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CHAPTER ONE:
"Ok, everyone, that's a wrap!" I said, as we finished a practice session.
"Whew! Who knew that takin' my husband's place in guitar playin' could be so hard?!" My wife, Lizzie, said.
"You were good, though." Micky said.
"Yeah. Oh, I have a date with a girl tonight." Davy said.
"Hmm. What's her name?" Peter asked.
"Yvonne, I think. She has an accent." Davy said.
"Hmm. I've heard of that name somewhere. But, I can't remember where." Lizzie said.
"Yeah, well, maybe you heard it on the TV." I said.
Davy left half an hour later, and Lizzie and I went to bed.
I was halfway asleep until Lizzie gently shook me awake.
"Mike! Mike!" She whisper-yelled.
"What?" I said.
"I remember where I heard that name before: In a horror movie!" She said.
"What horror movie?" I said.
"A VAMPIRE movie! It's called 'Dracula 2: The Wolf-Man returns'! Yvonne is Dracula's niece! And she's evil! I bet that the Yvonne that Davy's goin' out with is a vampire, and that she's gonna turn him into a vampire, and then Davy's gonna turn US into vampires, and then we're gonna turn our friends and family into vampires, and then they'll do the same, and soon the whole WORLD is gonna be vampires!" Lizzie exclaimed.
"Are you absolutely SURE thar Yvonne is a vampire?" I replied.
"Yeah. If we don't want to become vampires, we need to go rescue Davy NOW!" Lizzie exclaimed.
After 15 minutes of beggin' and pleadin', she finally convinced me to get up, get dressed, and wake the others up.
"Ok, so, we have garlic, wooden stakes, holy water, and a mirror with some lipstick." Lizzie said.
"Hold it, what's the lipstick for? I understand all the other stuff, but how's lipstick gonna make us prove that Yvonne's a vampire?" Micky said.
"Just in case I need a touch up." Lizzie replied.
We all jumped into The MonkeeMobile, and headed to the castle.
"This is frightening." Peter said.
"Ok, see that bird-like thing? I'm pretty sure it's a VAMPIRE BAT." Lizzie said.
"C'mon, Lizzie, there's no such things as vampires of wolf-men." I said.
She didn't listen, she just kept talkin' 'bout monsters and such.
'It's only 1968, Michael. She'll get over it...eventually.' I thought to myself.
"Von't you come in?" A voice said, staartling me.
"Yeah. Yeah, we will." Lizzie said.
"Good. I am Yvonne, The Count's neice. You're friends of Davy Jones', yes?" Yvonne said.
"Yeah, we wanted to know where he is." Peter said.
"He's visiting our dog in the basement. Ou dog... is more like a wolf." Yvonne said, leading us into a library.
"Ok, that settles it! I'm gonna go into that basement if it's the last thing I do alive!" Lizzie said.
"Oh, no, you don't!" I said, as I grabbed her shirt sleeve.
"Oh, c'mon, Mike, where's your sence of adventure? Of excitement? Of possibly savin' your friend?" Lizzie said.
"I don't have any of that. I just want you safe, ok? I don't want any of you gettin hurt." I replied.
"You're right. You always are. But, maybe, Peter, Micky, and I should at least patrol the surrounding ares? Just for 10 minutes? Please, Mike?" Lizzie pleaded.
"Yeah, it would give us a chance to find a pasageway or somethin'." Micky said.
"What he said." Peter replied.
"Ok, fine. But, you be careful, ok?" I said.
But, before I was even finished with my sentence, they were out the door.
"Hello, Mike." Yvonne said, startling me AGAIN.
"Hi, Yvonne?" I replied nervously.
"I have something special for you." She replied.
She leaned towards me, but I backed away.
"There's something I want to give you." Yvonne said.
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I know, it's kinda long, but I PROMISE I'll continue it tomorrow.
submitted by Emekittycon Kitten, age 12, Kitten Kingdom
(April 13, 2021 - 3:30 pm)
(April 13, 2021 - 3:30 pm)
AHHHH TOPTOPTOPTOPTOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(May 2, 2021 - 11:52 am)
CHAPTER THREE, PART ONE!!!!!!!!
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"AHH! Oh, that clock scared me!" Peter said.
Then, the wispy clouds in the sky turned into thick clouds, and turned a deep shade of crimson. The calm wind turned fierce, and the trees shook.
I could hear Lizzie scream, but the wind blocked it out. Micky was clutching onto Peter so hard, his knuckles were white.
Davy was speechless, his face so pale, he looked like a ghost! Peter was so scared, he just stared at the crimson sky.
I was scared too, but before I was able to say something, the clouds broke apart to reveal the full moon, which was so bright, it sent down a circle of light to the ground.
"MIKE! MIKE!" I heard Lizzie say faintly.
"WHAT?!" I replied.
I couldn't hear what she said, because the wind got stronger.
There was a flash of light, as the clouds blocked the moon for a split second.
Then, the wind changed direction, and started blowing from inside our pad.
"MIKE! THE WIND IS TRYING TO PUSH YOU INTO THE MOON-LIGHT! DON'T FIGHT IT!!" Lizzie yelled.
"DO YOU WANT ME TO DIE BECAUSE OF THAT?!" I yelled back.
"JUST DO IT!" Lizzie screamed.
The wind blew harder and harder, until it was strong enough to push me into the moon-light.
My heart was pounding as two glowing blood-red chains wrapped around my arms.
"MICHAEL! NOOOOO!" I heard Lizzie scream.
"IS THIS SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN?!" Micky yelled to Lizzie.
"NO, IT ISN'T! WHY IS IT DOIN' THIS?! THIS WASN'T SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN!!" Lizzie yelled back.
The chains dragged me up into the air, and, out of nowhere, a swarm of vampire bats surrounded me, shrieking and squeaking at a deafning volume.
The moon shone brighter, until it temporarly blinded me. I screamed, partly out of fear, partly because the light was hurting me.
The bats kept flying around me, and then, they all came towards me, still shrieking and squeaking, and it was purely DEFEANING!
Then, the change began. I felt my skin getting paler, my canine teeth thuring into fangs.
My throat became as dry as a Texan desert in the middle of the driest season, and trust me when I say that, I lived in Texas!
Anyway, after the change, the bats flwe off. The clouds changed from crimson, to smoky gray. The moon didn't shine as bright, and the chains let go of me.
I felt weak and tired, and without the chains supporting me, I fell to the ground.
"Mike! Quick, get in the human net formation!" Lizzie ordered the others.
They did just that, and I landed safely.
"Ohhhh..." I groaned.
"Mike? Are you ok?" Lizzie asked me.
"I... I... ohhh... I don't feel too good." I said.
"Oh, Mike, you're so pale!" Lizzie said.
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Hope you liked it!
(May 5, 2021 - 1:46 pm)
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Oh, FOR CRYIN' OUT LOUD THIS IS AT THE BOTTOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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(May 12, 2021 - 12:17 pm)
AHHHH I WILL POST THE REST OF CHAPTER THREE TOMORROW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MAYBE!!!!!!!!
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(May 18, 2021 - 12:57 pm)