AMUSEMENT PARK! FUN

Chatterbox: Pudding's Place

AMUSEMENT PARK! FUN

AMUSEMENT PARK! FUN FUN FUN!

The words on the poster silently scream at you as hop onto your bike. Summer is near, and your walking home from school trying to come up with fun activites to occupy your school break. Your buddies are with you, but of course they can't see the magical poster, as it is for CBer's eyes only.  

The paper is carelessly attached to your bicycle's handler bar, dangling by a piece of thin tape. While you pluck it off, your friends see nothing, and they think you've just gone crazy, grabbing empty air. But you, the writer, sees familiar, hypnotizing words plastered on the colorful parchment.  

 

Dearest Chatterboxer,

Greetings! The weather's been becoming noticeably warmer, and soon you'll be free or learning and homework and going to bed early and waking up early. So I invite you to stay at new Cricket Amusement Park that's closer than you think! It's still being worked on, but you guys have been selected to view it before everyone else! YAY! You'll even get to sleep in the bounce house! There'll be giant roller coasters that make you barf, petting zoos, and a circus filled with non-killer clowns! So that means there will be no murders! Why would there be? YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO HAVE FUN! Now hurry and sign up! 

For my convenience and sanity, please only five CBers (one CAPTCHA and AE each). Also, please specific your companions genders, and packing list. 

 

submitted by Park Manager, Cricket Amusement Park
(February 27, 2016 - 6:54 am)

Dang I accidentally clicked "Submit" instead of "Preview."

AAAAGHHH

I just can't finish this. If I don't when I wake up, I will scream. 

 

submitted by Park Manager/Novelis, Cricket Amusement Park
(March 25, 2016 - 11:07 pm)

Oh my gosh, it was EMERALD!!!

How could you kill so many people?

And btw, novelist, you didn't memtion me in that scene. Was I somewhere else? Or you just didn't include dialogue? 

 

They will get you, killer bunny! You will regret killing meeeeeeeee!

 

micna: efnv

Emerald be Free? NeVer! 

submitted by Owlgirl, And ghost of Grace
(March 26, 2016 - 12:27 pm)

Oh, Owlgirl, I didn' t mention you in the last post because there are still a lot of characters left, and I can't make every one say something in every scene. Sorry.

--CONTINUED: I GAURANTEE THIS IS THE LAST POST!

The entire room was a mess. Its bounce had been activated, making the floor wave up and down like jelly. Furniture was flying everywhere, making it dangerous to maneuver past them.

"Oh great," mumbled Elvina.

"Okay, so how do we do this?" asked Owlgirl, clinging to a wall. "I can't fly because I think my wing is hurt."

I shrugged. "Just try to keep your feet on the ground as much as possible."

We let go of our anchors and tried to follow Emerald, while bouncing up and down and every which way. The killer made it hard because she was an experienced hopper, and she kept slapping the red button as she passed each room. Soon, all the rooms were bouncey.

After we passed the kitchen, with its food going everywhere and staining the CBers clothes, they neared the bathroom. Suddenly I heard a flush then the sound of running water.

"DUCK!" cried Joan. She jumped at me, and we barely dodged a giant stream of sewer water as it passed over our heads.

"OH THAT IS DISGUSTING!" screamed Shadow Dragon.

"I know," I agreed, "but we can't stop. If Emerald gets to that portal and blows it up, we'll be stuck here forever!"

--- They continued chasing after the bunny, all around the house, up the stairs, down the stairs . . . After getting slightly bruised and being knocked toegther, the kids finally found ourselves back outside.

"She's--she's at the construction site," stammered Amber, who looked like she was about to throw up.

We all rushed to there, and drowsily peered over the pit. A green bunny, an AE tied to a chair, and a swirling blue portal was all that could be seen.

"MY AE!" cried Chinchilla in dismay.

"Oh carrots!" exclaimed the bunny. She faced ThePersonWhoWritesNotes. "GIVE ME YOUR NOTEBOOK!"

"No!" she responded persistantly. "I won't! If you get your paws on that, the world will be chaos!"

"Fine! It looks like I'll have to blow up all of you, including the portal! Oh well, At least I'll be a free rabbit!"

"NOOO!" the others yelled, watching her jump through the portal.

I quickly slung a rope over the edge, and instead of slowly scooting down, we held on and jumped off the sides like mountain climbers.

Once we were on the dusty ground, Phantom N. looked beneath the chair. "It's counting down. We got twenty seconds until the bomb goes off."

"Okay," said Amber nervously. "We got two choices. One, we can save abandon Chinchilla's AE and save ourselves, for sure, by going through the portal. Or, we can untie the AE and have a 2% chance of making it through the portal in time before the bomb goes off."

