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Hero/villian ratings!
Hero/villian ratings!
Here is where we post about our heroes and villians, and ask the other Chatterboxers what they would rate them from 1-10, 1 being "A flop" and 10 being "EPICNESS!!!" I'll start. Note: We are not allowed to rate our own heroes and villians, since we are almost certainly biased enough to give them 10.
HERO
Name: Kartani.
Age: 10.
Mission: To save the Land of Waterfalls, a land of cliffs and waterfalls where large numbers of wolves reside in safety, from The Disaster.
Allies: She has a lot of 'em. :S I will name the most important four. Rolford-her friend since she was a baby, also a wolf-heart; Satyiyi-a water nymph princess; Starspirit-an extremely mischievous spellwolf (the wolf equivalent of a wizard); and Nightsong-Kartani's wolf friend.
Special powers: Can turn into a gray wolf at will, and thus has enhanced hearing and smell. Can speak with animals.
Personality-Slightly aloof and wary, but friendly once you get to know her. Willing to do anything for her friends. Slightly hot-tempered and impatient.
Physical appearance: As a human: Long black hair, dark blue eyes with flecks of gold, tanned skin. As a wolf: Large, gray fur, golden eyes.
History: Both her parents were wolf-hearts, but died when she was eight months, so she grew up in an orphanage knowing nothing of her origins. One night she was told by Nightsong that her destiny was to save the Land of Waterfalls-and that's how she ended up going on a journey.
Other names: Wolf name: Gara (means loner in Karen, the language of the wolf gods); The One (in an ancient prophecy foretelling The Disaster).
VILLIAN
Name: Wackler.
Age: Um...never thought about it...about 40.
Mission: To stop Kartani from saving the Land of Waterfalls and capture Starspirit.
Allies: Minions, in this case, would be a more accurate term. Anyway, his minions are an army of cougar-hearts, humans who can turn into cougars.
Special powers: Almost the same as Kartani, except for being able to turn ino a cougar.
Personality: Greedy, cunning, sinister, ruthless, and cruel.
Physical appearance: As a human: Short, fat, and balding, with gray eyes. As a cougar: Huge and powerful, with tanned fur and bright amber eyes.
History: How should I know? Heh heh. But I do know that he murdered Kartani's parents, without knowing that they had children.
Other names: Cougar name: Tarag (don't ask me what it means, I'm not really developing the cougar god language at the moment), Terror of the South (earned after numerous terrible deeds done as a cougar).
So? Ratings? Please?
Here are a couple more rules: 1. You may post as many hero/villian pairs, but one at a time, please. 2. The hero and the villian must be involved in the same story.
Andy P. C. says zagv.
~Wolfgirl67 signing off.
P.S. I know I've been posting a lot recently, but when one has an idea...*shrugs helplessly*
submitted by Wolfgirl67, age 12, Here.
(November 21, 2010 - 8:49 pm)
(November 21, 2010 - 8:49 pm)
Picture I drew of Zphixa with her name in the language I created:
(December 12, 2010 - 4:26 pm)
O.O...wow...
(December 13, 2010 - 4:02 pm)
Yea... could be better.
(December 14, 2010 - 6:56 pm)
Try pronouncing Zphixa like Spinxa, minus the n. So, it'd be Sphixa, but with a z like s. I know, it's cmplicated. But its definely an accent/dialect thing, seeing as the language is so like english.
HERO
Name: Abby
Age: Starts out at 15 and gets older as the story progresses
Mission: To stop Nico Le from taking over
Allies: The secret organization of Scorceresses *runs to check notes* Carrie, Kayla, Joyce Aletta.
Special powers: She is a scorceress, a human with
Personality: A good leader, but stubborn. And she won't admit that she might be wrong, even when she has doubts. This is good and bad.
Physical appearance: Tall with a thin face, rabit ears, and light layered blond hair; sholder-length on the right, and sloping up to bottom-of-ear-length on the left, with side bangs on the right; pale gray-blue eyes and a quarter-sized birthmark
History: like all scorceresses, she was identified at age 12 as magical and taken away from her family so she wouldn't be killed by the 'government'
Other names: none
Villian:
coming later
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(December 18, 2010 - 1:52 am)
8! She seems to have a unique(ish) personality. Well, maybe not unique but one worth reading about. And her description is good.
(December 20, 2010 - 1:41 pm)
VILLIAN
Name: NicoLe (closest I can figure out about how to write the pronunciation: Neeco Lee)
Age: same as Abby
Mission: To bring the government under her control, not knowing the damage she's creating.
Allies: Her 'friends' aka folowers (scorcereses), and a powerful sorcerer.
