the terminal

Chatterbox: Inkwell

the terminal

the terminal

okay introductions first off. this is like a text adventure kind of. if you dont know what that is celineburningbright explains it here: http://www.cricketmagkids.com/chatterbox/inkwell/node/553133  

sidenote: celine im so sorry i promise im not stealing your idea please ive had this idea for a while im begging you i plan to contribute to your thing youre a good writer im not a plagarist officer please.

other sidenote: everybody please do celines thing too

anyway ive always wanted to do something thats kind of like a text adventure because there was a game i played when i was knee high to a grasshopper. (please assist me in bringing that saying back into common usage)  and anyway the game was a text adventure and it was real cool. ive tried making text adventure type things before but they all failed. failed ideas freak me out, i feel personally guilty about their demise. 

okay im getting off topic, which is a skill of mine. this is set in the same universe as everything i write, because thats the kind of perso i am. it will include: supernatural stuff. weird bit characters. elements of mystery. nightmare sequences. distinct stylistic choices by yours truly.

and most of all, it will involve you, reader. for through the terminal, you will be able to support the character you have been given control of. dont let the power get to your head. possible suggestions for actions will be provided, if you ask for them. 

ill post the first turn after this post shows up. feel free to ask questions, ill answer them if i decide that i want to. 

submitted by Lord Entropy
(August 24, 2023 - 9:47 pm)

STAY PERFECTLY STILL ==>

You stand perfectly still.  The thing, "Lillie", is leaning down toward you. It makes these odd panting noises...

Lillie(?): hhhhhhh.....wwwwhhhherreessssss....llllliiiiiillllliiiieeeeee?

Okay... So it's looking for someone named Lillie? Huh. You still don't have anything better to call it. So "Lillie" is looking at you... Looking? It doesn't have eyes, so it's hard to tell what t's doing. You start to wonder about how it works, biologically. No eyes, ventilation in the face that is ostensibly for breathing purposes, and some form of vocal chords, because it can speak, or at least make noises adjacent to speech.

You've gotten off track again. You need to pay better attention to the actual things happening.

THINK HAPPY THOUGHTS==>

You try to keep your mind on positive things in case "Lillie" can read your thoughts or whatever. This is a little more difficult than it might have been, since one of the most positive things in your life is standing next to you, and you're uncertain as to whether you could save her if it came down to that. No. That's a bad direction to go down. Think about something else. Think about...

Alex! And the random college student you left him with. What are they doing right now? Are there... things near them too?  The person who leapt down a cliff... what did they say their name was?

Lillie(?): ttttttteeeeennnnnnnnn.......hssssssss....

Ten. That was it.

Lillie(?): knnnnnoooowwwwsssss....wh......where.....lllllllllllliiiiiiiiiiiiilllllllllllllliiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeee.....

Lillie(?): hhhhhhhh..... YOU WILL TAKE US.

What do you do next? 

submitted by Lord Entropy
(October 21, 2023 - 10:03 pm)

top

submitted by top
(October 23, 2023 - 8:30 pm)

Do an Irish jig around "Lillie"

submitted by CelineBurning Bright, age :), Jigs and Pigs, why not?
(October 29, 2023 - 6:17 pm)
submitted by top
(November 6, 2023 - 11:05 pm)
submitted by another top
(November 14, 2023 - 9:52 pm)
submitted by top
(November 15, 2023 - 11:55 am)

sorry for not posting in a while, i'm working on several projects at the moment, and i had to pick which ones to contiue working on. it's genuinely difficult to make descisions like this, my stories ar every dear to me, but this story is on hiatus FOR NOW. hopefully, there'll be a new part out not to long from now.

submitted by Lord Entropy, my bad
(November 15, 2023 - 10:36 pm)

okay, we're so back

~~

You desperately search your increasingly manic thoughts for some solution to your problem. One possibility shines through. It feels natural, and you barely realize just how irrational it is. 

DANCE LIKE NEVER BEFORE==>

You run toward the abomination, at full speed. Wren lunges forward to stop you, and you grab her. You hold her close to you and start doing a frantic, clumsy approximation of an irish jig. 

Wren: DEEN! What are you DOING?!

YOU: I HAVE ABSOLUTELY NO IDEA!!!!

You don't have any idea what you're doing. Because it isn't you doing it. You're aware suddenly of what is happening to you. These aren't your ideas. Something is putting them in your head. The noise, the noise in your head. Telling you to splash a stranger with polluted water, or to burn down your best friends house, or dance with some random monster in the woods. 

It's absurd. It's all so absurd. 

You laugh and laugh until tears start to pour down your face. 

Wren: Deen! Deen, are you all right?

