AMUSEMENT PARK! FUN

Chatterbox: Pudding's Place

AMUSEMENT PARK! FUN

AMUSEMENT PARK! FUN FUN FUN!

The words on the poster silently scream at you as hop onto your bike. Summer is near, and your walking home from school trying to come up with fun activites to occupy your school break. Your buddies are with you, but of course they can't see the magical poster, as it is for CBer's eyes only.  

The paper is carelessly attached to your bicycle's handler bar, dangling by a piece of thin tape. While you pluck it off, your friends see nothing, and they think you've just gone crazy, grabbing empty air. But you, the writer, sees familiar, hypnotizing words plastered on the colorful parchment.  

 

Dearest Chatterboxer,

Greetings! The weather's been becoming noticeably warmer, and soon you'll be free or learning and homework and going to bed early and waking up early. So I invite you to stay at new Cricket Amusement Park that's closer than you think! It's still being worked on, but you guys have been selected to view it before everyone else! YAY! You'll even get to sleep in the bounce house! There'll be giant roller coasters that make you barf, petting zoos, and a circus filled with non-killer clowns! So that means there will be no murders! Why would there be? YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO HAVE FUN! Now hurry and sign up! 

For my convenience and sanity, please only five CBers (one CAPTCHA and AE each). Also, please specific your companions genders, and packing list. 

 

submitted by Park Manager, Cricket Amusement Park
(February 27, 2016 - 6:54 am)

Goodbye Mirax. You will be missed.

*Sends off their spirit*

But this is so fun! I check up on it every day to see if the Park Manager posted a new day. 

 

submitted by Amber
(March 4, 2016 - 3:19 pm)

Wow! This is the most exciting Ski Lodge ever! m. Great plot twists, Park Manger, Myron have taken Ski Lodge to the next level.....most people, when they create Ski Lodges, they just have people killed off and the others reacting with horror, etc.......but is is exciting!

submitted by Owlgirl
(March 4, 2016 - 7:13 pm)

AGHHH! WHY AM I GUESsED so quickly.

Oh well.

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Okay back to mysterious voice*

Eheheheheh you may think you know who did it, but the truth remains hidden for the knife---

blah blah blah

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also, thanks! 

submitted by Park Manager/Novelis, Cricket Amusement Park
(March 4, 2016 - 8:42 pm)

Well, now we know who YOU are, Park Manager...but the murderer remains unknown. He/she is one of us.

submitted by Owlgirl
(March 5, 2016 - 4:31 pm)

Oh btw, thanks Owlgirl! I actually got the idea of doing an exciting Ski Lodge from Micearenice, whose ski lodge farm is REALLY cool.

ANd plus, maybe this'll prep me for writing murder mysteries someday. And please excuse any typos I make. I'm using a real laptop this time but I kinda forgot how to type.

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Day 4 ~

Once the CBers realized Mirax T. was missing, they executed a search to find her. Not stopping to explore the bounce house, they scoured the amusement park for several hours.

"MIRAX!" they all called every few minutes.

"Oh please come out, dear Mirax," said her Ae, Mrs. Elton. I hope you're smart enough to come look for us soon, as we are doing." 

"Mcop," whined Whistler.

"Hmm . . . ," said Elvina, "I wonder if I have any tools that could help . . ." She reached into her bag and gasped. "EWW! I feel something sticky in her." She took her hand out and showed off a red pocketknife.

"OHMIGOSH!!!" screamed Joss. "There's blood on it!"

Elvina gasped and looked down at it. "What?No no no! I don't understand! I didn't use my knife at all since we got here!"

The other kids gasped and put a hand to their mouths. "You!" shouted Mrs. Elton, stammering, "Y-you murdered Mirax T.!"

"But I didn't! I swear!" She gulped as all her friends stared angrily at her.

"Come on guys," said the Park Manager, starting to turn around. "We need to keep looking--"

"It's The Novelist!" exclaimed Phantom N.

"Wha-what?" she asked.

"You slipped a clue! You said something under your real nickname!"

The Park manager groaned. "ARGHHH you got me!" She slipped off her white, hooded cloak and white gloves. "I like white because it absorbs less heat in the summer."

The others stared at her in amazement.  

The Novelist laughed slightly. "Well, come on. We have to keep looking." 

Suddenly, Grace screeched loudly. "AHHHH IS THAT CANDY?!!! I WANT CANDYYYYY!!!!!!" she grabbed her counterpart, Owlgirl, and shook her violently as she pointed at a stand with an umbrella made from pink cotten candy. "GIMME MONEY SO I CAN BUY LOTS OF CANDY!"

