Poetry Contest
Chatterbox: Pudding's Place
Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
Haha you're judging in my sister's birthday! This is a bit late to say this but congrats Silver and everyone else too! Your poems were all so good!
My life is like a tapestry
Woven together
So many colours
So many textures
Soft, happy thoughts
Rough, sad memories
Colourful music
Dark, dark nights
All woven together
So complicated,
so intricate,
you can never replicate it.
You and I may have similar threads
But many different ones too
No one's life is the same as anothers
We're all as unique as tapestries.
(February 2, 2024 - 1:20 pm)
Love your poem! and haha, my B-day is also on the 12th!
(February 4, 2024 - 9:10 am)
Raindrops falling on my he-e-eadd
w h y
did you do this to me,
I weaved you my only
tapestry,
out of summer golden memories,
and sweat and dirt,
dust and leaves,
raindrops falling on my he-e-eadd
h o w
could you do this to me
all those hours at the loom
ripped to shreds; every thread
now I'm spiraling like sun-ray hair
slipping down down down
I'm made of water in the vast ocean
raindrops drowning out every word you say
raindrops pounding overhe-e-ead
i f
you would do this to me
Would I understand the sign to leave
could I
could I
could I abandon you to the
',’',‘' `',’','‘,`',`','‘,',`, ’',‘'
raindrops- raindrops- covering our faces
(February 5, 2024 - 10:29 am)
Life is a tapestry
Full of colors and shade
It starts with white thread
And with time, we weave in
Bright colors of our own
But through the years,
These vibrant colors fade
The threads unspool
And weaves fray
Each tapestry is different
For each and every one
Warm colors like the sun
Cool colors like the ocean waves
They swirl around
Create beauty
In the unexpected;
Everyone has a tapestry of life
Woven with the threads of their past
But why,
When I sit at my loom
Is mine monochrome?
Silver thread and spider silk
A tapestry barren and cold
Was my life an empty tale?
I cannot craft color in my weaves
I cannot bring life to my tapestry
Nor see the beauty of it
So I shall not try
I am caught in a web
Of grays, silver, and white
It blinds me to the bright colors outside
Hard as I try,
I cannot weave color in my world
Of bleak, desolate, life
But I content myself
With my past hanging up on a wall
Full of bright colors and tales of mine
But as I sit here, at my loom
Needle and thread in hand
I think I’ll weave again
(February 7, 2024 - 3:43 pm)
Sorry, it's kind of long
(February 8, 2024 - 3:23 pm)
You're red
Dazzling, difficult, elusive, stunning, one to lead and not be led
You're white
Graceful, swift, beautiful, a beacon in the night
You're green
Uncertain, capable of power you're unsure of, running away with my dreams
You're golden
Incredible, phenomenal, full of trickery, human
You're black
Unstoppable, glorious, leaving and coming back
In this tapestry, you shine
Attacking, elegant, transformative, walking the line.
(February 11, 2024 - 11:21 am)
(February 12, 2024 - 10:10 am)
Will you post the results soon?
