poetry Contest

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Poetry Contest

Poetry Contest

Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!

The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth. 

The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*

Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair? 

I hope to see your poems soon!

~Booksy <3 

submitted by Booksy Owly
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)

This isn't that good because I haven't really written poems before but, um, here's mine. I hope you like it :/ 

SHADOW

I see you over my shoulder

steady and always there

when I walk, you walk bolder

as if you have nothing to spare

 

You are always out when the sun is bright

and I'm glad to know your behind me

but in the darkness of the night

its like your lost and can't find me

 

you are tall and skinny

but mostly you have no shape

bending and winding with every turn

you follow the path I make

 

sometimes your not behind me

sometimes your cast on a wall

then it's like your beside me

I'll catch you if you fall

 

im happy to know I'll have a friend

even when I'm sad and blue

this is a bond that will never end end

your shadow will always be with you  

submitted by ...
(February 3, 2022 - 3:09 pm)

Unseen

I stand here and look around

Confused, what is that sound?

It comes from behind me

Whatever it is, I can't see

I need to know

But when I turn, it doesn't show

 

Maybe an ancient leviathan

But just as easily a lost kitten

 

My vision obscured

My hearing blurred

What is it that's behind me?

Creatures, only one or maybe three

Full of danger

Possible stranger

 

When the whatever it is is always behind

I might as well be blind 

submitted by Phantasmagoria, age never, e/en/es
(February 3, 2022 - 3:11 pm)
BEHIND ME

My shadow watches from behind me
It stares and sees everything I do
I cannot see its face nor hear its voice
Yet I know it watches me.

When I trip and fall
For no apparent reason
I blame my shadow who’s always around
Who had the chance to and is now laughing.

When I wake up in the middle of the night
My shadow is everywhere in the room
I cannot hide from it
It sees everything in my room.

When I am in trouble
My shadow sits and laughs
Right behind me
And takes no blame.

My shadow sits behind me
All day
Everyday
Laughing, watching, crying
I can never prove it
But I believe
That my death will come
From the thing that is always behind me.
A monster that5 stays with me until it's time for me to die.
My shadow. 
submitted by Pancake
(February 3, 2022 - 7:32 pm)
submitted by top
(February 9, 2022 - 1:02 pm)

TOP tOp ToP top!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

submitted by TOP, age ToP, tOp
(February 10, 2022 - 9:45 pm)

Are you still judging on the 16th Luna?

submitted by
(February 10, 2022 - 10:06 pm)

behind me trails my fifth grade self. 

who has her hair in tight ponytail, 

and wears her favorite blue shirt. 

she watches me go about my day, 

silent and still. 

she sees me braid my hair, 

and smiles. 

she could never do that. 

she sits on the bleachers 

and watches my soccer practice. 

she thinks it's so cool that I made the team. 

behind her trails my third grade self. 

she has hair cut to her chin, 

and a constant grin that streches from ear to ear. 

she can't believe I'm in high school.

in third grade, 

high school seems a million years away. 

she's impressed with the books I carry in my backpack. 

she's glad I still enjoy reading.

she perches on the file cabinets in the band room. 

she thinks it's great I still play clarinet. 

behind her trails my kindergarten self. 

her hair is pulled into two ponytails,

and the freckles on her cheeks stand out. 

I look like a stranger to her, 

but the freckles on our cheeks are the same. 

she's in complete awe of me. 

she sits curled up in the back of my biology class, 

and watches with wide eyes. 

she's proud of me, 

though, 

even if she doesn't understand a word my teacher is saying. 

behind me trails my fifth grade self, 

as well as my eighth grade one, 

and sixth. 

they might be a bit confused, 

might wonder how I became the person I did, 

but they all have a smile that matches mine 

and freckles on their cheeks.  

 

What a beautiful poem, Peppermint!

Admin

submitted by peppermint, age she/her , staring at the stars
(February 10, 2022 - 10:59 pm)

@admin, thank you! 

You're welcome. Your poem brought tears to my eyes. Thinking back . . . nostalgia.

Admin

submitted by peppermint, age she/her, staring at the stars
(February 11, 2022 - 12:58 am)

Peppermint...That poem is amazing! Seriously so moving and incredible. I'm only in middle school but I love imagining all my old selves following me. Phenomenal poetry. 

submitted by LunaWolf , age 12 winters, Narnia
(February 11, 2022 - 9:11 pm)

thank you <3 

submitted by peppermint, age 14, staring at the stars
(February 12, 2022 - 11:42 am)

oh pepper, I agree with admin, this is beautiful! this is very relatable to me, because when I feel like a failure or not as good as others, I just think back to how much better I already am compared to me just a year ago, or before. if you've improved, it only makes sense that you'll keep improving in the future. seriously, sometimes I go through my old sketchbooks and I'll be like "that's good!! but now I could fix those mistakes and make it even better!!"

submitted by Azalea , age she/her, Earth
(February 13, 2022 - 9:08 am)

thank you <3 yeah, it's really inspiring to see how you've grown over the years :) I'm glad you liked the poem!

submitted by peppermint, staring at the stars
(February 13, 2022 - 2:27 pm)

I toss that salt

Over my shoulder; 

Let it burn the demons

Behind me to dust.

 

And when they check my records--

A history I no longer am--

I throw and match 

And let them see flames consume crackling papers.

 

And I leave those shadows behind--

The dark, the demons the fire and blood--

For it is no longer who I am;

A person of tears and Void and The Cage,

She's lost 'til time's come to an end

 

And now I stride alone, wind whipping about;

No expression, some colour, cool steel-hard resolve.

I have left it all

Behind me.

 

I am reborn,

Brighter. 

 

submitted by Jaybells, age Pondering, Lost in the Universe
(February 10, 2022 - 11:09 pm)

orpheus~

flickering lantern light

against rough stone 

overlayed with a layer of rusted decay

there is but one shadow cast against the wall

(is she behind me?)

my footsteps ringing through the air

gunshots in the silence 

they are the only sound

and I can’t hear her following

(is she behind me?)

my throat is dry and sore

from pouring my soul into song

my fingers sting from lyre strings 

and there is only darkness ahead

(is she behind me?)

there is a faint sliver of sunlight 

it burns against the obsidian night

my heart yearns for me to stumble out

of this shadowed underworld

but will I be abandoning her if I leave?

how can I walk blindly away?

(is she behind me?)

I am between sunlight and death

and I cannot move 

without knowing she is here. 

so I turn around. 

.

.

.

(she was behind me) 

submitted by Silver Crystal, age Infinity, Milky Way
(February 15, 2022 - 11:57 am)

Aw, that is such a good reference! You really capture the tragic elements that make it feel so real and tortuous!!! TwT

You go girl! Legit, I've always been more on the side of 'Why did Orpheus turn back? He just should've continued and trusted Eurydice.' But this really humanizes him and adds a human touch back in. :)

submitted by Jaybells@Silver, Lost in the Universe
(February 15, 2022 - 3:23 pm)