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NDT and Wolfgirl67's BIONICLE fanfic!
OK. Made the thread. Now stop pestering me. AND STOP LOOKING OVER MY SHOULDER!!!
Thank you. Anyway...
So I had some ideas for our fanfiction. I was thinking:
1. In the time before Makuta betrayed Mata Nui, with the De, Fe, and Av Matoran.
2. After Mata Nui killed Makuta, the De, Fe, and Av Matoran come back into Spherus Magna.
3. In the inbetween time, while the DFA (De, Fe, and Av) are in hiding together, occasionally getting glimpses of the outside world and the battle with Makuta and such.
So...let me know what you think! Personally, I think that three, as the time period we know the most about, might be the easiest, but 1 or 2 would be interesting to work with.
Andy P. C. says gpun. Good pun? I didn't make a pun...
~Wolfgirl67 signing off.
P. S. Are we going to write this in the style of Greg Farshtey, which is a pretty good style for BIONICLE stories (fast and snappy with little description)? Or should we take our own style, go slower with more description? Lemme know!
BTW About our characters: Draila, Dixtron and Gula should be the main characters. Maybe they go on a quest of some kind? I'll be Gula and Draila.
submitted by Wolfgirl67, age 12, The Chatterbox!
(April 5, 2010 - 2:36 pm)
(April 5, 2010 - 2:36 pm)
ok, here's my plotline:
1: Dixtron the De-Matoran goes away from his village on the Tren Krom peninsula
2: he gets hurt by Rahi and gets knocked out
3: he wakes up in a chamber with a Fematoran, named Gula
4: his wound heals
5: the two go to the Core
6: they meet Draila the Av-Matoran
7: they go to the planet Daxia and join the Order of Mata Nui, led by Toa Helrix
8: whatever else comes to mind
As to your question, I think we should just see how we write the story.
Vick says fzko. For Zoko? he has a gift for Zoko (from the Genak's story). TRAITOR!
~~NDT~~
(April 6, 2010 - 2:47 pm)
Alright, back to the top, you silly thread!
Vick says aefy.
~~NDT~~
(April 6, 2010 - 2:58 pm)
OK, I like your idea! :) Let's do it.
Um...will you start? I mean, Dixtron is your character, and the story is going to start pretty much in his point of view, so...
Andy P. C. says rocg. Rock. He's a Toa of Stone!
~Wolfgirl67 signing off.
(April 6, 2010 - 8:01 pm)
haha maybe we should include him in the story! just kidding. a Stone Toa could work, tho.
Dixtron was bored. All that ever happened in this village was that someone talked too loud, and the other villagers were angry. He wanted to find adventure.
So find it he did.
The instant he stepped out of the village, he was attacked by some Nui-Rama. "No! Get away!" He flung his arms around desperately, but it was no use. After a while of this, he blacked out.
When he awoke, a Fe-Matoran was bending over him. "Are you alright?" she asked, in the merest whisper. Obviously she could tell that he was a De-Matoran from his silver armor. She was covered in dark gray armor, and he could tell that she was a Fe-Matoran.
"Here," she said, handing him a blaster. "Take this. The next time you're attacked by Rahi, you won't faint." She laughed, quietly.
Dixtron took the blaster and shakily stood up. Staring at it, he wondered that if he had had this at the time that he was attacked by the Nui-Rama, he could have escaped. "Thanks," he said. "I'm Dixtron."
"I'm Gula."
"Do you have a weapon too?"
"Yes," she said, showing him her blaster.
Vick says ocfu. Octopus food! says Wolfgirl.
~~~NDT~~~
~Wolfgirl67 signing off.
(April 6, 2010 - 10:41 pm)
Gula, though she didn't know it, was just as bored as Dixtron. She knew she should take Dixtron back to his village and then get back to hers, she just couldn't.
"Hum-de-du-dum," she hummed, and Dixtron yelped and clapped his hands over his ears.
"Sorry," she breathed. "So where are we going?"
"I don't know," he said. "But not back to my village."
"How about we go to the Tren Kom penisula?"
Andy P. C. says byxv.
~Wolfgirl67 signing off.
(April 7, 2010 - 12:36 pm)
"But we're on it," Dixtron replied. "Hey...can you build vehicles too? Like, strong ones that can fly, oh, I don't know, maybe 100 feet?"
"Yes...why?" Gula answered.
"Well...have you ever heard of the Core?"
Vick says otkt. Oatkit?
~~NDT~~
(April 7, 2010 - 6:08 pm)
TOP! I am sadly not in an inspired mood today.
Vick says biyd.
~~NDT~~
(April 9, 2010 - 3:04 pm)
Perhaps you should go to Draila's point of veiw, something like...
...but she knew something great was coming.
That could be an end piece.
Vick says iieh.
~~NDT~~
(April 10, 2010 - 12:25 pm)
POST! Why aren't you posting? ARRG!
Vick says arwm.
~~NDT~~
(April 11, 2010 - 5:48 pm)
I can get a new partner if you stop posting. I CAN!
Vick says rmyt.
~~NDT~~
(April 12, 2010 - 6:31 pm)
Well, excuuuuuse me, Mr. Little Brother. It's not MY fault.
Ok, //Draila// (that's how you show whose point of view you're writing from):
(GET LOST!) Draila awoke with a start and wandered around aimlessly. Her hut was peaceful. Everything was peaceful. Unlike her dreams.
She couldn't remember too much of them, but they had been full of darkness and screams. How odd. She couldn't remember ever having dreams like this before. They were frightening.
She peeked outside through the window, just to make sure everything was OK.
Everything was.
All of a sudden an electric jolt surged up her spine. She shuddered and then grinned.
Whatever it was, something great was coming.
Andy P. C. says atab. A tab. Make a new tab for what?
~Wolfgirl67 signing off.
(April 13, 2010 - 12:56 pm)
I never thought of the time. maybe while Taradax was in order, and they hadn't discovered the Core yet. did you know that when the Makuta were ruled by M-something, they acctually worked for Mata Nui?
Vick says gima. {{Name inspiration}}
~~NDT~~
(April 13, 2010 - 3:05 pm)
Gima the Water Toa!
No I didn't know that. Interesting...
That sounds like a good idea. Let's try it.
Andy P. C. says tgbn.
~Wolfgirl67 signing off.
(April 15, 2010 - 3:54 pm)
Hm...Gima the water toa. Hm...
Vick says mzat.
~~NDT~~
(April 15, 2010 - 4:28 pm)
YEAH! and, Iexp the Rock Toa! the last of the Toa...Mizat!
Vick says iexp.
~~NDT~~
(April 16, 2010 - 10:02 pm)