Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
This isn't that good because I haven't really written poems before but, um, here's mine. I hope you like it :/
SHADOW
I see you over my shoulder
steady and always there
when I walk, you walk bolder
as if you have nothing to spare
You are always out when the sun is bright
and I'm glad to know your behind me
but in the darkness of the night
its like your lost and can't find me
you are tall and skinny
but mostly you have no shape
bending and winding with every turn
you follow the path I make
sometimes your not behind me
sometimes your cast on a wall
then it's like your beside me
I'll catch you if you fall
im happy to know I'll have a friend
even when I'm sad and blue
this is a bond that will never end end
your shadow will always be with you
(February 3, 2022 - 3:09 pm)
Unseen
I stand here and look around
Confused, what is that sound?
It comes from behind me
Whatever it is, I can't see
I need to know
But when I turn, it doesn't show
Maybe an ancient leviathan
But just as easily a lost kitten
My vision obscured
My hearing blurred
What is it that's behind me?
Creatures, only one or maybe three
Full of danger
Possible stranger
When the whatever it is is always behind
I might as well be blind
(February 3, 2022 - 3:11 pm)
(February 3, 2022 - 7:32 pm)
(February 9, 2022 - 1:02 pm)
TOP tOp ToP top!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(February 10, 2022 - 9:45 pm)
Are you still judging on the 16th Luna?
(February 10, 2022 - 10:06 pm)
behind me trails my fifth grade self.
who has her hair in tight ponytail,
and wears her favorite blue shirt.
she watches me go about my day,
silent and still.
she sees me braid my hair,
and smiles.
she could never do that.
she sits on the bleachers
and watches my soccer practice.
she thinks it's so cool that I made the team.
behind her trails my third grade self.
she has hair cut to her chin,
and a constant grin that streches from ear to ear.
she can't believe I'm in high school.
in third grade,
high school seems a million years away.
she's impressed with the books I carry in my backpack.
she's glad I still enjoy reading.
she perches on the file cabinets in the band room.
she thinks it's great I still play clarinet.
behind her trails my kindergarten self.
her hair is pulled into two ponytails,
and the freckles on her cheeks stand out.
I look like a stranger to her,
but the freckles on our cheeks are the same.
she's in complete awe of me.
she sits curled up in the back of my biology class,
and watches with wide eyes.
she's proud of me,
though,
even if she doesn't understand a word my teacher is saying.
behind me trails my fifth grade self,
as well as my eighth grade one,
and sixth.
they might be a bit confused,
might wonder how I became the person I did,
but they all have a smile that matches mine
and freckles on their cheeks.
What a beautiful poem, Peppermint!
Admin
(February 10, 2022 - 10:59 pm)
@admin, thank you!
You're welcome. Your poem brought tears to my eyes. Thinking back . . . nostalgia.
Admin
(February 11, 2022 - 12:58 am)
Peppermint...That poem is amazing! Seriously so moving and incredible. I'm only in middle school but I love imagining all my old selves following me. Phenomenal poetry.
(February 11, 2022 - 9:11 pm)
thank you <3
(February 12, 2022 - 11:42 am)
oh pepper, I agree with admin, this is beautiful! this is very relatable to me, because when I feel like a failure or not as good as others, I just think back to how much better I already am compared to me just a year ago, or before. if you've improved, it only makes sense that you'll keep improving in the future. seriously, sometimes I go through my old sketchbooks and I'll be like "that's good!! but now I could fix those mistakes and make it even better!!"
(February 13, 2022 - 9:08 am)
thank you <3 yeah, it's really inspiring to see how you've grown over the years :) I'm glad you liked the poem!
(February 13, 2022 - 2:27 pm)
I toss that salt
Over my shoulder;
Let it burn the demons
Behind me to dust.
And when they check my records--
A history I no longer am--
I throw and match
And let them see flames consume crackling papers.
And I leave those shadows behind--
The dark, the demons the fire and blood--
For it is no longer who I am;
A person of tears and Void and The Cage,
She's lost 'til time's come to an end
And now I stride alone, wind whipping about;
No expression, some colour, cool steel-hard resolve.
I have left it all
Behind me.
I am reborn,
Brighter.
(February 10, 2022 - 11:09 pm)
orpheus~
flickering lantern light
against rough stone
overlayed with a layer of rusted decay
there is but one shadow cast against the wall
(is she behind me?)
my footsteps ringing through the air
gunshots in the silence
they are the only sound
and I can’t hear her following
(is she behind me?)
my throat is dry and sore
from pouring my soul into song
my fingers sting from lyre strings
and there is only darkness ahead
(is she behind me?)
there is a faint sliver of sunlight
it burns against the obsidian night
my heart yearns for me to stumble out
of this shadowed underworld
but will I be abandoning her if I leave?
how can I walk blindly away?
(is she behind me?)
I am between sunlight and death
and I cannot move
without knowing she is here.
so I turn around.
.
.
.
(she was behind me)
(February 15, 2022 - 11:57 am)
Aw, that is such a good reference! You really capture the tragic elements that make it feel so real and tortuous!!! TwT
You go girl! Legit, I've always been more on the side of 'Why did Orpheus turn back? He just should've continued and trusted Eurydice.' But this really humanizes him and adds a human touch back in. :)
(February 15, 2022 - 3:23 pm)