Poem I wrote
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Poem I wrote
Poem I wrote :-/ I'm not very good at rhyming, but it's inspired by something that happened a few hours ago. I'd like title suggestions, too, if you would :D:
You’re not worth the tears
You’re not worth the pain
You’re not worth the kiss
When we make up again
I don’t need these scars
I don’t want this ache
Our smiles and our laughter
Suddenly are so fake
Across the dance floor
With her in your arms
You smile at me there
And I’m alone in the dark
I talk to you
You turn away
Suddenly I feel
This ache here to stay
I know it's not very good, but it's sort of deep. I was hoping that would make up for my complete lack of competence when it comes to poetry :(
submitted by Koffee
(December 11, 2009 - 8:50 pm)
(December 11, 2009 - 8:50 pm)
Why thank you :D Actually something I picked up during nano. Got a lot of tacklehugs on that site...*sigh*, sweet memories :D And...since this is the thread that I wrote the poem about...I figure here is the best place to make the confession. He's been really super nice to me and treating me the best...and I kind of like him again :( I want to give him a second chance, but I don't want to make it seem like he can walk all over me or anything. But he honestly seems authentic this time. Like when he'll text me at like 7:30 on the weekends to see if I'm awake yet. Or when he tells me the scores of the football games I can't watch. Or when he lets me make fun of the ducks and doesn't get mad like he used to (he's a huge duck fan and I can't stand them (the sports team, I mean)) and I just can't think straight. I need your guys' advice on what I should do. Do you think it's worth it? Or should I just say goodbye and go on with my life? Either way, I'll always wonder what would have happened if I'd done the other....*sigh* life is so confusing sometimes :P
(January 3, 2010 - 4:10 pm)
:( No one will read my sob story :'( Doesn't anyone love me?
(January 4, 2010 - 10:53 pm)
I'm always for giving second chances. There are two possibilities here: a) the one you're afraid of - he is trying to regain his power over you and hurt you again, or b) the one you'd better consider - he's trying to make up for what he did. People change, and if I were you, I'd give him that second chance. Be on your guard, but trust him again. Sometimes that investment in someone can change his life. But whatever you do, we will still give you tacklehugs. *tacklehugs Koffee*
Cheers and tacklehugs,
lavendershy
(January 5, 2010 - 10:04 am)
*tacklehugs back* Aw, thank you :D You guys are such a help in things like this. I can get honest answers out of you, because you're not biased because you don't know any of the people. Versus a lot of my friends that tell me I should forgive him just because they think we'd be a cute couple. I love my friends to death but they can be a little much sometimes, lol :D *tacklehugs once more for good measure*
Love and tacklehugs,
Koffee
(January 5, 2010 - 8:07 pm)
Well, keep us (me at least) posted. It is nice to have an outside opinion, no? So, yeah. Don't die. And Stuff.
Cheers,
lav
(January 6, 2010 - 1:12 am)
Aw, thanks :) I have a new pet peeve after today: When guys sneak up behind you and grab you and stuff. It's really uncomfortable.... I mean, it's not like we're going out, so don't touch me, m'kay? Is anyone else that creeped out by that??
(January 6, 2010 - 9:21 pm)
Yeah, that really freaks me out too. They just go up to you and give you 'jumper cables', when they pinch your sides really hard. It's creepy and it hurts. *tacklehugs Koffee*
Can someone give me a tacklehug? I'm staying home from school today because I have a really bad case of pinkeye. :( Oh well, at least guys won't come and grab me when I'm at my locker, at least.
(January 7, 2010 - 7:28 am)
Ah, the joys of homeschooling. :D *tacklehugs Ema* *rushes off to rub hand sanitizer on self* *pats Ema's back* *rushes off to rub on more hand sanitizer* *returns wearing rubber gloves and dentist-type face mask* *tacklehugs Ema many times*
Cheers,
lavendershy
(January 7, 2010 - 8:10 pm)
*gives spectacular tacklehug* Feel better! :(
(January 7, 2010 - 9:00 pm)