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NDT and Wolfgirl67's BIONICLE fanfic!

OK. Made the thread. Now stop pestering me. AND STOP LOOKING OVER MY SHOULDER!!!

Thank you. Anyway...

So I had some ideas for our fanfiction. I was thinking:

1. In the time before Makuta betrayed Mata Nui, with the De, Fe, and Av Matoran.

2. After Mata Nui killed Makuta, the De, Fe, and Av Matoran come back into Spherus Magna.

3. In the inbetween time, while the DFA (De, Fe, and Av) are in hiding together, occasionally getting glimpses of the outside world and the battle with Makuta and such.

So...let me know what you think! Personally, I think that three, as the time period we know the most about, might be the easiest, but 1 or 2 would be interesting to work with.

Andy P. C. says gpun. Good pun? I didn't make a pun...

~Wolfgirl67 signing off.

P. S. Are we going to write this in the style of Greg Farshtey, which is a pretty good style for BIONICLE stories (fast and snappy with little description)? Or should we take our own style, go slower with more description? Lemme know!

BTW About our characters: Draila, Dixtron and Gula should be the main characters. Maybe they go on a quest of some kind? I'll be Gula and Draila.

submitted by Wolfgirl67, age 12, The Chatterbox!
(April 5, 2010 - 2:36 pm)

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Vick says ghwe.

 

~~NDT~~

submitted by NDT, age 9, NC
(May 28, 2010 - 4:01 pm)

:)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Karzanni had awakened.

He was on a beach.

He was out of focus, and dreams swept out of his mind....

 

Dixtron was asleep.

Draila did not know what to do, and as she wondered, she drifted of into unconciousness...

 

The Mizat ware fighting harder than they ever had before. Iexp and Fapu (air toa) Worked together to make a whirlwind of stone...if only they knew what would happen.

Gina shot water blasts at the opposers, but once she hit Upaf (fire)'s beam, they mixed, and hit the stone whirlwind...the Vakhi shot their blasters...

An explosion.

the Mizat were dead.

The Vakhi turned to go.

The only survivors were Iexp and Gina...

 

"AAAAAAAAAAAAH!" came Dixtron's cry. "Bigscary-Toa! Toa from my dream. AAH! I expand Gula!!!! Ohjusttoawhatjusttoa!!!!"

Iexp commented, "Maybe you should rest for a while."

(P.S. Someone's s'posed 2 get captured.)

 

Vick says fapu.

 

~~NDT~~ 

submitted by NDT, age 9, NC
(May 30, 2010 - 3:10 pm)

"yesyesyes ithinkishould." "butijust...dreamedofyou!!!"

 

Vick asys pynz.

 

~~NDT~~

submitted by NDT, age 9, NC
(May 31, 2010 - 5:34 pm)

Iexp looked at Draina. "Is he...not terribly smart?"

 

"No," said Draina. "He's just panicking."

 

Andy P. C. says mkoz.

~Wolfgirl67 signing off.

submitted by Wolfgirl67, age 12, The IW!
(June 3, 2010 - 7:52 pm)

Haha...not terribly smart....

 

Vick says-omigosh-pamp! Pamper!

 

~~NDT~~

submitted by NDT, age 9yrs lala!, CN
(June 4, 2010 - 3:19 pm)

UUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!

 

Vcik sysas pxdw.

 

~~NMDR~~

submitted by NDT
(June 9, 2010 - 8:54 pm)

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vick-ubwk

submitted by ndt
(June 16, 2010 - 5:08 pm)