Chatterbox: Inkwell

Does anyone like this line? "As the boy walked down the dusty road, he pondered what the fortune teller had told him: What lies ahead was also behind. What did it mean? Did it have something to do with Sara, whom he accidentally caused to disappear?  Or his sister, who's name he didn't even know? He needed to know more: Where was his mother? Who was his sister? What did the fortune teller mean? Are ladybugs edible? What on earth was he doing, here, at this run down farm? When will Sara come back??? Feeling angry and irritable, he slumped down on an old hay sack and began to eat his sandwich. Sandwich, sandwich, sandwich... Sara, Sara, Sara. He began to cry. Everything was wrong. He quit. The world was doomed."