Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
I'm honestly really surprised I got second place, I didn't like that poem very much while I was writing it. But thank you! I'm super excited to write another poem next round.
(July 22, 2021 - 12:35 pm)
EEEEE! Thank you Jaybells and everyone--you all did amazing!
(July 22, 2021 - 2:59 pm)
Okay, I'm on a computer now, so I should succeed. On my phone I kept accidently x-ing out my page, and it was taking forever, and it just wasn't great.
So yeah.
No such thing as magic
Sitting on your back stoop,
chatting and laughing and listening,
and I pointed out the sun
glinting off the windows
of your garage.
"Do you think that means
the fairies are smiling at us?"
I asked,
but you just laughed.
"There's no such thing as
fairies."
At my house,
crying because I scraped my knee,
and maybe that meant
the angels didn't like me
anymore.
"Hey," you said,
"Calm down. There's no such thing as
angels. You're just clumsy."
A school talent show.
I was praying the fates
wanted me to win.
You snorted.
"There's no such thing as
fates, just you
and the judges."
At the park,
swinging on the creaky swingset,
I noticed how the leaves danced
in the breeze.
I bit my lip
and didn't point it out.
Alone.
Watching the sun fall asleep, but
suns don't fall asleep.
My mind laughs at me in your voice.
No such thing as
magic.
That worked a lot better on a computer then a phone. And a lot faster.
So yeah.
There's my poem.
(July 23, 2021 - 11:44 am)
I know I disappeared from the CB for a little bit, but this prompt really had me thinking, so yeah here's my poem!:
No such thing as magic~
i look into the stars,
staring at their souls,
watching as they
wander in front of my eyes,
watching as they
study me, as i study them,
watching as they dance before me,
putting on a dazzling show high
above my head.
They sparkle
and shine,
and it feels just like magic.
i whisper to myself, "i love
magic."
but i know, even if i hate to admit it,
i know.
but it just makes the stars so much
less beautiful, so much less
magical.
i watch the show
that nature puts on, almost as
if it's just for me.
yes, i love magic
but i know it's just not true.
i know, despite what i want to believe, that
magic
is not
real.
(July 31, 2021 - 2:19 pm)
I'm extending the date to the 12th. I hope the theme is okay!
(August 5, 2021 - 8:08 am)
(August 5, 2021 - 12:52 pm)
The theme's great, it's just kind of bad luck that not many people got around to writing about it.
(August 6, 2021 - 7:18 am)
Writing this from an iPad so we'll see how it goes?
--
oh, child.
you are young, however old you think you may be, however high you hold yourself,
you are young.
you march through the halls with your chin up and your hands on your hips, shorter than the light switches,
faded blue blanket dragging on dusty floorboards behind you.
oh, child, I cry for you.
cry for your innocence, your naivety, your youth
you are innocent,
even if you can reach light switches now and your faded blankets are long since abandoned,
even as you shove backpacks into middle school lockers and braid your own hair.
oh, child, someday you will know.
someday, your naivety will be something you look back on with regrets and a bittersweet smile, someday,
you will miss when the answers to all the hard questions were when you're older
oh, child, I smile for you
for your youth and your innocence and naivety
I smile for you, child
for you still haven't learned that magic doesn't exist forever,
if there ever was such a thing.
(August 7, 2021 - 10:32 am)
Oh, Lumi... This is so beautiful and heartbreaking.
I'm not really sure how to convey the emotion(s) this evokes for me. I guess it feels sorta heavy? Not sure that's the right term tho'. Anyway, it's really good and a bit sad at the same time.
(August 9, 2021 - 1:03 am)
Theres no such thing as magic
That's what they all say
But the truth is hard to run from
You cannot keep it at bay.
There's no such thing as magic
Parents tell their kids
But they still believe in fairies
Gnomes and their magic lids.
There's no such thing as magic
That's what my friends believe
But what I know differs
Cause the magic folks help me succeed.
(August 9, 2021 - 7:07 pm)
'I know magic exists'
With your words,
Filled with determination and resolve
I come to believe it
'I know magic exists'
Through a shining grin
Or Tear-slicked cheeks
You never let the world break you down
'I know magic exists'
Watching the sun dip deep down or peak over the horizon
Catching glowing fireflies near the pond in humid summer nights
Letting snowflakes lilt down, deep blue sky filled with stars
'I know magic exists'
Over a smokey battlefield
And glorious palaces and estates
Forcing yourself through it all with those words
So why now
Are your eyes draining of life,
Tears carrying away the last essence of you
Final breaths leaving your lips as you bleed out your life's blood
How can you say
With your final rasping words
'There's no so thing as magic'
I hear a silent 'not anymore.'
(August 12, 2021 - 6:34 pm)
(August 12, 2021 - 7:38 pm)
Sorry I'm late! So this theme was pretty strange and I like how you guys interpreted it. It was pretty hard to decide who won this one! Thank you all for participating :D
Honerable mentions (in no particular order, as usual)
Cranberry-- I like this poem because it sounds a little like a nursery rhyme. The rhyming flows well and sounds cool, and the wording itself is fun and clever. I like the lines "there's no such thing as magic/that's what parents tell their kids/but they still believe in fairies/gnomes and their magic lids." Overall, this is a fun, interesting poem!
WordSong-- Oh, WordSong. This is so sad and beautiful and true. The way that the person the speaker is, well, speaking to has an influence on what they think and do is realistic and the way this person's thoughts and opinions and worries were shattered and forced together again in a different way (wow that was very metaphorical) is powerful. This poem hit me hard and continues to. Also, I love the description, especially "and I pointed out the sun/glinting off the windows/of your garage," and "I noticed how the leaves danced/in the breeze." This is a powerful, pretty poem.
Third to first place:
3rd place: Spellbound-- Wow, Spellbound! This poem is very pretty and I love the wording and description. I enjoy imagining this scene in my head. I enjoy the idea that stars have magic in them or just are magic, and this poem really brought that to life. My favorite line is "I look into the stars,/staring at their souls,". That part feels especially metaphorical in a pretty way. This was a magical, enchanting poem!
Second place: Jaybells-- This poem was quite intriguing, as many of your poems are. It reminded me a little of WordSong's, but maybe reversed. I think it's interesting that the character in the poem who insists that magic is real no matter how hard things get suddenly stops believing in it, not when it seems like all is gone but when it really is. And when the speaker sees this character stop believing in it, it feels like the magic has faded from their life, too, like the only magic in the speaker's life was that character. My favorite lines are "watching the sun dip down or peak over the horizon/catching glowing fireflies near the pond in humid summer nights." Beautiful, deep poem!
First place: Lumi-- Wowo, this was a sad poem. Sad is good though. I think the point of view was quite interesting, the way that a definitely older but only supposedly wiser character was speaking to a young, hopeful child who didn't know any better. I like the last lines, "for you still haven't learned that magic doesn't exist forever,/if there ever was such a thing." I also enjoy "you will miss when the answers to all the hard questions were when you're older," and "even as you shove backpacks into middle schoool lockers and braid your own hair." Those lines felt deep, relateable, and pretty. This is an amazing poem, congrats!
Nice job everyone, can't wait for the next round! :DDD
(August 13, 2021 - 10:02 am)
omigosh, thank you so much, Peri! I honestly wasn't expecting this at all and it pretty much made my day <3
the new theme is porcelain, and judging is August 28, 2021.
(August 13, 2021 - 5:01 pm)
Oh Peri!! Thank you so much!! I wasn't expecting to place at all! This made my day and I'm glad you liked my poem!! <3 I'm excited to see everyone's poems for next round!
(August 13, 2021 - 6:31 pm)