As a side note, 'kh' = a sound similar to both k and h, but is somewhere in between. The 'r's also are always a hard / rolled r-sound(unless doubled). Then, for words with 'a' it sounds like ah, as in "gulash" and the addition of the h in 'ah' just means that it isn't a stressed syllable.

Yay! Thanks for working so hard on this, Jaybells! The language feels very natural for a desert civilization. A few questions for pronunciation, since I'm not as familiar with languages as you: ñ is said "nya" like Spanish, right? And for words like Tash'tha (Grain/corn/maize/wheat/rice), does the  ' show that it's two syllables, or does it show something else? 

I'd love to see your character designs! I'm planning to follow the main story, so those would probably apply.

Water dying and being reborn as a darker deity would be cool, or maybe just a flip side, distinguishing winter/summer every year by something that changes the opinion/emotion of Water for that time. Or summer could be Water having a sore throat or hibernating or something, and winter being the opposite.

For Fire I was thinking it could be an offshoot of Sky because if she gets really angry maybe lightning could shoot around. That would be convenient for Glass (if she exists) because lightning + sand makes glass. However Lightning could also be a minor deity and Fire could be born from Earth like the sun, rising every day to join Sky but being killed by an irate Earth yet made anew each day with fresh hope. We could also incorporate some winter/summer in there, like the days are shorter when the cold makes Earth and Sky grumpier while Water becomes more feisty.

Kind of like Egypten mythology, we could have more than one myth that hopelessly intersect until nobody knows who's who and what's when and how the where became the it because whosis whatsis and who. (That's supposed to make no sense, I'm sorry if it does). That would allow for different story plots or twists on religion.

Female sounds good for Sky and Earth/Sand, because those are kind of the "creators." For Water I was thinking gender neutral or fluid, because Water seems kind of shifty (for example high tide and low tide, ice liquid and gas, or other such possible differences). Fire also seems that way, kind of ever-changing. Also, I'm supportive of a compleately new gender + reproductive system, that would be interesting (and might make sense, cause they're gods and therefore might not subscribe to the typical systems humans/other creatures have).

What are you thinking for semi-beasts? In egyptian mythology, there's Ammit the Devourer who weighs the feather and the dead's heart to tell if they've sinned or not. Would that count as a deity, or just an immortal pet-type creature? Contrariwise, there could be semi-beast gods/immortals that humans/whoever lives on whatever main planet (ex. Serai) could still view as monstorus, but gods view as normal. We could have dffering points of view and prejudices based on species/location.

Also the language is awesome! Were you thinking it would be for just humans/main species or would the gods use it too?

General questions to ponder:

- Where would the deities live? On some secluded place, think Mount Olympus with the greeks, or would they live in human/main species reincarnations down on Earth? It sounds like they're the Earth and Sky, so they could just be sitting there, or they could have mini models that could come talk.

- Would the gods control the human/main species's stories? Is everything planned out or is it up to the characters. In some books the gods are up in their heaven-place playing dice and betting with the souls of the mortals on the ground. That introduces an interesting question of being able to influence the gods or thwart death.

- How many deities do we want? One for each minor event, i.e. Fire and Lightning being seperate, or just one for all forms of fire? What is considered "important" enough to have it's own deity? 

A pro for clay would be durability. It would be a cruder place to write, but it would last longer. I also like papyrus-like material, although what would they use for ink? Maybe some kind of animal/berry in the area could produce it when crushed.

I remember we talked breifly about the peoples living underwater, so that might lead to an interesting recording system, like inputting sound into bubbles and storing them in a room so you can stick your head in the bubble and hear the story/recording.

I think a phonetic alphabet would be simpler, but I like symbolic better, especially if it would be on clay, as writing might be time consuming. Also kanji looks really cool when written out, but that's kind of beyond the point.

I like how different alphabets would go with different social status, kind of like witheld information by the upper class. We could also have different families specilize in different things, like one family makes weapons and another is scribes (kind of like trades or guilds, not necessarily by blood).

Ha, that's great! 

Okay, I read through all that, and it basically sounds good to me. I'm really busy right now, so I can't spend too much time on this, sorry. 

I like the idea of having the main 3 deities, then having lesser spirits that are like their children, or whatever we'll call them. There could even be an unknown number of lesser spirits, kind of like there was a temple to an "unknown god" in Athens, in case they forgot anyone. The lesser spirits wouldn't be worshipped, but they would be revered to some extent. 

I've never tried making a language using symbolic letters. It sounds so cool, but like Hex said, it would be a lot of work. Whatever best fits our purpose! The language can also evolve, so we don't necessarily need to decide everything right now. 

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