Emily and Ema

Chatterbox: Inkwell

Emily and Ema

Emily and Ema are together in a fantasy short story.

Rules:
1. No fighting.
2. No taking over the story.  Work it out with your partner so you can both do the story equally.
3. Keep the story PG.
4. GloWorm says to always keep to your genre, but I disagree: if you really want to, change genres.
Thank you very much! :)

submitted by BellaTrix ✌ ♡
(May 10, 2009 - 8:08 am)

Mari groaned. Not when she had company! Now, of all times, Kanti had to come bother her. She looked at Jacob. "It seems that we have visitors," she said through tightly pressed lips. Mari trudged to the door, but stood stock-still, wondering if she should actually open it. The bottle shook again, harder this time. She scrunched her forehead in frustration and reached out to grab the door handle.

 

It started to turn, all by itself. The door opened, and in flew Kanti. Her icy blue eyes and dark, pointed bangs implied that she was not a fairy people wanted to deal with. Kanti had on her usual clothing- a rose petal blouse trimmed with golden canvas and green dyed dress pants. Her "work" outfit, Mari thought. Some work she does. In a sugary voice, Kanti said, "Hello, Maaaaari. Long time, no see, yes? My, that Debate certainly was a nice one, although it was rather boring, the way your side dragged it out, always contradicting my team. Too bad you lost, kid." She tapped Mari lightly on the nose. "But of course, nobody could prove it. It might as well have been a tie." Kanti fake-brightened. "Guess what? The mayor has planned a "sequel", as you may call it, to today's Debate. You better try hard, Maaaaari. Maybe you'll beat me. But I think not."

 

Mari's eyes narrowed. "You know Kanti," she said sarcastically. "It does my heart good to have unwelcome neighbors drop in, right when I'm trying to relax after a terrific Debate. Maybe some people I know should do that more often. Mmm."

 

Kanti didn't reply, and glanced innocently around the room. She picked at the odds and ends of the insulating fabics. "Tacky little place you've got here." Her eyes rested on Jacob, leaning weakly on the wall, trying to hide, apparently intimidated. "Why, hello there! Who are you?" Without waiting for an answer, she turned back to Mari. "Oh, and who is this? A new boy?"

 

 

((((That's as much as a cliffhanger as I could manage. :) ))))

 

 

submitted by Ema, age 11, NY
(June 8, 2009 - 4:56 pm)

Mari glanced at Jacob, mentally begging him not to back down. To stand up for himself. Maybe there was something in telepathy after all - he seemed to get the hint one way or another. He stood up straighter and said in the most sickeningly polite tone he could muster, with a saucy tilt of his head, "Well hello yourself! Mari, do hand your guest a towel. It appears a bird chose her face as an unfortunate target. Won't you, there's a dear."

 

His taunting tone acted like a whip on Kanti. Her face hardened and her eyes narrowed into stony slits of frost. She tried to match his syrupy tone but was sadly lacking in self-control. Her voice shook with anger. "Don't display your alarm so plainly, child."  She lifted her arm, fingers stiffened, and all but shouted a holding spell at Jacob, her voice grating and gravelly with fury. He smiled condescendingly and flicked a single finger at her. In an instant the holding spell was gone and had been replaced by a much stronger one on Kanti. Jacob began walking grimly toward her, punctuating each slow, ponderous step with a scathing sentence. 

 

"Child, you said? Child? Well, consider your position, Kanti. You know nothing about me. You don't know my name or my age or where I come from. For all you know, I could be one of the NINE!" Here his voice thundered through the bottle and Mari shrank against the wall, suddenly conscious that her guest had greater powers than she had suspected, whether or not his threat was true. She didn't think it was - he looked too young. "But you didn't consider that, did you? No, you felt it necessary to insult a guest the way no proper fairy would to regain your sense of self esteem. Congratualtions. You've just made a complete and utter fool of yourself." By now he was right in front of Kanti, and she was backed against the door of the bottle, trembling like a frail leaf. He smiled contemptuously and turned away, scorn packed into every fiber of his bearing. "Fortunately for you, I'm not one of the Nine. But...." Here he let the silence hang ominously and stood with his back to Kanti, his hands clasped behind him, bearing regal. He spoke without turning around, each word ringing like a peal of doom. "But my father is!" Kanti and Mari let out simultanious gasps, Kanti's of horror, Mari's of awe that she had entertained the successor to the Council in her own home unawares. There was no doubt that what he said was true. When fairies lied, their wings fluttered and they couldn't stand still, and Jacob looked like he had been carved of granite just now. He spun around and glared fiercely at Kanti, a shrinking coward with all her false bravado gone. His voice was quiet and threatening, layered richly with scorn. "You're a liar and a bully, you who call yourself Kanti. I would suggest you leave. NOW!" She turned and fled through the door in terror, regardless of the rain that had turned to hail. In an instant, she was gone.

