Emily and Ema
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Emily and Ema
Emily and Ema are together in a fantasy short story.
Rules:
1. No fighting.
2. No taking over the story. Work it out with your partner so you can both do the story equally.
3. Keep the story PG.
4. GloWorm says to always keep to your genre, but I disagree: if you really want to, change genres.
Thank you very much! :)
submitted by BellaTrix ✌ ♡
(May 10, 2009 - 8:08 am)
(May 10, 2009 - 8:08 am)
I'm not good with history at all....in fact, we're only up to the Middle Ages in Social Studies. :) Do you think we should have it in a place pretty well known, or do you want it in a country not many people have heard of, like Wales? I don't know if the Seven Year's War affected that country, but you can decide.
(May 21, 2009 - 5:04 pm)
If we do a well known country like Italy, we won't have to explain too much about it. I'll do some research and tell you what I find. And I'm going to be gone from early Monday morning for about a week. I might be able to get on, but don't count on it. We'll see.
(May 23, 2009 - 4:06 pm)
Ok, that's fine. I'll do some research, also. So you'll probably be back next Monday? I like Italy, so maybe we could do that country. Or France would also be an option. Maybe the characters should eat spagetti if we have the story take place in Italy. ;)
(May 26, 2009 - 8:02 am)
Oh and by the way, I'll be brainstorming about the plot but it might take me awhile because I'm working on a fantasy novel of my own and planning a science fiction story so all my ideas might be cross between fantasy and science fiction. But.. doesn't science fiction and fantasy kind of go hand in hand?
What's the LOTR world? Wait...Lord of the Rings? Hahaha sorry!
(May 19, 2009 - 2:55 pm)
I am here, though for how long I don't know. And I'll be back by Sunday afternoon at the latest if I have to go away. Just so you know....
-EH
(May 26, 2009 - 3:30 pm)
Oh Ok. *smiles* :)
(May 28, 2009 - 4:17 pm)
I'm back, Ema. And by the way, France was at war with England then, both in Europe and in the Americas. I like the idea of it being in France - maybe the fairies have some magical ability that could tip the war in France's favor. And Kanti is trying to capture them and sell them to Louis XV, who was king at the time. I'm in favor of beginning now. If we need more research, we'll do it as we go along. You go first. I'd do it, but I have to go in just a minute. :( Anywho, can't wait to see what you write!
-EH
(May 30, 2009 - 5:18 pm)
Yeah, that sounds good! By the way, did France win the war? Just curious because maybe it could have something to do with the story. Whatever that something was. :) If they won, it could......Well I don't know. :) Ok so now that we're practically done with the research, we should start. Who wants to go...... Wait a minute!!! I'm starting? Oh gosh.... I'm having a panic attack. *forgets everything*. No, I'm just kidding. But I have a question about the story before we start. Should the fairies be disguised as normal humans and live in a normal house or should they live in little bark houses in the trees and wear bird feathers, flower petals, leaves and such? Because that would effect the way they live, and I might need to know that when I start.
(June 1, 2009 - 3:00 pm)
No, France didn't win the war. If they had, they probably would have taken England's colonies, which still included the soon-to-be states. That would have drastically affected the formation of the US, as you can imagine. :) And I don't think the fairies should be like normal humans or like the little bark house fairies. It would be easier to do the little-bark-house-living-flower-petal-wearing fairies, but I think it would be cooler to make them be the urban version of that. Living in the cities and such. Wearing leaves, maybe, and discarded scraps of fabric, and living in houses made of rubble - left over wood, metal, and such. Do it how you want, really, (I don't want to monopolize this with my ideas) but I think that would be cool. See, I'm shirking responsibility here by going second. :D Just kidding.
-EH
(June 1, 2009 - 4:55 pm)
Ok, let me get this straight. So the fairies live in a city in France (Paris?) and they sort of recycle usable garbage, right? I'm stalling starting the story with questions....just joking. Ok, here goes nothing. Tell me if I need to fix any major problems because I am not the best starter.
If you walk past the Eiffel Tower, past the chocolate shops, past the old warehouses in France, you'll find yourself by a discarded milk bottle, rimmed with metal and birch bark.....
Mari slipped out of her rose petal heels into some comfy slippers. Ahh, that's better, she thought as she sank into a chair. After a long day discussing France's war, it was nice to relax in her specially made spiderweb loveseat.
I'm sorry, I would write more but I have to go now.
(June 2, 2009 - 2:39 pm)
The glass roof and walls began to let off one sharp ping after another as rain began to slant out of the heavens, glancing off the milk bottle. Mari smiled to herself. She had only just beaten the rain, and Kanti and her friends would be stuck in it. Serve them right, dragging out the debate at the Council like that, she thought.
The round scrap of metal that served her for a door shuddered as something pounded on it. Mari half sat up and called, "Who is it?" but only the rain and more hammerings answered her. Then, through the rain-streaked glass, she saw that it was a bedraggled crow who had caught a gleam of brightness from teh weak sun that refleceted off the door. The crow was pecking at it industriously, but then a burst of wind shook his feathers, followed by a rumble of thunder, and he took off, leaving his prize for his warm, dry nest.
