Where I'm From
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Where I'm From
Where I'm From poems. Have y'all ever heard of the Where I'm From poems? You basically use yourself or a fictional character (like I did) and fill out and then expand upon a template, then make it into a poem. You can find the templates online. I like to fill them out while I'm forming a poem out of it, but I guess you can fill it out and then write. It's a great little prompt and very fun, especially if you're building a character! Here's one I wrote (it's just a rough draft) about what my life would have been like if I lived on the farmland I do now a long time ago. It's mostly fictional, although everything originates from true experiences or stories I've heard from my grandparents over the years.
Untitled poem (if I lived here like 50 years ago)
I am from the yellow bags of chicken scratch
sagging against the barbed-wire fence
from finest quality American Seed
and baskets fresh from the factory down the road
I am from the overgrown, sprawling, dug-up
barns and feilds
I am from the nutgrass, clinging to the last instant,
the wild honeysuckle edging the woods
like yellow tape, furrowed sand
soft under years of work,
the leafy cucumber plants
reaching out for redemption
the delicate squash flowers
bending over wet earth
I am from arrow-head expeditions
and dirty fingernails
I am from the smell of unnecessary
spindly trees we burn every fall
and bare feet;
lost shoes
calloused skin
from “pick before the sun is up” and
“don’t forget to latch the door”
I am from the Church bells, clear
in the hazy dawn at 8:30 in the mornings
I’m from old land there used to be more of,
pickled okra and the stink of vinegar and
soft figs layered with sugar and
cooking in a watched pot
from the farm my brother worked
since he was 14, the preserves we sealed
in scalding water, and the piles of peas
we sorted and shelled while watching TV
I am from the photos on the bookshelf,
unfinished scrapbooks, and Christmas tree
ornaments we hung on higher branches every year.
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LOL! Rosy says fgit! I think she means Figwit!
(June 7, 2017 - 3:11 pm)
OMG-sharp! I wrote one of these for my language arts class a few weeks ago! Of course, we're out now, but I still have the poem.
I’m from pianos,
From white keys and black hammers.
I am from writing that formed songs on the keys.
(Sweet, practiced,
Just like middle C.)
I am from three different teachersl
Katy Perry songs
And the muscle memory I used to practice
To memorize my favorite songs.
I’m from saving and spending,
From Samantha and Klaus.
I’m from the short-tempered
And the careless,
From “be quiet!” and “I’m busy!”
I’m from Europe in the east
As well as China in the west
And a name as long as the US.
I’m from berry tarts and chocolate,
Smelling like sugar and tasting even better.
From getting cookie cutters I didn’t want
But using them like an artist,
The time I roasted marshmallows indoors.
Hung on my bed are many suits
Ready to use,
Smelling like salt
Waiting for summer to come again.
I am from imitating olympic gold medalist Michael Phelps
Going “Sploosh!” in the pool and playing capture the flag
And I made a bonfire out of a marshmallow.
Is it good? I was going to add something about libraries and reading but i didn't have time.
(June 7, 2017 - 5:27 pm)
Top!
(June 7, 2017 - 5:34 pm)
(June 7, 2017 - 7:12 pm)
Top! I love your Poem, Lucy! I read it outloud to my mom, who was sitting next to me, and she loved it too!
Rosy says orkp. No, Rosy, I wouldn't eat something called Ork Pie even if I was paid a magic ring!
(June 10, 2017 - 6:55 pm)
I wrote one of these! I didn't know there was a template, though, so I didn't use it. I saw one like it in my school's literary magazine and decided to try.
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Untitled
I am from nowhere and somewhere,
from clicking chopsticks,
the sharp scent of onions,
the smooth twang of voices
forming words, round and soft,
that fit into my mouth
like the mints
that Di 12 keeps in her purse.
I listen, but don't understand, and
speak, halting and slow,
with the wrong accent,
and wonder what I am saying.
I am also from candles,
two, a pair of identical twins
in a race to see which
can melt faster,
from honey-colored bread
that is hot in my hands when I pull off a chunk.
It's sweet, like the dark juice
which sloshes in
fluted glasses.
I sing in a tongue
with even edges
and square corners
that tastes
just a little tangy
a bit like the doughy warmth
of the Challah
that they used to pass out
at snack time
at Sunday School.
I feel important
because, now, I know
what I am saying, though not
necessarily what it means.
I am from leather photo albums
and watermelon-stained grins
from steaming bowls of pho
and oily crisp-fried latkes
from colorful coconut candies and red envelopes,
from parched brittle bread and greens dipped in salt.
I am from places I have been,
and ones I might never see—
I am from nowhere
and from somewhere.