 

Mari raised one eyebrow at Jacob. "And why, pray tell, didn't you tell me that before?" She was a little annoyed, even if he was the son of on of the Nine. 

He raised an eyebrow back. "I don't like how people walk on eggshells when they're near me and treat me like I'm made of glass and might explode. I do blow up now and then, like when there's a bully like that one. I should have done something more - she's of the sort that will be bent on revenge now." He wrinkled his nose in an amazingly ordinary way. "It really doesn't make me different from other fairies, you know. Sure, I'm stronger in magic than most, but I can't help that - it's hereditery. Please don't be mad that I didn't tell you, Mari.

 

((Admins, is the spellcheck thing new? Whether or not it is, thanks for putting it in! I was actually about to start a thread to ask for that. Very nice! Thanks! And Ema, my dialogue is usually pretty bad. Sorry if it is here - I'm still having a hard time reading objectively 'cause I just wrote it. :P Dialogue is one of my weakest points. Anywho, that was fun! I like cliffhangers where you can do fun things. Thanks! I just realized that this is getting a bit long for a short story. Maybe for revenge Kanti should go to the king regardless of the Nine or the council deciding the debates. From my point of view, the Nine are the most powerful magicians, and they're a strong force in the fairy government for that reason. I didn't say so, though, so you can change it if you want. My opinions are flexible. :D It's getting late, so I'd better stop before I start to ramble.))

 

-EH

 

 

submitted by Emily H. :), age 13, Sparks, NV
(June 9, 2009 - 11:44 pm)

Ema? Maybe I'm getting paranoid about disappearances, just like the rest of the Chatterbox, but where are you? Please?

 

-A worried EH

submitted by Emily H. :), age 13, Sparks, NV
(June 12, 2009 - 10:59 am)

I'm sorry, but I just wrote four or five really long paragraphs and then my computer froze and erased it all!!!!!!!!!!!Yell Noooo! I don't have time to re-type it but I'll try again later. :( And I had finished it all too!!!!!

submitted by Ema, age 11, NY
(June 12, 2009 - 2:20 pm)

Oh, I'm sorry! Rats! Argh....

 

-EH

submitted by Emily H. :), age 13, Sparks, NV
(June 12, 2009 - 5:00 pm)

I went to 6 Flags up in the Adirondacks, so if you were wondering where I was, then..... yeah. I have to go eat dinner soon but I'll try to start my paragraphs.

 

"Of course I'm not angry with you, Jacob! I would've done the same in your position. You didn't want to attract attention and make me all fluttery and anxious or anything," Mari said.

 

Darn, I have to leave. I'll type more later.

submitted by Ema, age 11, NY
(June 15, 2009 - 5:14 pm)

I was getting a little concerned, but it's not like I was going to call the police and file a missing person report. :D Take your time - this thread isn't going anywhere. I mean, like, past the second page. :D I'm glad you're not abandoning us, that's all. And I was wondering, could I show this to some people? (Ok, so my brother would say that's going over the edge with asking permission, but I'd rather be on the safe side. :P) And could I take our concept and maybe rewrite it? Just take more time, you know? And if I did that, could I enter the finished product in some contests if I gave you credit? (It stinks that I can't really give you credit cause I don't know your full name, but with what I do know. First name, age, state....) Just wondering....