Mari yawned. France was not doing well in the war, and the fairies were worried. If England advanced too far, they could burn Paris, and the fairies, or at least their homes, would go up in smoke with it. They were divided into three factions: Mari's grouping, which believed that they should wait out the war adn stay with their homes and families, only leaving if worst came to worst; Neimu ((you can change that name if you want - it was random because I needed one fast)) and his friends, who advocated deserting Paris and rebuilding in the countryside like some of their more rustic cousins, and, most corntorversial of all, Kanti, who was in favor of revealing their existence to the king and offering their services for protection. Mari's following was the biggest, and Neimu's closest, but it was Kanti's, the smallest, that caused the most problems. she never knew when she was beaten, never would give up a hopeless argument. And while it made her look bad, it also dragged out proceeding drastically.
-EH
(June 3, 2009 - 6:06 pm)
Mari sighed happily. At least Kanti and her group wouldn't be playing any tricks in this weather- their wings would get too wet by the pounding rain and they wouldn't be able to fly quietly. So she didn't need to worry about anything for a day or two.
She gazed out the side of the bottle. A leaf skimmed along the dirt and crashed into a nearby brick. Mari hoped no fairy was trying to use that to get to their house because their wings were basically dead. Hmm. Something was catapulted from the leaf. Mari decided to go check, just to make sure nothing happened.
Mari grabbed some spare pieces of a shattered window. She held it over her head and dashed out into the pouring rain.
Wow, it's pretty rainy out here, she thought. I hope I don't catch a cold. Mari coughed, as if in reply.
Her muscles twitched as they became number and number because of the icy rain slicked all over them. I've got to hurry to that leaf, before I or anybody catches pnemonia.
(June 4, 2009 - 2:47 pm)
The wind slammed Mari against a broken bucket, hard. She bent over, gasping, trying to catch her breath. The leaf spun away in a whirlwind of dancing debris, but the small figure was left behind. Mari bent her head against the wind and trudged forward, her makeshift umbrella forgotten. A newspaper blowing wildly in the wind whoshed over her head draped over the bucket behind her, and a corner slapped her back, soggy from the rain and surprisingly heavy. She stumbled and almost fell, only to find that she was right in front of the motionless fairy.
It was a fairy. There was no doubt about that - it was too small to be anything else. But Mari couldn't even tell if it was male or female, much less alive. Its hair was cut short and ragged, its face tanned and hard from exposure to the elements. Birch-bark trousers and a shirt made from a kind of leaf she didn't even recognize were its only clothing - no shoes, no head covering, not even a jacket for protection against the bitter weather. It didn't stir when Mari touched its shoulder. "Well then, I guess you're coming back with me, whoever you are," she muttered under her breath. The wind was with her now, a good thing, because carrying the limp fairy and trying to stay upright was all she could do. The wind all but moved her itself. In seconds she was at her front door, noting with satisfaction that a sheet from the newspaper was caught against the milk bottle. It sheltered the front door, so she should be able to get herself and her guest inside without soaking and ruining everything. The door slammed behind her, sealing itself well, and the newspaper blew off, shaking the bottle, but Mari's home held fast between the bricks she had braced it with.
Jacob stirred, light breaking through the darkness that had enveloped him for so long. Where?.... What?.... He sat up, amazed that he could. The last thing he remembered was pain - mind-numbing, dulling pain, and crawling under a leaf for shelter while he still had some vestiges of consciousness left. So where.....
He glanced around, mind still fuzzy and slow. Glass walls, ceiling, floor. All round. Blurred, like they were wet. He was in.... well, it looked like a ((what? bottlecap? matchbox? I don't know really how big the fairies are... I'll go with bottlecap, but if you see them differently, let me know. Then again, a matchbox wouldn't fit in a milk bottle. :P)) bottlecap, padded with bits of cloth, scraps of yarn, and a few bits of feather. There as a wall in front of him; more of a curtain, really, bits of everything from canvas to silk patched together. He, living far from civilization as he did, didn't recognize most of the fabrics. Even just the sight of a leaf would have cheered him trememdously.
((Sorry that's so long. I wrote two paragraphs and then really wanted to introduce Jacob. I know that's a name from Twilight, but I've never read the books
and I like the name. If you've read Twilight, please don't make any mental connections, because, as I've never read the books, I can't be basing this Jacob off the character :P And I don't want to monopolize the story, so I'm not writing a word until you've done at least four paragraphs. :D I love to write, so if I start writing a bigger percentage than you wish I would, please (pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease) let me know because it's very possible that I won't realize it. I'm very hard to offend, I assure you, as long as you're not doing something like swearing at me (that does tick me off), and I'm pretty sure that Admins wouldn't let that on the site. Thanks for that, Admins!))
-EH
(June 5, 2009 - 3:23 pm)
Jacob stretched his arms, and immediately regretted it. He winced; he must've broken some bones in the accident. Feebly, Jacob took his legs out the bottlecap and slowly rested his back on a clear, rounded wall. Clear? Rounded? How could that be? Jacob thought. And where am I? How did I get here? All Jacob remebered was that he was walking in an unfamiliar town and rain started falling. He had slipped on a leaf and it had skid down the road. All of a sudden, an object had loomed over him and he crashed into the brick, headfirst. I'm lucky I'm still alive. I could've suffered major head injuries.