"But I told you not to--"

"I DUN CARE GIVE ME MONEY!!!"

She rolled eyes. "Fine." She pushed a few crisp dollar bills into her hand. 

"YAY!" she began jumping up and down and skipped towards the stand. 

"It takes her a long time to eat candy," said Owlgirl. "SHe wants to savor every bite, and she doesn't like to be rushed. Maybe we should keep looking for Mirax and come back later."

I nodded. "Okay. I hope nothing bad happens to her."

The murderer raised an eyebrow.

"What could be the worst?" asked Joss. "Just a stomach ache."

We all shrugged and continued with the search.

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Meanwhile, Grace had bought a giant, heaping cone of soft cotten candy that was bigger than her head and thick as a pillow! She smiled, satisfied, as she gave some money to the cashier. The cashier, dressed in a long ball cap that covered their eyes, smiled back and took the money.

It was an evil smile. The smile used by villians that struck fear into everyone who saw it.

When Grace saw that dastardly grin, she opened her mouth to scream. But it was too late.

The muderer leaped over the station and grabbed her thick, big cotton candy. They pressed the substance against her face, covering her nose and mouth. They pushed harder and harder, while Owlgirl flailed and kicked underneath the pressure.

Until she stopped moving all together.

The killer paused and tossed the candy away to the side.

 

submitted by Park Manager, Cricket Amusement Park
(March 6, 2016 - 3:23 am)

I don't understand if Owlgirl or Grace died. Because Owlgirl was in a different place as Grace and the killer candy seller.

It seemed like Grace was going to die...but then you said, "Owlgirl flailed and kicked underneath the pressure. Until she stopped moving all together."

submitted by confused person
(March 6, 2016 - 10:12 am)

Oh I forgot

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R.I.C. Grace: Rest in cotton candy 

submitted by Park Manager/Novelis, Cricket Amusement Park
(March 6, 2016 - 8:36 am)

I WILL GET YOU, KILLER. I WILL COME BACK AND HAUNT YOU. AND I KNOW WHO YOU ARE. YOU ARE...

qwertyuiopasdfghjklzxcvbnm

Wait what? Let me try that again.

The name of my killer is qwertyuiopasdfghjklzxcvbnm

What is happening?

*quickly Googles "limitations of CB Ski Lodge ghosts*

According to the Internet, it is impossible for a CBer, AE, or CAPTCHA to type the name of their killer. It is physically impossible. Some strange occurence makes it so that, when they try to type the name or any hint pertaining to the name, or post pictures that would give any sort of hint. The ghost's fingers always end up typing "qwertyuiopasdfghjklzxcvbnm".

Well that sucks!

Hey...I jsut realized something.

This post isn't underneath Owlgirl's name!

And...she's not butting into my dialogue.

This can only mean one thing.

AS A GHOST, I HAVE BECOME AN INDEPENDENT BEING!

Yaaay!

But wait.

I'm still a ghost.

I'm still dead!

There's so much mroe I wanted to do!

You know what, I'd rather be alive than an independent ghost. Besides, even when I was alive, I was still pretty independent. I could interrupt Owlgirl whenever I wanted.

Grrrrrrrrr!

Avenge my death! Find the killer! And put a bunch of candy next to my grave!

Wait. I just reliazed something else.

Oh no. No. No, no, no, this can't be happening.

I CANT TASTE FOOD!

submitted by The ghost of Grace
(March 6, 2016 - 11:50 am)

UGH I NEED TO REREAD MY STORIES BETTER.

GRACE DIED I AM VERY SORRY I KEEP CONFUSING EVERYONE! ;--; 

submitted by Park Manager/Novelis, Cricket Amusement Park
(March 6, 2016 - 10:36 am)

Wow, ghost of Grace. That was an...interesting monologue there.

Micna says tgga. I know you're heartbroken at the loss of Grace, Micna, and now you want your Tigger stuffed animal for comfort. Here you go.

Shhh, it's okay, you don't have to stop crying, go ahead, dear, get it out. I know, I know, you had a special bond with Grace. She always had a soft spot in her heart for you.

*snifs*

And, I...I miss her too. She drove me crazy sometimes, but...she's my AE.

Don't worry, we'll get through this together.

This is Micna...she's very sad. 

submitted by Owlgirl
(March 6, 2016 - 11:55 am)

Wow, Owlgirl, your post was so sad.

Hey, Park Manager, you should use that! You know, when you do your post or whatever where they find the dead charries...

Ski lodge is going great.

