POETRY CONTEST!
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POETRY CONTEST!
POETRY CONTEST!
This will be a MUSIC INSPIRED POETRY CONTEST!!!!!!! I will judge this time, then whoever wins will judge next time...and so on.
The person who is judging will pick a song (WITH NO WORDS!!) for the inspiration, then everyone will enter their poems!
Now, that shouldn't be hard!
I'm giving ya'll to the end of the month to submit your poems!!!!
Now the song.... Breath of the Forest by Adrian Von Ziegler!
I can't WAIT to read all of your poems!
submitted by Silverwaxwing
(April 22, 2017 - 4:04 pm)
(April 22, 2017 - 4:04 pm)
I'm extending the deadline to the 20th.
(May 15, 2017 - 3:54 pm)
Little Cautions (Barcelona, 2009)
He's playing guitar on the street corner,
the man with the torn-up sneakers,
the beer belly,
the dark glasses and white cane
lying beside his stool like
a faithful dog. He is apart,
set away from the world
by his guitar case
like a koi pond with a few euro
(their luster dull in the shade)
by his pizza-box sign
"Americano - cegado
en la guerra de Afganistán -
por favor ayuda"
by his warbling song
the Spanish broken,
Mexican-tainted, the chords
streamlined, predestined,
so clearly learned by memory alone.
Eyes slide over him,
wary of that which is below them,
that which is desperate enough
to lounge on this street corner
(with the white pigeon splashes,
the age spots on the walls,
the gunmetal gray of the clouds,
promising a short sharp shock of storm)
and might therefore be desperate enough
to do something else.
They hurry by, swinging shopping bags,
pushing strollers, leaving
the guitar case of euro
untouched.
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Just so you know, I've never been to Barcelona, or Spain at all for that matter. This is all my imagination.
(May 12, 2017 - 12:36 pm)
TOP THIS THREAD! NOW!!! ALL THE GREAT POETRY IS GREAT!!!!! TTTTTTTOOOOOOOOOOPPPP!!!!!!!
Koda says kama. Like Captain Rex's skirt thing from Clone Wars, Koda?
(May 13, 2017 - 6:10 pm)
I'm sorry I didn't write sooner, I'm SO MAD AT MYSELF! I wrote a whole long poem and I accidentally deleted it!!! ARGH!!!!!!!
Awesome song Elementgirl! I love it!
His Magic
The fingers of my left hand
Fly across the worn strings
Of my Grandfather's guitar.
Playing the song I have played
So many times before.
Mother says I'm the makings
For a real classical musician.
Like Grandfather.
I see his firm, wrinkled,
Calloused hands in my mind.
Always bringing joyful music into this world.
I think of his face,
Always smiling to
Encourage me.
He isn't here to encourage me now though.
Isn't here,
To help me through my pain.
To help me see
What I already know.
Every living thing must die.
Classical music so so full of life,
Yet life is full of death.
So therefor, classical music is also full of death?
No. Not in my mind.
It is full of magic in my mind.
Full of his magic.
I remember him lifting me up
Onto his knee.
His big hand
Sliding over the polished neck of the guitar
Along with mine.
Now I stand alone,
playing for him one more time,
As tears fall onto the guitar he taught me on.
Somehow
The music fills me with happiness.
Even as I play it to him...
For the last time,
Before the coffin lid closes on his smiling face.
Forever.
(May 15, 2017 - 6:06 pm)
Oh my gosh Silver that's beautiful! I love reading your guys' poetry, it's so good and full of emotion, both happy and sad. And everywhere in between!
(May 17, 2017 - 8:06 pm)
Thank you so much Epic Fangirl! That really gave me a lift! :)
I sort of based the poem off of memories of my Grandpa...I wish he could have known that I took up guitar.
....Miss you Grandpa!!
(May 19, 2017 - 6:20 pm)
EG, are you gonna judge???????????????????????????????????:)
(May 25, 2017 - 7:21 pm)
Silverwaxwing, it's beautiful!!!! It brought tears to my eyes!!!
(September 10, 2017 - 9:18 pm)