Chatterbox: Inkwell

Hey, how do you guys like this?  I would love some criticsm.

As i looked deep into his eyes, my heart skipped a beat.  "Scar," i choked out.  I've been hunting him down ever since he kidnapped my husband.  "That's right, Michelle.  I got you a present."  With those words, he kicked over the lifeless body of my husband.  Everything turned black as I wailed to the darkening clouds my grief.  Scar would pay.