(February 12, 2024 - 1:50 pm)
happy birthday Hawkstar and WildWolf's sister :D
you all had such amazing poems!! i really enjoyed seeing how each person interpreted the theme. i really wanted to give you all first place - everyone's work was incredible <3
honorable mentions~
Hawkstar! oh my gosh this is awesome!! i love the imagery—it’s so beautiful and feels really peaceful too. i especially like the lines “your eyes as deep as the ocean below / just as soothing and crazed / just as gentle and fierce” and “shaking green leaves down / circling us like fairy blessings.” the alternating between italics is really cool, too, and definitely emphasizes the story you’re telling here. the ending is really impactful and kind of reminds me of like how all through history there were these famous trailblazing men, but they could only achieve all they did because of the woman working invisibly at home—idk if that’s your original intention, but i just thought it was really cool. but yes, it definitely has a very peaceful and elegant vibe, but it’s quietly very powerful and strong :D
Moon Wolf! ooh i love this!! this poem is powerful—you describe this wonderful idyllic scene, and then you say it’s only a tapestry unless someone makes it a reality, which, like Hawkstar said, is a message that really resonates with me. i especially love how nature is a major part of this sort of ideal world you’re describing, and the imagery and word choice you use is lovely and strong—my favorite lines are probably “Green leaves woven / Like hope, or / Longing” and “Not destroying / But appreciating / Respecting / This beauty that is / Nature.” it’s definitely very relevant for our times, and contains such a powerful call-to-action, and it’s written in such a beautiful way. nice job :D
WildWolf! oh my gosh, i love this!! i love how you used the imagery of a tapestry to illustrate the complexities and uniqueness of humans. i thought it was really cool how you chose to show this with kind of contradicting aspects—“soft, happy thoughts / rough, sad memories,” for instance; i feel like that really helps emphasize your point about how people are as wonderful and complex as a tapestry. your piece was wonderful!! nice work :D
Luna! i don’t think this was too long!! it was the perfect length :D it’s so beautiful—i love the idea of everyone’s life being a tapestry, and their experiences are all threads in it, and the wording you use is really lovely—“They swirl around / Create beauty / In the unexpected” and “But why, / When I sit at my loom / Is mine monochrome? / Silver thread and spider silk / A tapestry barren and cold” might be my favorite lines. i feel like you did a really good job of describing the regret and sadness one might feel from a life not lived to the fullest, and i love the hopeful ending. the metaphor was great and you executed it really well! :D
third place~
Amethyst! whoa i love this!! the repetitions/repeated line structure are so cool, and it’s really impactful. i love the word choice—it’s so precise and lovely! i thought it was really cool how you used a lot of contrasting words to paint a picture of the person you’re describing—it really illustrates how this person (or your perception of them, perhaps?) has changed over time. and the last lines really hammer home the idea of the complexities and contradictions of humans. i also loved the rhymes! i can never rhyme in my poetry, but yours seems so natural and adds a lot of rhythm to the poem! it’s really interesting concept and executed very well—it really stuck with me after i read it. :D
second place~
Woodwind! whoa, this is so good! <3 the imagery and emotion in this piece is absolutely incredible, and as someone who’s possibly on the aroace spectrum myself, it really hits hard. i really love how you took the idea of the red thread of fate—a myth that’s always fascinated me—and spun it into something sad but very powerful. the imagery is incredible—i love how you kept going back to the concept of the red thread of fate with lines like “I guess that cheap red yarn frayed and snapped, and / became a jagged spiderweb of lies, and / fragmented fractal futures.” idrk what i’m saying anymore, but yeah this was just really well done!! :D
first place~
CelineBurning Bright! ooh this is awesome, i love it!! it’s so cool how you’re playing with spacing and punctuation here—it’s really unique and almost reminiscent of e. e. cummings—not exactly, but definitely a similar sort of unconventional style there. the imagery is also wonderful—i love the lines “out of summer golden memories, / and sweat and dirt, / dust and leaves” and “now I’m spiraling like sun-ray hair / slipping down down down.” the repetition with “raindrops” is so cool too. and the themes of doing so much for a person but not getting anything in return, but still not being able to leave them (this my interpretation, at least?) is also so relatable, and you tell it beautifully. congrats, you’re the next judge! :D
(February 12, 2024 - 12:14 pm)
Thank you for the praise, pangolin! I'm glad you liked it :) those are probably my favorite lines as well. And thanks for the birthday wishing!!
Congratulations, Celine!!!! You had a wonderful poem, you deserved it!!
(February 12, 2024 - 2:15 pm)
Congratulations @celine!!! Your poem was amazing. And ty @pangolin for the kind comments.
(February 12, 2024 - 3:01 pm)
Thank you so much for third place! And for your comments, they're always so insightful and helpful :D Congratulations to everyone - all the poetry was beautiful (as always, lol).
(February 12, 2024 - 5:20 pm)
(February 12, 2024 - 6:30 pm)
Oh... wow. I was not expecting to win... at all XD. Sorry for the late response. Everyone's entries were so wonderful!! :DD And thank you @pangolin for all the helpful judging-thingies, it was all actually really enjoyable to read (and ofc for 1st too, truly such an honor :0)! Umm… for the prompt. Oh! What about wisp? :)
(February 13, 2024 - 10:27 am)
Ooh, nice prompt! I'll post mine later :)
(February 13, 2024 - 7:16 pm)