New Short Story!!!!!!!

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New Short Story!!!!!!!

New Short Story!!!!!!!

 

 

Blue-Eyed Child

The tongues of fire twine around the fallen trees, the fallen buildings. The only light in this blurry gray existence.

The gun in my hand is heavy, and warm. From use. I see the tanks prowling the wreckage, spewing grit out behind them.

I know it should be sunrise, but the clouds suffocate the beautiful rays. It is dark , as if it were night. I walk around a doorway standing alone, defiantly, while the rest of the house has fallen.

A tiny spurt of flame illuminates somehting colorful in the gray wreckage. I lean down and pick it up.

A doll. Porcelain face, clothes bright despite the fine coat of ash that lands lightly on her skirt.

In my mind, I see a girl, eight at most, crying as we force her from the house, reaching out her hand, screaming for her doll. Her eyes are blue, blue like how the sky once was. But where is this blue-eyed child?

What have we done?

    I fall to my knees, burying my face in my hands.

What have we done?

submitted by Kit Kat
(August 15, 2009 - 9:15 pm)

Well, should I post some more? I have some on the following subjects-several Holocaust/Nazi ones, a Roanoke one, a titanic one, a child abuse one, and a few more war ones. and more. shall i?

submitted by Kit Kat
(August 24, 2009 - 8:26 am)

*sobs* Why...why must you make me cry Kit Kat? (good story by the way)

submitted by Maggie S., age 13, MN
(August 24, 2009 - 3:22 pm)

Oh yes, please do.

submitted by Mary W., age 11.69, NJ
(August 24, 2009 - 3:56 pm)

'Nother one!

 

Waiting

 

Every day is the same. A monotonous parade of days, months, years. I hat the waiting, though I know I should love it. Because each extra day means I am not yet to be killed. On the day the door is finally opened, I shall have to say good-bye. But I wish it was tomorrow. For otherwise, the waiting shall kill me first.

I did nothing wrong, I only did what was right. But apparantly right is wrong and wrong is right in this chasm of insanity the world has plunged into. All I have been taught has been swept away. Neighbors turn on neighbors. Friends on friends. And I can do nothing...just sit and wait.

I sit here on the cold cement floor, the thin prison garb I wear icy and damp. I cannot see anything, and it seems the world has been plunged into darkness. But I know everything about my cell. Nine steps to the door. Five bricks down to the food flap. Six steps to the other wall. And I am less than a step away from death.

Footsteps outside my door. A glimmer of lantern light. A key turning. Brown uniforms. Thin lips moving from beneath the caps. Saying, "It is time."

I follow them, and the prison door is now so close. So close. After so long. And it opens. Sunlight. Golden, a blessed warmth to fight the icy chill. Life. I tilt my face to the sky, ignoring the men with rifles aimed. Finally, my waiting is done.

submitted by Kit Kat
(August 25, 2009 - 8:39 am)

*stares* Kit Kat, when you get published, all the other writers out there are going to have some very very tough competition. That was amazing.

submitted by Mary W., age 11.69, NJ
(August 25, 2009 - 4:33 pm)

I love your stories. Even though they are all slightly depressing. But they are awesome!

submitted by Brynne
(August 26, 2009 - 2:13 pm)

Whoa!  You are going to give every other writer a very difficult competition when you get stories published!  Nice details, too, by the way...

submitted by Lauren M., age 13, Washington
(August 26, 2009 - 7:40 pm)

Who wants another?

submitted by Kit Kat
(August 26, 2009 - 3:23 pm)

I do! I do! Me me me!

submitted by Brynne, age 14, Flying away on
(August 26, 2009 - 8:09 pm)

PLEASE DO!!!!!!

submitted by Lauren M., age 13, Washington
(August 26, 2009 - 10:49 pm)

Kit Kat, it is said that sad songs are the most beautiful.  I agree with that sentiment.  You just proved that this is true for short stories as well.  Your stories flow beautifully, and make sense of the sadness in the world.  Your stories are very deep; I hope that you will never stop writing because that would be a waste of a precious talent.

submitted by Megan, age 14, Iota Klestis (D
(August 26, 2009 - 7:43 pm)

Oh my gosh, thanks soooo much! That is so sweet of you to say!

submitted by Kit Kat
(August 27, 2009 - 6:30 pm)

Even Another one!

A Look In the Mirror

My unifrom is pressed and clean, soft upon my skin. As the flag of the Fatherland rises, I feel the drumbeats of war echoeing in my bones. To serve the Fatherland. To serve Hitler. To Kill and murder. But Hitler's goal sounds nice. Germany will be heaven on earth. And I will be thanked for my work. I am thinking all this as I watch the flag rise. We will conquer.

I am told I am to go with five men to a house where they say Jews are hiding. As the truck rumbles along the streets, I finger my gun, feeling its smooth coldness. Conversation swirls around me, nonchalant and cheerful. Why should we care that we are going to kill Jews? Hitler is smart. And he knows they are vile.

We come to the house, a brick two story on the edge of town. We capture the owner, and march onward. They are hiding, the Jews. But we know where they are. As they are forced from beneath the floor, the eldest boy, only a year younger than I, turns to me. And he speaks the words I shall never forget.

"Take a good look at yourself, Nazi. A good look in the mirror." I point my gun at him. Tell him to just get in the truck. He and his family are dropped off at the ghetto's train station. The next day, he shall go toFlossenburg. And the day after, he shall be dead.

His words stay in my head though. That night, I look at myself in the mirror. And I can not bear it.

submitted by Kit Kat
(August 27, 2009 - 4:17 pm)

Wow.  Just wow.  Great!!!:) :D  Amazing!  How old are you??  These are so good...

 

I'm from WA, too, Lauren M!!!!!! :D 

submitted by R~D~
(August 27, 2009 - 6:17 pm)

I'm 13 almost 14 but i wrote the last two of these stories when i was 12.

submitted by Kit Kat
(August 28, 2009 - 5:37 am)