Jacob gazed around the shelter. There was a female fairy at the far end of it. She was chopping up berries with a sharpened stick and pouring the remaining juices into a small container. The fairy stuffed the container into a lopsided shelf and started frying the berries in a piece of scrap metal. He sniffed; the food sure didn't smell very good. Jacob softened. Maybe this fairy was trying to prepare a meal for him, even if she didn't have very much food. The food might actually taste good, she just needed to add some seasonings to the berries. Wonder what it's called, he thought. I could've had it before in the country. At least he knew that these fairies had growing plants and they didn't eat any fabrics or animals.
The fairy whirled around and looked at Jacob. He lowered his head guiltily, as if he had done something wrong. She smiled happily. "Hi, I'm Mari! You crashed into a brick and you were knocked unconsious. I brought you into my milk bottle so you didn't die. Luckily for you, I have a surplus of berries- I was treated to dinner last night by a friend. We can have a nice meal." Her braids bounced in excitement. "Who are you? Where do you come from? Fairies around here don't wear your kind of clothes." Mari motioned to his leaf shirt and birch-bark trousers. "And any fairy with a brain would've worn some protection from the weather; didn't you know it was rainy today?" She blushed suddenly. " I'm talking too much, aren't I? Go ahead, your turn."
Jacob replied gruffly, "Um, I'm uh, Jacob. I live out in the country, where I see other fairies only about once every other month at marketday. Yeah, I remember slightly being lifted up. I thought I was dying." He paused, trying desperately to remember Mari's other questions. "I'm wearing a maple leaf shirt and softened birch bark pants. Where I live, it wasn't supposed to rain today. I was just bored and decided to fly to another town. I ended up here. Then poof! Rain came poring down on me. I didn't know what had happened when I fell onto a slippery leaf." Jacob decided to tell Mari that he had no idea where he was. "Where are we? And why are we in this thingy?" He pointed his eyes around the walls.
(((((I have to go now. I would've written more, though. Have you watched the movie Twilight? I hope I'm not making Jacob too much like the Twilight saga Jacob, but I'll check in Breaking Dawn just to be sure. I've read the books, but I'm not obsessed like some people I know....*names a few silently* Yeah, I'm not going to start swearing at you... 1. because you're not writing too much and 2. because I don't like swearing at people and 3. because Admin wouldn't let me :) *calls to Admins* Thanks for that!!! Okay, I'm going to let you write now unless you want me to write more. Bye!)))))
((((PS I previewed it and I'm hoping that I didn't write too much. :) ))))
(June 7, 2009 - 12:33 pm)
((No, you didn't write too much. And I haven't seen the movies or read the books, although I'm considering reading at least the first one just because it's generally a bad idea to form opinions about something you've never experienced.))
Mari laughed. "It's shelter, isn't it? And it works well enough for a house. Is your arm all right? I couldn't tell if you'd been hurt without you being awake."
Jacob winced as he lifted it a little. "I don't know. It hurts, that's for sure. Maybe broken. Can't tell. Let's see...." He trailed off into silence as he held his left hand over his sore right arm. His eyes narrowed in concentration and his forehead wrinkled. His left palm began to glow a little, then the golden, dancing light enveloped his right arm. The flesh of the arm began to turn transparent, the same bright hue as the light. Soon the bones showed through, shining like burnished gold, and sure enough, the translucent skin and muscle showed that they were both broken near the wrist. The larger was snapped clean through, the smaller chipped. Jacob began to murmer softly, and Mari joined in, chanting the healing verses from fairy lore. The glow slowly turned from gold to purple, and there was a blinding flash of green, and the light was gone. Jacob bent over his arm in agony for a moment, then straightened again and lifted it. "There, that's better. I think I'm all right otherwise."
Marie whirled back to the stove. "Good! These are almost done...." She began to flip the berries, one by one, like pancakes. Jacob had to admit that they did smell better after being cooked, and he was hungry. Now Mari began to slide them onto a rounded bit of glass shaped like a bowl. She drizzled the juice she had collected earlier onto them and sprinkled them with a handfull of raw flour from a bag to her left. They did look good. Jacob grinned.
"Like we do with pancakes, only opposite. We fry the flour and put berries on it. I'll try that sometime."
Mari waved a hand at the table set against the wall with its chairs, half the legs longer than the others so that it would sit flat in the bottle. "Have a seat. Best to eat while they're hot." Jacob sat gratefully and they both dug in. The rain had long since stopped, and halfway through the meal, the bottle jerked a little to one side despite the bricks that supported it. Mari jumped up, alarmed. Then through the glass she caught a hint of greenish-orange sparkles in the air. Every fairy left a similar trail behind when it flew, although the color depended on the individual. And Mari knew that particular color all too well.
Kanti!
((Hehe. I wonder what you're going to do with that.... Kind of left you with a cliffhanger, didn't I? *laughs maliciously* You're welcome to do the same to me any time, of course. :D))
-EH
(June 7, 2009 - 3:50 pm)