 

-EH the Inquisitive

submitted by Emily H. :), age 13, Sparks, NV
(June 15, 2009 - 11:11 pm)

Yeah, that would be fine with me! And it would be cool if you won! (As long as I had some credit :D)

 

 

Mari paused for a minute, then added, "Not that I would be. I'd be acting the same as I am now even if the king was here." Not waiting for a response, Mari scooped the berries onto a plate and poured a little extra juice on them. Then she reached into the cabinet again and pulled out a large cheese curd and a roll. Mari took a piece of metal and sliced each in half. She put it on the plates. "Here we are," she said as she picked up the plates. "Ahk!" Mari buckled under the weight. It was all she could do to stand up. She staggered over to Jacob and set his plate down. She pulled over another bottlecap and sat down, putting her feet up on a feather. "Ahhh." Mari looked at Jacob and gestured to the food. "Eat," she commanded. "Or else I'll eat it for you."

 

Jacob wholeheartedly grabbed the roll and began stuffing it in his mouth. "Mmm. Dish ish really good, Mari." He finished the roll and began on the berry. It tasted better than it looked. "What'sh dish called?" he asked with his mouth full of berry. "I've gotta recommend dish to my fasher." After he finished the berry, he gulped down the cheese curd. Realizing that Mari was still chewing her roll, he blushed and looked at his hands, embarassed. "I guess I need a little training to become one of the Nine," he said quietly. He tried to defend himself before Mari could say a word. "I was really hungry. Hitting your head does something to your stomach."

 

"I guess," Mari giggled, amused. She stood up and dusted her skirt, scattering bread crumbs all over the floor. "Whoops!" She mumbled a few words and the crumbs flew into the garbage. "There we go. All better."

 

 

 

(((Looks like all this food is making me hungry. Time to go eat lunch! I had my finals today. Or rather, my Social Studies final. It was pretty easy. All we had to do was answer 100 multiple-choice questions, add details about how Stone Age people advanced/ Greek roots/ whatever. Then we had to say what our favorite part and least favorite part of SS was, add suggestions, write about what we're doing over the summer and write an essay (which we got to take home because it didn't count) on the year. Pretty boring. Tomorrow I'm having my math final which is just like a state math test. Whew. )))

submitted by Ema, age 11, NY
(June 18, 2009 - 10:07 am)

Jacob yawned suddenly, hugely. Mari slapped her forehead. "I'm sorry, Jacob! You've got to be tired. Not to mention sore. Go all the way back and take the bottlecape at the end of the bottle. I'll make myself a bed up front here." She tossed him a towel and walked back with him, carrying an acorn cup of steaming water. When she set it down on a chair in the back room, she spoke quietly to him. "And don't be surprised if Kanti tries something tonight. She's petty and vengeful. I just hope she doesn't do anything really stupid. Last time she almost burned down half of Paris. Neimu and his following all had to cast a damping spell." She blushed. "And, well, Kanti was trying to melt the glass of my bottle, so it was getting pretty hot in here. It was all I could do to keep myself cool enough to stay alive." She straightened and walked to the doorway. "All that to say that Kanti will try to get back at me, and you too. You especially, really. Just be warned." She pulled aside the light, silky curtain that formed the door and disappeared behind it.

 

((I've got to stop and go practice piano and make dinner cause my mom's out of town. Sorry it's short. :P))

 

-EH

submitted by Emily H. :), age 13, Sparks, Nv
(June 18, 2009 - 7:08 pm)

Oh no! A cliffhanger!!!! I have to think about this one. I don't have time to write anything tonight, but I'll do something soon. I just wanted to check in so you knew I didn't get abducted by aliens or anything. :)

submitted by Ema, age 11, NY
(June 20, 2009 - 6:24 pm)

Jacob sat still for a while, thinking about what Mari said. "Oh, I'll be ready, Mari. I'll be ready," he murmured. "Kanti might actually be sorry after she deals with me." He cracked his knuckles and laughed. "Jacob," he said to himself. "You are being silly. Kanti is just a small troublemaker who doesn't have the guts to fight against the succesor of one of the Nine. Besides, you don't like to fight. Kanti won't even bother us. I'll sleep very nice and then I'll wake up in the morning with the same color hair in the same place. Don't you worry." He paused. "Ok, I need to stop trying to reassure myself. Nothing is going to happen, I'm just rambling on like I usually do." He curled up in a little ball, closed his eyes and fell asleep.

