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NEW STORY! Okay, I havn't been on CB in a while, but I thougt I might as well try and make a story with a few people. I have no idea what it's about or any of the characters, plot, setting, exc. So I really need some help. Would someone please write this story with me?!
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(March 7, 2011 - 5:37 pm)
(March 7, 2011 - 5:37 pm)
Hi, everyone! I'm back! Okay, I JUST finished reading through all one hundred or so of the posts. How did you guys type so much in just THREE weeks?!?!?!?! It took FOREVER to read all of them! Anyways, this is a great story. You all have great posts! NAME, that DEFINITELY made up for the days you were gone! Oh, and glad to see all the people who joined in! So do you think I could still join in? How do you think Emma should fit in? I think that's the biggest question. If she doesn't fit in at all, that's fine. I'll keep up with the story and I'll just join in the next story you all start! I still wish I could join, though...Oops, got to go finish making dinner for my mom. I'll probably be on tomorrow or the next day. Hopefully. Bye!
(April 11, 2011 - 6:14 pm)
I am glad you are back. I actually think it's been four weeks. At least it seems like four weeks. Sure you can still join. We put Emma into the story so right now she would be with the rest of them following the principal. By the way, how was your vacation?
(April 11, 2011 - 7:25 pm)
Emma totaly fits in! She's been a vital part even if you aren't posting as her! You have to stay in!
Jess-
We walked into the principal's office. "What do you know? And why did that guy try to kill me?!" I asked angrily. "Well, you because you are the next target and that was Marcus Village. He and a bunch of other people form what is called the NAO," he started. "What's the NAO?" Emma asked. "National Assasination Organization. They do their job all over the world. It's usually rich people who hire them." Wow, this was bigger than I thought. "Continue." Matt was obviously angry, even with this explanation. When the principal didn't say anything, Matt pulled out his knife and slammed it on the table. "Continue," he said again through gritted teeth. "The NAO's target was the janitor first, then anyone else who was involved." "Okay, involved in what?" Annie asked. "The janitor was only part time. He worked for the CIA as well. He was working on a special case; any agents associated were killed. The reason for Jess was"-- I finished his sentence--"my parents," I muttered softly and sat down. "Yes, Jess's parents named her Jessica because that was the name of a clue they found in the case. I only know about this much. The reason for the rest of you is because you were involved with Jess. She is their primary target, then the rest of you. Especially Rose. Anyone involed with the original agents are primary. Anyone involved with them are secondary. So, since Jess's parents were two of the agents, she is primary target alfa. Since Rose knew the janitor well she is primary target omega. Since you 7 are involved with them you are secondary targets. Emma, Annie, and Katie first. Then Bill, then Matt, then Clark, and Sam. Jess you are first because the agents were your parents. Then Rose, then the rest of you."
(April 11, 2011 - 7:27 pm)
Princess P!!! Your character is one of the main ones! Please post soon!!
Annie
Ilooked at the principal in astonishment.
“Youknew about this the whole time?” I asked in disbelief.
“Ofcourse. I mean a janitor getting murdered isn’t normal.”
“You’rehelping them!”
“No!I don’t want to be involved with any of this. Now go away you’re giving me aheadache.”
Jessbeckoned for us to go.
Wewalked out the door and stood outside the office for a minute. Then I walked upto Sam.
“Thisis it. I don’t think I really like you and well you aren’t my time. End ofstory, don’t talk to me again.” I turned around to the others.
“Canwe go?” I whispered.
“Sure…But what do we want to do?” Rose said.
“Youguys can sleep over at my house. Let me call Aunt Sue.” After a short talk Aunt Sue said itwould be fine.
Theothers called their parents who said it would also be fine.
Theothers said good-bye to the boys and we left them.
Aftermy friends had picked up their stuff we drove to the apartment.
“Badnight?” Aunt Sue asked. We all nodded quietly and slumped into my room.
Afterwe’d washed up and changed we sat down in a circle on my floor.
“Jess?Why did you never tell us?” Emma asked.
Jesslooked at her hands. “I-I didn’t know what to do when I found out. I neverthought it would have to do with my parents.” A tear rolled down her cheek.
Iput my arm around her.
“Wehave to stop them!” I declared.
“Buthow?” Katie asked.
Welooked at each other, this would take the whole night to plan.
(April 12, 2011 - 10:39 am)
Jess-
"First of all we need to find out who exactly is involved with the NAO. Then we need to find the leader. And I know exactly who we need to ask," I started. i remembered my brother at home. He didn't know that his little sister was a target for the national ASSASINATION orginization. He'd kill me for not telling him! That's how I knew I couldn't tell him. "Who?" Emma asked. "The CIA," I said firmly. They looked at me like I was nuts. "How on Earth are we going to get to the CIA?!" Katie asked. "I know a way." I pulled a notebook out of my backpack. "This was my parent's notebook. It gives the location of 7 CIA bases. But the Headquarters happens to be right here in LA." I smiled. "Simple as that." "Well, who's going to drive us? That guy stole our bikes. Remember?" Emma asked. "Easy, my brother has two old bikes in the shed that Matt fixed up last year for free. We can use those." I grinned. "Well, we've got a plan, the question is, when do we go? And how do we know they'll let us in?" Annie asked. "Tomorrow morning. And that'll just have to be left to chance," I said. They looked at me. "Are you sure?" Katie asked. "It's seems like an awfully big chance," she added. "I'm sure. Trust me. Besides, what choice do we have?" She nodded. "Okay, I guess." She didn't sound too sure. "Now, weapons," I said. They stared at me. "We're 14, we don't cary weapons," Annie said. "Says you. But my brother has 4 emergency weapons in his safe. Two guns, two knifes. I'm getting one gun, who wants the other?" "I do," Emma said. "Okay, then Annie and Katie get the knives." We smiled. We were good. We had a plan, weapons, and everything. We were golden. But there was still something. A small spark of dread welling up inside me. Even if we got inside, and they told us what we need to know, how would we know that we wouldn't make the same mistakes the former CIA agents did? We were only 14, and we weren't trained. They had been older and more experienced. How did we know we wouldn't make their mistakes?
