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Hey, how do you guys like this? I would love some criticsm.
As i looked deep into his eyes, my heart skipped a beat. "Scar," i choked out. I've been hunting him down ever since he kidnapped my husband. "That's right, Michelle. I got you a present." With those words, he kicked over the lifeless body of my husband. Everything turned black as I wailed to the darkening clouds my grief. Scar would pay.
submitted by Leah G., age 12, Saline, MI
(February 2, 2009 - 9:02 pm)
(February 2, 2009 - 9:02 pm)
YIKES!!!!!!!!! It's really good!!!!!!! :)
(February 3, 2009 - 12:58 pm)
WOW!!!!!!!!!!! That's REALLY REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(February 3, 2009 - 4:32 pm)
That's REALLY good. I give it a double thumbs up!!!! :) Do you know Sam M. from Saline, MI? He's also on Chatterbox. Are you new here? If so, welcome! I really like your writing! Is it part of a longer story you're working on?
(February 3, 2009 - 5:09 pm)
Dear Allison P.
I'M NOT A BOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
No offense or anything. Many people have made that mistake. Everything's cool.
(February 3, 2009 - 7:13 pm)
Dear Sam,
Sorry! Double sorry! Triple sorry!!!! *hides under couch*
(February 4, 2009 - 3:54 pm)
Oh... Well, Hi!!!!!!! I am ashamed to say, I thought you were a boy, too. Probably because my brother's name is Sam M. :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(February 4, 2009 - 4:14 pm)
Whoops! I thought you were a boy, too. Sorry!
(February 4, 2009 - 6:15 pm)
IT is part of a story i m working on. In fact, it's part of the fourth book to my series. By the way, Sam M. is a girl. She's one of my bestest friends
(February 4, 2009 - 3:35 pm)
That's cool. You're lucky to have a best friend. I haven't had a real best friend (aside from my cousin) since third grade. What's it like? I... well, I kinda forgot.
(February 4, 2009 - 11:43 pm)
Too bad you don't live in Saline. We could definetly be best friends. Hey, go to Allison's poem down to the I'm waitng. It's awesome!
(February 5, 2009 - 7:46 pm)
:D :D :D :D :D
(February 16, 2009 - 2:02 pm)
I'm on at the same time as Allison!
(February 3, 2009 - 5:16 pm)
That's great!! :D:D:D Will we see more??? :):)
(February 3, 2009 - 5:17 pm)
LEAH!!!!!! Is this for your 4th book? It is good! Will you please go to the Role playing story and write some for the story? Hope you do!
(February 3, 2009 - 5:42 pm)
What?????? Huh??????
(February 5, 2009 - 7:48 pm)