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IF YOUR NAME IS NOT JWYN OR AGENT WINTER, AND YOU WOULD NOT LIKE TO RUIN THE SURPRISE OF AN UPCOMING SKI LODGE PLOT, PLEASE STEER CLEAR OF THIS THREAD.
THANK YOU.
-Nobody in particular
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(July 16, 2018 - 8:27 pm)
(July 16, 2018 - 8:27 pm)
That is an interesting idea... although lets leave out the part where I die :D
Did you see that in the Dream Ski Lodge, I was the first to die again? Do I die that easily? Anyway,
I will try to make some sort of a start to it based on that. Are you having fun with this AW? This is supposed to be fun. Do what you can, and I'll color it in. No need to stress. Okey then. Um.
~Jwyn Out~
Jwyn, concerning your new comment to Inkwell, I'm waiting to hear from another editor if OK to post it all. I've always thought that is a very fine publication. It may not be till early next week that we make the decision if OK to post. There might be a problem with the selfies.
Admin
(September 15, 2018 - 10:22 am)
I'm having a lot of fun with this! I just don't have a lot of time to write. I'll post more of the Day 2 outline later, but I need to eat dinner right now, so bye!
(September 15, 2018 - 6:19 pm)
Ok!
(September 15, 2018 - 7:51 pm)
@Admin,
Ok! No problem if it isn't permitted, but I just thought it was an appropriate thing to put here. Thank you so much for considering!
(September 15, 2018 - 6:49 pm)
Uh... what? What was that about?
(September 15, 2018 - 8:45 pm)
Just a question I asked one of the admins. It had nothing to do with this thread.
(September 17, 2018 - 1:54 pm)
Oh, okay. Just wondering. Is there anything else you need me to do right now? I'm sorry I haven't been able to do much lately, but I am SO busy. I'll try to write more soon, though!
(September 17, 2018 - 3:31 pm)
Um... Ideas are very helpful. I'll try to put some things together. The annoying thing about ski lodges is that you have to make them up after you start them and you can't make the next day until you know what happens in the prevous one. I was hoping we could do an every-other-day type of writing basis, but things have thickened, so hopefully we can work something out. If you have any other plot ideas, that would be super helpful, and I'll try writing a draft when I have some free time. Just do what you can. The school year is so hectic, I don't think anyone blames us for taking a bit. You are awesome AW!!! ;)
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'atta boy? She isn't a boy, Elli
(September 21, 2018 - 11:17 am)
Well, let's see. Maybe after the first victim dies, the CBers (minus either Jwyn, Agent Winter, or both, of course) try to investigate, but the hosts chase them off (maybe to change back into their CBer clothes?). There could always be a description of how the body looks, like "He/she/they (I forgot the gender of the first victim) looked like they were trying to defend themselves when they died" or "They looked so innocent (or maybe, like, helpless) that (whoever is looking at them) felt sorry for them" or something like that. I don't know, I really like descriptions XD After that, I don't know, what do you think?
(September 21, 2018 - 5:16 pm)
Great ideas! I was telling my dad about this story, and he gave me a great suggestion: What if we had somebody 'die', the way you suggested, and then everyone is too upset to stay in the room, so they find the hosts to tell them, and when they get back, the body is gone. Or we could have the hosts 'take the body out of the room' and in reality the person is still alive. Gotta go now, but I like your suggestions!
(September 23, 2018 - 2:28 pm)
That's a really good idea! I love the fake death, and I don't think that's been done in recent memory outside of Chaan A.'s ski lodge.
(September 24, 2018 - 7:32 am)
Good point. I think I'll definitely write that in then. Perhaps someone will go missing and the next day they'll be found dead. Just so we can eliminate someone. Or something. I'll get to it as soon as I can.
(September 25, 2018 - 2:31 pm)
Cool! Anything else you need me to write for Day 2? Sorry I didn't do anything today, but I was busy with school and Tae Kwon Do (which was brutal, by the way-- we were doing side kicks in slow motion, and we literally had to hold our legs in the air for ten seconds, ten times on each leg!! Let's just say most of the things going through my head while I was doing that were not appropriate for the Chatterbox.)
(September 25, 2018 - 8:18 pm)
Yeesh. That sounds awful. Sometimes in my ballet class we do ridiculously long developés and ronde de jambe en l'air (basically holding our leg out at 90 degrees and moving it around to the back and retiré very very slowly) but not nearly that long (ok, maybe). I have a break week for school, so I should be able to get most of the writing done. If you have any more ideas, that may be helpful, but I think I have enough to work with at the moment.
(September 27, 2018 - 10:45 am)
'Kay. Thanks for the sympathy, btw. :) I'm glad I don't do ballet anymore XD
What do you think would be a good idea to do after the death? I mean, I've seen some ski lodges that go really over-the-top dramatic after someone dies, and some that are really super-casual about the deaths (like, someone dies and then everyone goes back to normal in the next paragraph with like, no reaction to the death). I think we should find a balance between those spots, but I'm not sure how exactly we should find that balance. Any ideas? (I know I'm supposed to be coming up with the ideas, but I'm kind of stuck and also really busy. Sorry, I'll stop making lame excuses now.)
(September 27, 2018 - 12:35 pm)