You smile at her.

YOU: No!

Wren: Please stop Deen. You.. You're scaring me.

You stop dancing immediately, but it takes a little longer to stop laughing.

Wren: What were you doing, Deen?!

YOU: I... I do not know. Dancing, I suppose.

Wren: But why? 

YOU: More brain manipulation nonsense, I believe. 

Wren: Do you think the Alien is doing this?

YOU: No. He does not seem to be the type to do something without directly bragging about it. Besides, it feels like several beings that are causing me to make... Strange decisions. And... Oh.

Wren: What is it?

You're starting to feel inordinately tired again. 

...

You awaken, strapped to that table again.

The alien isn't here. What do you do? 

submitted by okay, new part
(November 24, 2023 - 10:52 pm)

Observe the room closely

submitted by Hawkstar, age Stars , My thoughts in Korea
(November 25, 2023 - 8:10 pm)

OBSERVE ROOM CLOSELY==>

You take a better look at the room you're confined to. The walls are bare and white, beyond a poster of a kitten hanging from a branch. There's a caption on it that says "HUMAN INSPIRATIONAL SAYING," in bold red letters. A machine to your right is contracting and expanding like a slinky. The door remains closed, and sealed. Your arms and legs remain bound. You see what might be a camera on the ceiling. The door slowly begins to creak open.

The Alien: Hello, sunhine! Nice to see you awake... Or, asleep I guess.

YOU: Did you make me pass out again?!

The Alien: Maybe!

YOU: Wha- Maybe?! You have me ted up, what use is it being coy? 

The Alien: I enjoy it!

YOU: Look, I don't even know your name. You are an alien, and you're a weirdo creep who steals my organs and my memories, I assume. That is all I know. 

The Alien: Yeah, that's pretty accurate. Anyway, I doubt I'll be giving you my name anytime soon. Names have power, y'know. But, ah, you can call me Hastur, if you like.

YOU: Okay, Hastur... Why did you make me fall asleep? I was in a potentially dangerous situation. And now I cannot assist Wren! 

Hastur: Ah, I'm certain she'll be okay. Anyway, I called you here because, I realized the power disparity between us was making me uncomfortable, and I wanted to give you the chance to ask me annnyyyy question you wanted. Maybe two questions if ya play your cards right.

He pauses. What do you ask? 

submitted by Lord Entropy
(November 25, 2023 - 10:26 pm)

Who is lillie

submitted by Hawkstar, age Stars , My thoughts in Korea
(November 26, 2023 - 3:40 pm)

ASK: WHO IS LILLIE==>

You turn to... Hastur, you suppose.

YOU: There is this creature in the forest. Right now, I suppose. Posibly putting the person closest to me in serious danger.

Hastur: Cool!

You frown. 

YOU: Yes, well, I call this creature Lillie. Because, see, it was continually requesting that I assist it in finding a person named Lillie, and I initially misunderstood its meaning.

Hastur: Very interesting. Creatures. I like that.

YOU: So, who is Lillie?

Hastur:... Clever. You could either be talking about the creature or the person, and so I have to answer both. Tricky! I will answer both, because I like talking. Okay. So. The creature is likely a Woodsman. They're supposed to be human beings banished into the forests for performing "Obscene Rites, blah blah blah, etc." They became weird inhuman creatures, and it's very easy for higher powers to control them. 

YOU: Higher powers... Like you?

Hastur: Hahaha!  Sure, If I wanted to! But I would never sully my hands by associating with a Woodsman. So yes, something definitely told those creatures to look for Lillie. Now, as for Lillie herself... I don't know! There's a lot of folks named Lillie. 

YOU: ..oh. Yeah, I should have seen that coming.

Hastur: Buuuuut.... There is an abductee of mine named Lillie... I did with her basically what I do to you. Y'know. Organ harvesting, brain tampering, dream invasions... She lived around here for a while, but I guess she moved away. Out of my range, y'know. 

YOU: You have a range on your powers?

Hastur: yeh. 

(second part will be posted tomorrow, no command necessary.)

submitted by Lord Entropy
(November 26, 2023 - 10:46 pm)

Alright, awesome. :D But first I wanted to say... the god of shepherds???

and, @Hawkstar, ooh, clever question! :) 

submitted by CelineBurning Bright, age Coincide?, Dadidadida
(November 27, 2023 - 1:38 am)

Thank you! I thought it was a necessary question.

submitted by Hawkstar, age Stars , My thoughts in Korea
(November 27, 2023 - 12:22 pm)

yea. but i meant more along the lines of the yellow king, like the book.

submitted by Lord Entropy
(November 27, 2023 - 3:18 pm)