(June 11, 2017 - 11:50 am)
Hah, we wrote these at the end of 6th grade 2 years ago. Mine is... Really bad, but I was young and an idealist so... I'll try to copy/ paste it from Drive:
I am from a land of bubbles, waves, and splashes
from late nights at practice to early mornings at meets
from laughter and memories; a place where hard work pays off
I am from the grasshopper song and falling asleep
to the soft notes
of the “Moonlight Sonata”
from waking up before dawn to smell the spring air, as fresh as summer rain and staying up past midnight
watching the Perseids meteor shower fly by
I am from the place where you can see the miracles of life
and be grateful for the little things
robin’s eggs hatching
young deer peeking shyly from the brush
from the sweet call of the mourning dove
and from stars forming twinkling pictures in the night sky
I am from wild wineberries staining our fingers bloodred
and an ice cold brook where we would spend hours
exploring
until we get lost
from a crackling fireplace in the winter to a grill filled with burning wood in the fall
I am from the bubble popping and wondering
“Where will practice be?”
I am from the swim team that refused to fall
that stood up to challenges
the team that survives
And finally, I am from playing Uno and Wikipedia in the evenings
from cooking blini for breakfast,
baking bulochki for lunch,
and cooking galupsi for dinner
I am from family that says “I love you”
Every
Single
Night
I am from and of the water
blue and at the same time crystal clear
Hear that scream? That shriek of laughter?
Swim towards it, and maybe
you’ll find
Where I’m from
(June 11, 2017 - 12:12 pm)
I feel like I've seen this kind of poem before... Any way, here's what happened when I tried.
I am from my parent's toils
And my grandparent's dreams
From my ancestor's faith
I am from candles and Challah
From Menorah and Matzoh
I am from God
I am from science
I am from logic
I am from the power in man's mind
From progress and change
And I am from thought
Cogito Ergo Sum
I am from poetry
I am from artwork
And I am from music
And open fields and dense forests
And I am from mountains and winding roads
I am from awe and from beauty
I am from millenia of belief
But I am from centuries of disbelief
And pursuit of knowledge
I am from the pursuit of peace and beauty
I am from also the suspension of disbelief
I am from a thousand paradoxes
I am from a million years ago
I am from the future
I am from everything that has been
And all that will be
I am part of it all
I am from a dream
(June 11, 2017 - 2:03 pm)
Hey, are you Jewish, Coyote? I am, too!
(June 13, 2017 - 1:33 pm)
Ooh! These are great! You guys rock. I'll make one tomorrow, I'm tired now.
(June 11, 2017 - 7:29 pm)
Oh my gosh! I remember I did one of those a loooong time ago. I wodner if I can find it.
What I'll probably do is type that one out, and also write a new one....but I'll write a new one before seing the old one, that way I'm not influenced.
(June 11, 2017 - 7:33 pm)
This is the first time I've really tried poetry. Feel free to critique!
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I am a thing of ancient teachings
passed down l’dor va dor, from generation to generation
of burning candles in heavy brass holders brought
all the way from Europe on a boat
Passed through the women of my family: my mother, her grandmother, her mother
they’ll be mine one day, too.
I am of six-braid challahs
which my dad bakes, not my mom
I come from Hebrew songs and prayers
which I know by heart and teach to the children of my shull
From rituals, like shaking a bundle of plants and a citrus
helping friends to keep the willow branches alive
then watching them march in procession wearing tallit
looking as though they could be from any time at all
were it not for the huge windows.
I come from carrying Torahs in the streets, singing at the top of my voice
with my community behind me, just as loud
Just as proud that we can pray in public, unworried
This is the real reason my many-times great grandmother
carried those candlesticks to America.
(June 13, 2017 - 1:59 pm)
@ Cockleburr, yeah, I am, actually.
(June 13, 2017 - 4:45 pm)
@ Cockleburr, also, I like your poem!
(June 13, 2017 - 4:47 pm)
Thanks Coyote! And cool, another Jew! Abi, Dumpun, and OtR are also Jewish! There may be others as well.
(June 17, 2017 - 11:06 pm)
I did something like this for myself:
I. I am of
The scritch-scratch of a pen on mass-produced
Paper--we always bought the cheap kind because we used so much.
II. I am of the whispering of the green-leaved
Trees when the autumn wind blows through them and they seem to laugh.
III. I am of the whizzzz and the buzzzz of
Bike wheels rolling on the hot cement of the city.
IV. I am of the tangy, almost smoky-but-strange smell
Of fresh paint smeared on the canvas
I am of the smooth, silky strands of paintbrushes before they're immersed in colors.
V. I am of the undescribable, welcoming smell of a book
And rows and rows of them in color order on shelves, my small rainbows of happiness.
VI. I am of the clang of metal measuring spoons
Clouds of white flour in the air and
Sweet aromas drifting from the kitchen
VII. I am of joyful laughter and bright sun and music and running and dancing and loving.
(June 15, 2017 - 2:01 pm)