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Loose lines, metaphors,
Loose lines, metaphors, similies, poem ideas, etc...
So, there's a thread like this on Cicada, and since I still have 26 days until I can make an account on there (yes, I'm counting down the days, don't judge me), let's make it a thing on Cricket! This thread is exactly what it sounds like- post your lines of poetry that have no poem to go in, your metaphors or ideas that need work and possibly critique, anything of the like, and maybe we can help each other out or gather ideas. Please don't steal from other people though. I know you guys won't, but I had to say that.
Thanks for reading! I'll post some of mine when this thread shows up.
~Bluebird
submitted by Bluebird
(December 20, 2017 - 9:19 pm)
(December 20, 2017 - 9:19 pm)
(January 4, 2018 - 9:34 pm)
Some lines I thought of recently whoops
- His eyes are full of regret, and then they are full of nothing at all
- The implied drone of white noise in the back of my mind is louder.
- It claws at my ribcage with talons ineffective and tries to get out through my mouth
- It is very old, and very powerful, and it has very many teeth
- It is good. It is evil. It is morally gray. It is complicated. It is simple. It is bad. It is good. It is all of this. It is none of this. You overthink. It just is.
- There is so much to do! You do nothing. There is so much you want to do! You do nothing. There is such a clear, straightforward, feasible plan! You do nothing. You must do something! You do nothing. Everything screams at you. Your will is we ak. You cannot bring yourself to move. You do nothing.
(January 7, 2018 - 3:03 pm)
(January 30, 2018 - 1:55 pm)
-We were riding on the backs of dragons/now we're falling from a winter sky
(January 30, 2018 - 1:56 pm)