Special powers: is a scorceress of dark magic
Personality: Think Anikin Skywalker/Darth Vader
Physical appearance: (drawing by me) 1; left side of left leg 2; back side of left leg 3; alternate foot covering 4; bottom of foot 5; reserve staff 6; armour including redgold* helmet, redgold top piece, redgold forearm, leg, and foot coverings, redgold and lymsilver** skirt, and lymsilver chain mail 7; staff 8; alternate forarm covering (redgold)
*gold with reddish hue, the only gold in Trill, then an unamed giant city with a crumbling government **pronounced: 'lime silver,' silver with greenish hue, the only silver in Trill
History: Was taken to become a scorceress, saw what she thought was the only way to overthrow the government to create a 'better' place with a 'stronger' government, and turned to dark magic to accompish her twisted goals.
Other names: Nicole
(December 20, 2010 - 12:15 pm)
Ratings for Nico Le?
(December 24, 2010 - 12:44 pm)
@Kat: Abby: 8, NicoLe: 9-she seems very interesting! :)
OK, new rule: All further ratings have to be accompanied by the title of the book. If you haven't posted the title, just reply to your earlier post with the title. :)
The Starspirit Series (this is a series of fanfiction that I write about Mewtwo. It also happens to be my imaginary world).
HERO (technically there are lots of these, including me, but Starspirit is the main one, so I'll just do his profile.)
Name: Starspirit
Age: 21
Species: Mewtwo
Mission: To avoid being captured by Giovanni, stop him from taking over the world, and help Wolfgirl (moi) with various other problems affecting the animal world.
Allies: He has a lot of 'em. :S There's me, Vivian (his wife), his three sons and two daughters, Bagheera, Tarayla, and their two sons and two daughters, Laputi, Natyra, and their son, his three grandsons and one granddaughter, various pets, wolverine army, Giovanni's Persian, and this girl called Felicia Silver.
Special powers: Able to speak to animals, amazing fighting skills, psychic powers (telekinetic, able to fly, telepathic), able to run at speeds up to 50mps (miles per second, for those who don't know), incredibly strong, very agile, and a very good pickpocket-if that counts as a power.
Personality: A prankster to the tenth degree. Very fond of wisecracks and can come up with one to just about everything. Likes eating and sleeping and eating and sleeping...despite this, he really is a very nice guy. Courageous and strong-willed to the point of being reckless and stubborn. Very loyal-willing to give up his own freedom in exchange for the freedom of people he cares about. When you need him to be, he is a very strong leader. Hot-tempered and very easily offended. Proud and almost a little bit conceited. He's also claustrophobic.
Physical appearance: He's kind of hard to describe. Look him up on Wikipedia-but look for the pictures of him in the anime. (Make sure you look up "Mewtwo" and not "Starspirit"!)
History: Some scientists discovered a fossil of Mew and created Starspirit for Giovanni, who wanted to take over the world using his amazing powers.
Other names: SKP (his initials; sounds like "Escapee" if you say it really fast); Mewtwo (his old name, till he changed it), Star, Foxface (an affectionate name I use for him).
VILLIAN
Name: Giovanni.
Age: Um...never thought about it...about 40.
Mission: To take over the world using the Mewtwos' powers. This obviously does not go over well with the Mewtwos-they can't stand being controlled.
Allies: Minions, more like. The entire team of Team Rocket. His second-in-command is this really nasty person called Black Tulip.
Special powers: Evil genius. 'Nuff said.
Personality: Sadistic, ruthless, and cruel. As Starspirit likes to say, "He either was born without a conscience, or he killed it early on."
Physical appearance: Can we not go into detail about this? Thinking about Giovanni makes me ill. Tall-ish, brown hair, hideous orange suit.
History: How should I know? Heh heh. I do know that he inherited the position of Team Rocket leader from his mother.
Other names: None.
So, ratings please!
Andy P. C. says dwkk.
~Wolfgirl67 signing off.
(January 8, 2011 - 10:22 pm)
"Thinking about Giovanni makes me ill. Tall-ish, brown hair, hideous orange suit."
DO use a variation on this sentence in your story. It made me crack up as soon as I read it. Epic.
(January 17, 2011 - 7:58 pm)
By the way, Kartani and Wackler are the hero and villian in Kartani, which is my longest novel yet. :)
Andy P. C. says mfgx.
~Wolfgirl67 signing off.
(January 9, 2011 - 11:15 pm)
@Wolfgirl67: Starspirit, 7; Giovanni, 8.
Remember Me; The Two Heroes; The Kashiden; Are a few of the titles in my, The Book Of Trilll chronicals.
(June 10, 2011 - 1:04 pm)