And if you r wondering what I am doing here just commenting on stuff is cuz I am too busy to participate in rps and rr and ski lodges and whatnot but I do have enough time to comment on and observe.

 
I am also keeping tabs on the farm ski lodge. 

submitted by ski lodge observer
(March 6, 2016 - 12:03 pm)

@Ski Lodge Observer.

Sorry, but I do not understand what you mean, about the ghost thing.

 

Also, Owlgirl, yes that was very sad. The picture of the pygmy owl was adorable, though. 

submitted by Park Manager/Novelis, Cricket Amusement Park
(March 6, 2016 - 10:53 pm)

@Novelist:

Oh, I meant when they find the body.

Though I doubt Mirax T will ever be found...that was quite an laborate cover-up job! 

submitted by Ski lodge observer
(March 7, 2016 - 6:24 pm)

TOP

submitted by Top
(March 7, 2016 - 8:44 pm)

Oh ok. Sorry I'm late I need to catch up ....

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Day 5 ~ "GRACE!!!" screamed Owlgirl.  "OH NO NOOOOOOOOOOO!" She bent down next to her body. "No . . .," she sobbed. Micna flew down and landed on her shoulder, sad, droopy eyes plastered on her feathered face.

"Someone suffocated her!" exclaimed The Novelist.

"The person is the most viscious killer ever," said Joss. "This is like a real mystery show! This person is crafty snd smart."

"Mhm," said Amber, "I mean, who can suffocate someone with cotton candy?"

The murderer smirked.  I can.

"This person is strong, too," mentioned Elvina. "Almost too strong to be fully human."

"Like another creature or a hybrid or a humanoid?" asked Aquina W.

She nodded.

They all gasped, knowing they were many different creatures among them.

"Well, said The Novelist, "it's best if we don't let anyone out of our sight." She gestured her hand a colorful building in the distance. "It's getting night soon. We have to get to bed. Night is the most common time when killers are about."

"Do you think we also need a guard?" asked Joss.

They others nodded slowly. "Sure. Why not?"

"Then I'll be the guard."

"Are you sure?"

Joss nodded.

"Well, let's head over to the bounce house," the Novelist continued.

-----

The bounce house was the biggest bounce hpuse the CBers ever saw. It was big as a mansion, and all the walls and floors and ceilings were made from rubber. And everything was so colorful, with rainbow streaks of blue, red, yellow, and green.

"Wow," everyone gasped.

"How does the furniture stay put?" asked Amber. "How do WE stay put?"

"Simple," I said, walking over to a wall. "A button in each room controls the bounce. Right now no rooms are bouncey, so it's like staying in any normal rooms. I highly suggest you don't press the button in the dining room, kitchen, or especially the bathrooms. Bedrooms are fine. There's even a room with a bunch of balls."

"Oh cool," said Joan.

"I'll stay up and guard the bedrooms," said Joss.

"But we need more people. We have to do shifts. I'll stay up, too," said Aquina. 

"Okay guys, it's nighttime. We better get to sleep. And don't forget to lock your windows and doors!" 

Everyone nodded and raced up the stairs.  

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Finally, another hot day had ended, and another cool night had rose. The moon with its---

"Oh yes I got it!" shouted Joss. She grinned happily in the darkened room, sitting in a soft recliner in the den. "I got all the bananas! Take that, Donkey-Kong!"

The blue light from her cellphone screen glared in her face as her avatar jumped from one platform to another, catching coins and bananas.

The murderer peeked down the stairs and smirked as they saw a distracted human sitting comfortably in a recliner.

Silently, the villian creaked down the steps and waltzed into the den dressed all in black, with a thick, long computer wire in hand. They crept up behind Joss, and because she was so absorbed in her game, she didn't see the person until it was too late.

The person wrapped the wire around her neck . . .

Joss gagged and choked but she knew what to do. Using her last breaths, she opened the camera app on her cellphone and snapped a fuzzy, blurry photo of the murderer. The light flashed in their face and they quickly fled.

Joss layed slumped in the chair, on phone falling onto the floor as it slid underneath.

"Joss?" called Aquina a few minutes later. "I heard somene. Are you okay?" In a pair of underwater pajamas, she raced down the steps and gasped when she saw the body.

"Joss . . . ?" she swiveled the recliner around and gasped. "OH MY SEAWEED JOSS!" she screamed.

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R.I.V. Joss. Rest in video games

Okay so start making your suspect list you already have a clue! 

Also, please let me know if this is too scary. I just don't know any calmer ways to kill people.  

 

 

 

 

 

submitted by Park Manager/Novelis, Cricket Amusement Park
(March 8, 2016 - 2:20 am)