 

The door of the milk bottle creaked as a fairy tiptoed into the house. All was dark except for the light glow that surrounded the fairy. She looked around. No movement- Mari and Jacob were both deeply asleep. The fairy sneaked over to the wall and began ripping all the cloth down which served as insulation. She muttered a spell and clumped the cloth together in a ball which she squeezed out of the door. The fairy shivered as the room grew icy. "There you go, Mari. Here's a small gift." The fairy flew out of the door and shut it tightly, sealing it with another spell.

 

A few hours later, Mari woke up and shivered, knocking icicles to the ground. Icicles? It's summer. That can't be right. I must be dreaming. She pinched herself and looked around the house. It was covered with frost and must've been very far below freezing. Mari narrowed her eyes when she realized what had happened. Oh, Kanti. It's on.

submitted by Ema, age 11, NY
(June 25, 2009 - 6:30 pm)

Ema, I probably won't be able to get on again today and I'll be at engineering camp the rest of the week, so don't be surprised if my posts are much less frequent. I'll try to get on some still, though.

 

-EH the departing

submitted by Emily H. :), age 13, Sparks, NV
(June 21, 2009 - 9:42 am)

Just to bring it up to the top of the queue..... CoolLaughing

submitted by Ema, age 11, NY
(June 29, 2009 - 7:47 am)

I'm back. I'll continue tomorrow - it's past ten here. :P

 

-EH

submitted by Emily H. :), age 13, Sparks, NV
(June 30, 2009 - 12:07 am)

((Ok, so I'm a little later than "tomorrow" as I said in my last post. Sorry.))

 

Jacob opened his eyes, his vision still bleary. Someone was shaking him, and he was shaking himself. At least, that was the way it seemed. Then he realized that Mari was shaking him a little, and he was shivering so hard that between the two motions, he was practically rolling back and forth. A silvery light danced throught the room; then he saw that the light was reflections reflecting off reflections from ice crystals. He was awake in an instant.

 

He sat up and saw the full extent of the damage the cold had wrecked on the bottle. Without looking at Mari, he stood up and said in a voice grim and icy enough to match the room, "Kanti?" "Kanti," came the affirmation from his friend. He cast an opening spell on the door. Nothing. This can't be only Kanti. His mind raced, remembering the lessons his father had taught him. "Stand back. This might hurt." He raised his arm and began to chant methodically - 

 

"Open door and open wide

Bring the outer world inside.

Open ice and open cold

Let your inner warmth unfold."

 

Over and over, again and again, first forwards, then last line first. Mari was confused. They sounded so... so... childish. Like a jump-rope rhyme. Then again, aren't the rhymes of lore the same way? The spells of healing? Of binding? Of light? They're all like this. In a vain hope, Mari began to whisper the lines with Jacob, adding what force she could. She could feel the power from Jacob, like a river, an elephant, an irrisitible gust of wind. It could do nothing. Hers was a stream, a mouse, the faintest summer breeze. What could it do? 

 

Everything.

 

With the addition of her few drops, her pattering footsteps, her breath of wind, the door, against the will of some mighty binding-spell, began to force its way open. The cold air whoshed out, the ice began to melt. But before the ice melted, it obeyed the spell; that is, it opened. Every crystal unfolded like a blooming flower, a flower of such beauty and clarity it seemed to Mari she had never seen any other blossoms. 

 

And the door was open.

 

((There was more to the freezing-spell and shutting-spell than just Kanti. They've won a major victory here. And you have to figure out how and why. :D But it has to be major.  Really big. If you can't make it really big, can I? Por favor? Pretty please with cherries? And whipped cream? This next part has to be big. And sorry I wrote you into such a corner. I'm not sure what happened - that's just the way the story told itself. Sorry. Does that make sense? :P))

 

-EH

submitted by Emily H. :), age 13, Sparks, NV
(July 1, 2009 - 6:46 pm)