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Royal Flames

Alright, so I am trying to write a story right now, but would love your constructive criticism/tips/advice. I'm not posting under my original CB name.. Just... Because. But you can guess if you'd like. Here's the first part of the story: 

A fifteen year old girl panted as she darted through the woods, traveling over fallen logs and exposed roots. Glancing back, she saw five men in uniform running after her. 

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Harry Potter RP

We have not done this in like a thousand years!!!!!!!!! I am craving a Harry Potter RP So I decided to make one. But, there are rules...... 

Rules:

1) Have Fun!!!!

2) No outrageous magic. But you can have like, parseltongue but only if you are in Slytherin. 

3) Don't be like "OMG! VOLDEMORT IS COMING!" Because we are doing time line when Voldemort was Tom Riddle, and Harry's Parents, and Snape are in their 1st year.

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Magic Solo write. 

I got this crazy idea about this solo write, it is were these orphans get powers by a radio active thingy mabober. When the radio active thingy mabober (If someone has a better idea on what to call the radio active thingy mabober, tell me) passes by the orphans the radio active eaves are the most powerful and it gives them powers. When they become teens they discover the powers, and if the radio active thingy mabober is to powerful on the orphans they turn evilish since they can't control the power. So the charrie....

Name:

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Short Story Contest

The prize is making the MC in my next big writing project.

Rules:

Must be less than 200 words.

Must have some character developement

Must be sci-fi

What I will be judging:

Character development

Twist(s)

Is it Sci-Fi?

Length. I would like a very, very short story to win. 

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Hogwarts/Harry Potter RP

So, I went through some of the "old" threads, and I found that Harry Potter RPs were really popular. So I thought we could do one. But there is a tiny thing I am doing in this RP, the time line will be when Harry's Parents, Snape, Draco's Parents, and Ron's parents will be little 1st years. Voldomort is Tom Riddle, and he is prefect of Slytherin, with his little death eaters. Oh! Also Slughorn will be there as potions master. I can't wait!!!! Here is the charrie:

Name:

Year:

House:

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So, I was looking at the old threads and I found out that Harry Potter RPs were really popular! So I am going to bring it back to 'life'! The time line will be when Harry's Parents were a 1st year. So that means NO Voldemort, but there will be a Tom Riddle in his 5th year. There is a group in the Slytherin house that is called 'death eaters' and Tom is thier leader. Oh! Slughorn will be there too as a Professor. Snape will be a little 1st year because he was in the same year as Lilly and James. Yes, you can be friends with the charecters. So, here is the charrie:

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Magic of the Clans RP

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So, a lot of the RP's that people liked are kinda 'dead' so I thought we could bring back some of the RP's that 'died'. Anyone with me? So, like the Spirit Animal RP,  Magic Academy RP, or Harry Potter RP, or WhisperStone RP. Anyone want the same thing? Thank you.

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Impersonator--

You know what? We'll just ignore you. Chaos will never be on the CB again. We're not going to make any more posts against you, to show that you can't cause any chaos.

I can understand somebody impersonating somebody to say that they were coming back because they missed that person, but THIS!?

We all deserve fair and kind treatment.

Let's end this with this thread. 

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Does anyone like this line? "As the boy walked down the dusty road, he pondered what the fortune teller had told him: What lies ahead was also behind. What did it mean? Did it have something to do with Sara, whom he accidentally caused to disappear?  Or his sister, who's name he didn't even know? He needed to know more: Where was his mother? Who was his sister? What did the fortune teller mean? Are ladybugs edible? What on earth was he doing, here, at this run down farm? When will Sara come back???