"You used seven seconds saying that!" reported the ghostly humanoid.

"We are not leaving my counterpart!" argued Chinchilla.

"Two seconds wasted!"

"Save yourselves!" ThePersonWhoWritesNotes said. Although I could tell she really wanted us to untie her.

"One second!"

"No!" yelled Elvina. "We have to rescue her!"

 

submitted by Park Manager/Novelis, Cricket Amusement Park
(March 27, 2016 - 1:38 am)

GASP! WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO THE CBers?! WILL THEY ALL EXPLODE, OR WILL THEY GET OUT OF THERE ALIVE! STAY TUNED TO FIND OUT!

Nah, I'm joking. You've waited long enough.

---

"We have five seconds!" exclaimed Phantom.

Elvina whipped out her pocket knife and began sawwing through the ropes. But it wasn't fast enough.

"FOUR!

"THREE!" 

"Back away!" Pellucid ordered. We gave her some space as she made a wide swing with Aquina's trident and cut all the ropes at once.

"Yes, thank you!" cried the AE once she was released from her bonds.

"TWO!"

"GOO!" cried Chinchilla she she grabbed ThePersonWhoWritesNotes.

"ONE!"

The CBers ran and jumped through the portal, CAPTCHA's and all.

KABOOM!

An instant later, the bomb went off. The portal was blown up into flames, and the kids found themselves back in their old dimensions, in front of their houses.

Shocked, they stood up and looked back.

The only thing there was a pile of ashes.

They gasped, and went back inside their houses. No time at all had passed, and they decided to get some sleep they deserved.

THE END!

---

Woo! That was pretty fun writing, even though I constantly got interrupted near the end. It was probably a good thing, cause I didn't realize how long I was making my posts. :P 

I hope everyone liked it! 

 

submitted by Park Manager/Novelis, Cricket Amusement Park
(March 27, 2016 - 3:07 am)

THAT IS AMAZING GOSH WOW GOLLY AWESOME YOU ARE SO GOOD AT THIS!!!!!!!

Note: While Chinchilla is hyperventilating, I must put a word in. This Ski-Lodge was amazing, full of cliffhangers, adventures, and most of all, amusement. I think you have a real talent for this and could make an amazing book if you wanted to. And several amazing Ski-Lodges to! This was an amazing experience and I thank you for putting so much work and effort into this Ski-Lidge. If I could, I would totally hug you right now. Thank you.

~ThePersonWhoWritesNotes 

Wow. That is so moving,  ~ThePersonWhoWritesNotes.  And I think you have a talent for this, Novelist. Thanks for making an awesome Ski-Lodge! And continue being awesome!

"CWMN!" Aaw! Exactly what I want to say too, Frederic! 'Come Write More, Novelist!' You're amazing!' Well, time to go!

Peace, Love, and Pie 

submitted by Chinchilla!, age Bye-bye!, Goodbye!
(March 27, 2016 - 2:37 pm)

YAAAAAY!!! I DIDN'T DIE AND SAVED ThePersonWhoWritesNotes!I'm a HERO! YAAAAAY!!!

Novelist, this has been amazing. Except for, ya know, the killer bunny.

Awesome, Novelist. Totally awesome. 

Love it!

Oh and Wingnut says brap. 

Brilliant apples? 

submitted by Aquina and Pellucid
(March 27, 2016 - 5:50 pm)

THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!

Novelist, you did a wonderful job at writing this. Simply fantastic!

You know, I think about only half of the ski lodges created are actually ever worth being in......this is one of them. In fact, novelist, along with the farm ski lodge, I think this one will go down as one of the best in CB history! And seriously, I mean that.

Yay, mic a and I didn't die!

Grace's ghost: Humph, but I did. 

submitted by Owlgirl
(March 27, 2016 - 10:29 am)

I survived! It must have been through my heroic actions that most of the CBers lived. Poor Mirax. *hangs head for a second then begins to smile.* On the bright side I control what I post! 

*Whistler tootles indignently*

Well except for that horrible droid. Lets see here, Basic binary from A-Astromch to Z-Zinj, page fourty two, hmm yes. WHAT DID YOU JUST CALL ME!!! HOW DARE YOU! *tries to grab Whistler and trips over her dress.*

*Whistler laughs in binary*

I don't think I'll stoo[p to the undignified position of catching you. 

*snifs haughtily and pushes the submit button.* 

 

submitted by Mirax T., age 11, The Pulsar Skate
(March 28, 2016 - 12:25 pm)