(April 12, 2011 - 5:46 pm)
There is one thing I object to. Katie soooo has weapons. She has a beautiful wooden bow and arrows with a quiver at home. And the afore-mentioned knife. It is actually a pocket knife, you know the kind that folds up, but it's one of the better ones that also has a lot of other little gadgets on it. I probably should have put that on her profile but I didn't really think about it at the time. And she is 15 and she knows how to use the weapons. She has been in an archery club for years and has competed in competitions. Yeah that is a lot to leave out of her profile but as I said before I didn't think about it. Everything else you wrote was great.
(April 12, 2011 - 8:02 pm)
WW had a thread on DtE about ads. He said ya'll need an evil character. I have a good idea for a female one.
Maybe I can be the evil ex-girlfriend of the janitor (maybe he's like 30) and I murdered him, and one of the girls is next. So if you want, I could be the murderer. But here's the cool twist... I am suspected of the murder, but I am only supposed to kill the girl, not the janitor, one of my acomplices killed him. But no one ever convicts me. All my other acomplices get convicted, but I never do. Everyone thinks they killed him for love --me--but that's not true. They know a deep dark secret... and we believe they might tell someone.
Good idea?? Oh, and my name on that is, Cara...
Admin, for this story is it innappropriate??????
I think a murder mystery is OK.
Admin
(April 12, 2011 - 5:15 pm)
@Mariah- Sure you can be the murderer. When you say you were only supposed to kill the girl do you mean Jess?
@Elizabeth D.- Yeah you can use your own weapon.
(April 13, 2011 - 11:46 am)
Yes, sorry, I forgot her name.
Thanks Admin! *Gives big bear hug*
(April 13, 2011 - 3:32 pm)
Annie
I turned the small knife over in my hands. It was light but strong and I felt myself glue to it. This was a perfect weapon.
“How the heck are we going to get into the CIA? And I mean we don’t have any idea which rooms are which!” I exclaimed.
“Problem solved. We’re going to my house tomorrow. I have to show you something. Everything’s there!” Jess answered.
“But the people are following us… How will we get out without them noticing?” Rose inquired.
“I know! You know how much my brother likes repairing stuff! He has two old motor scooters in the garage. They’re fixed.” Jess replied confidently.
“They’ll still know who we are…” Emma sounded doubtful.
“We’ll disguise ourselves as older girls. We need wigs, adult clothes and some accessories. When will we leave?” Katie said.
“Next weekend. By that time everything will be ready.” Jess said in reply.
“But this could take longer than a few days…” I started to say.
“It shouldn’t… Matt will contact the police and be worried but you know…”
“You guys tell your parents you’re sleeping at my house and I’ll tell my parents that I’m sleeping at Rose’s house.” Katie told us.
“Ok, tomorrow we’ll go to Jess’s house and see what she wants to show us and maybe we can fit in a little shopping and planning. That it?”
The others nodded. Then we lay down and started to talk about other things.
(April 13, 2011 - 1:32 pm)
Okay, I would like to jump back in, but where do you think that Emma should come in?
(April 13, 2011 - 5:53 pm)
You could write about her and the rest of them returning to there respective houses and then all going to Jess' house. If you read the last post you will know why they were going to Jess' house and you can write about what they do there.
(April 13, 2011 - 10:21 pm)
Ditto.
(April 14, 2011 - 7:27 am)
Maybe...but I don't think I could just jump right into there. I think Emma has to fit perfectly into the story somehow, I just don't know WHERE! Any suggestions???
(April 14, 2011 - 8:04 am)
Princess P., Emma has been in the story a lot, and all you have to do is post as if you have all this time. :D
Jess-
The next day I woke up first. Emma was completely spread out, and Katie and Annie looked like sisters sleeping together. It was kinda funny. "Hey, guys, get up. Annie's aunt says breakfast's ready." Slowly they got up, then we went downstairs to pancakes and waffles. I grabbed a waffle, some strawberries, whip cream, and syrup. "What are you gonna do with that?" Katie asked. "Make food," I said. I put the cut-up strawberries all over the waffle, then I put a layer of whip cream, then a layer of syrup. Then I cut it in half, then into 4 pieces. I bit into one of the pieces. "Yum!" Everybody laughed.
Okay, I'm having HUGE writer's block! Somebody please help!
(April 14, 2011 - 7:24 pm)