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IF YOUR NAME IS NOT JWYN OR AGENT WINTER, AND YOU WOULD NOT LIKE TO RUIN THE SURPRISE OF AN UPCOMING SKI LODGE PLOT, PLEASE STEER CLEAR OF THIS THREAD.
THANK YOU.
-Nobody in particular
submitted by Spoiler Alert!!!!!!!, Secret Discussion
(July 16, 2018 - 8:27 pm)
(July 16, 2018 - 8:27 pm)
I hopes you’d like it! That’s kinda how I’d imagine myself, so I just expressed it in both of us I guess. That sounds so weird idk. XD
And I don’t think we should be in the drawing for the murderer. Or should we? I’m still on the fence
We also need a list of possible death causes too. And some plot ideas. I think we should alternate writing days, though we can brainstorm ideas for all of them. And we need to keep in mind the list of things people want to do.
(August 7, 2018 - 6:50 pm)
Yeah, I don't think it would make a lot of sense to have us in the drawing for murderer, either. I could make a list of possible death causes, if you wanted me to.
(August 8, 2018 - 1:44 pm)
That would be great! I'll draw for murderer if that's all right with you. Hopefully it works out...
I hope you don't mind that I'm kinda taking charge here. I have so many ideas running through my head, and I find it really hard to collaborate with someone who I don't know personally or physically, so I generally try to be as independent as possible, so I sincerely apologize if I sound rude or something.
xD I am the queen of run-on sentences.
Wait, I'll be right back... *quickly jots all guests' names on folded pieces of paper and puts them in an empty jar* Ok, here goes... *shakes jar* *pulls a piece out with eyes closed* And the murderer is... TRIC!!!!!!!!!!!
Huh. Interesting. Soren said Tric was no longer her AE, but he was already signed up, so we should write him in anyway. Just in case, I'll draw again, and the one who is drawn will be either the lead red herring person, the first victim, or the murderer (in dire need).
Okay... (draws another using same method) ...LEVANA!!!!!!! Wow. I think (I'm not sure) I almost pulled out Soren and one time (by the shape of the paper). Tric and Lev are both Soren's. One more... Midnight. Midnight. Of the 13 others I could have drawn, I pick Midnight. Wow. So yeah. Three chosen ones. One the murderer, one the red herring, and one the first victim. All are Soren's companions. I can't even. Wow.
Please give me your thoughts. I really need to go now.
Wow.
(August 8, 2018 - 5:25 pm)
Sorry about the delay! I kind of forgot about this XD Here's a list of death causes:
Poisoning
Drowning in water
Drowning in a volcano
Falling (I was thinking there could be, like, a tour or something where the guests are on a cliff and one of them gets pushed off? What do you think?)
Stabbing
Burning/Baking
Falling into a pit of water/spikes/lava/fire
If I come up with anything else, I'll let you know!
(August 21, 2018 - 11:08 am)
Ok. That’s a good start. Can you start brainstorming the plot for Day 2? That would be very helpful. You don’t need to write all up (though you can if you want). Sorry I haven’t been around lately. I just got back from church camp almost an hour ago. When do you think we should post Day 1? We should probably Top the thread first so people actually see it.
(August 22, 2018 - 11:25 am)
I'll start brainstorming, yeah. Why don't we post Day 1 tomorrow? Or do you think it would be better if we posted it once we have some ideas about Day 2? I'm heading on over to Pudding's Place now to start topping!
Viri says pzaa. Pazaak? Wait, Viri plays Knights of the Old Republic?
(August 22, 2018 - 12:17 pm)
Ok thanks lol. How about I post it tomorrow? I can do that once the thread is topped. Should I post as Ka Ho’oilo and Uliuli or just Uliuli? I think always putting both of us will make things less obvious, but posting as ourselves would be less confusing. What do you think? And remember that for Day 2 Tric is the murderer, Midnight is killed, and Levana is framed/suspected.
(August 23, 2018 - 5:11 pm)
I might reccomend posting as both of us, so, as you said, things will be less obvious. I'll start writing!
(August 24, 2018 - 9:27 am)
Ok, great! I topped the thread on PP, so I’m going to post Day 1 now...
(August 25, 2018 - 9:18 am)
You still working on D2, AW? (BTW your name abbrev. reminds me of A&W Root Beer xD)
(September 6, 2018 - 7:00 pm)
Okay, this is really embarrassing, but I've been so busy that I forgot about writing D2. I just started working on it a little while ago. I'm so sorry. Do you want, like, an outline, or an actual story?
(September 7, 2018 - 10:59 am)
Whatever you can do is fine, though I’d prefer if you could do the actual story. Do you think switching off writing it is a good approach or should we try for something different? I don’t mean to be cracking the whip here, but it’s been a bit slow going. Not that I didn’t have any part in that.
(September 8, 2018 - 3:08 pm)
Jwyn, I'm sorry I've been taking so long to write, but between loads of math homework, laundry, cleaning, and working on my 4-H record book, the best I can do right now is an outline for the next part of the ski lodge. I'm really sorry.
(September 12, 2018 - 11:24 am)
It’s no trouble! Just give whatcha got and I’ll make it work ;)
(September 12, 2018 - 10:22 pm)
So I was thinking that maybe we could start with the guests having breakfast, and one of the AEs or something runs in frantically yelling that whoever the first victim is (I forgot) has been murdered. Then maybe the rest of the guests could run in and see the body. After that, there might be something dramatic like page 3 of this:
http://www.cricketmagkids.com/chatterbox/puddingsplace/node/369554?page=...
(Admins, please link it! Thanks a lot!) That's all I can do for now, since I've got to go. I'll write more later!
(September 13, 2018 - 9:09 am)