PoetryHere i
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PoetryHere i
Poetry
Here is a place to post your poetry. We can compare our work and use that to help us improve. Here is a poem I wrote recently:
Winter Clothes
When the weather turns cold and chilly
We don't wear shorts or thin dresses that're frilly
To keep the dog smiling and the cat purring
Many animals grow more furry
You'd think a tree does just the same
You'd think more leaves it would gain
Well, think again, it'd shed itself bare
But you won't find a human doing that anywere!
P.S.:Lightpaw (my CAPTCHA apprentice) says -gwini-. Not too sure what you mean there...
(October 26, 2019 - 8:16 am)
AAAHH NUUU MY BEAUTIFULLY CENTERED AND PERFECT POEM!!
It got cut up...
P.S.: Lightpaw is saying something about -kio-. Who's kio?
(October 26, 2019 - 9:32 am)
Actually, I think it looks cool that way. You can kinda read them as two separate poems but they make sense together too.
(October 27, 2019 - 7:31 am)
Here's a poem I wrote--
Evening Music
Dark trees against the purple stage
Pink clouds moving to the windy beat
Nature moving to the twilight tempo
Drum of footsteps
Quiet melody, evening music
(October 27, 2019 - 1:14 pm)
http://www.cricketmagkids.com/chatterbox/puddingsplace/node/315784
(October 27, 2019 - 5:51 pm)
I have a poem about my betta fish, which isn't really true anymore since she changed color, but here it is....
MY PET
The pretty betta curls,
Her limber body twilight crystal
Layered upon pearl.
Her tail a graceful fan,
Of moon rays swept with vivid blue
Waved by some graceful hand.
The water's her domain,
And though I claim her as my own
She is not truly tame.
Kind of old fashioned style but I like it anyway ;)
(October 28, 2019 - 10:00 am)
Two more poems--
Candle
A soft light
A warm delight
Flames orange and bright
A wax friend to defeat the night.
Pen
The pen runs across the page
The words never seeming to age
A wondrous tool
Only unused by the fool
How could one not love
This inky dove?
(October 28, 2019 - 6:05 pm)
Wow, these are really good! Thanks, guys! And here:
The TV drones
Turned very low
Slight snoring
Soft as snow
Cars rush past
Hurrying through dark
Night is quiet
Oh, but hark!
The sun climbs high
Into the sky
Sunlight seeps through
A window
And as the clock nears
Morning cheer
The day
Begins
To glow
(November 2, 2019 - 7:16 am)
First Frost
Ice dancing on green
Here comes the winter queen
Autumn's last wish
Presented with a frosty kiss
(November 2, 2019 - 9:53 am)
A Poem Without a Title:
inhale
the world is dead but I’m so alive
full of energy
fire in my eyes
exhale
the world is gray but I’ll make it colorful again
full of energy
fire in my eyes
as long as there is oxygen a fire never dies...
(November 4, 2019 - 10:08 pm)
What do you think you’re doing?
Who do you think you’re fooling.
Can you truly not see?
Or are unable to get past
The idea that those people
Those sweet, innocent, people
Are wolves in sheep's clothing
Waiting for the perfect time to pounce.
Do you remember
That time once ago.
When it was me you would come to
When it was them that you ran from
When it was her that insulted you
And belittled you
And bullied all of us.
Do you remember?
Or do you just not care
She’s torn me down
And hurt me worse
And worse
And worse.
Tell me
Have you ever seen her
Not taking someone down?
Not trying to ruin someone?
Not tearing someone apart?
Because I haven’t.
Who hurt you so much
That they made you think
That this is love?
That this is what you need
What you deserve?
Because it’s not.
At least— it wasn’t
You aren’t who you once were
Or did you hide her from me as you did the rest?
You take
And take
And take
And for what?
Some time in the spotlight?
Some time
Without us?
Were we that useless
Was I that useless?
Why
Why
Why
Are you like this?
Why must you hurt me?
Why must you do to me
What you promised
To never do
When the light had drowned
You were the candle
But now it seems
Your facade was only a flame
Easily blown away
And what’s left?
Forgotten wax
Tortured and drowning
in its on destruction
For it was the wax
Who asked for the flame.
For it was I
Who asked for you
We stan writing about the girl who you used to be best friends with but now doesn't talk to you :(
(November 5, 2019 - 11:41 pm)
camera flashes
and tears staining your lashes
melting roses
and nobody else knows this
so paint me red
and paint me blue
act like i’m ruining the view
sunset bridges
unrealized fire kisses
dripping roses
now everybody knows this
(November 6, 2019 - 3:21 pm)
Whoa. Usually I prefer freeverse to rhyming poems, but this is beautiful. Awesome job.
(November 10, 2019 - 9:19 pm)
Oh boy. I've got a lot to put here. Luckily, I know just where to start.
An Introduction
How can I explain to you these things that I write?
How can I explain to you the restlessness I feel, that can be answered only by the touch of pen on paper?
How can I explain to you the knowing, the way only one word fits just right, this jigsaw puzzle I create in my mind?
We have a word for it.
Poetry.
But this word means so many things to so many people -
How can I explain to you what it means to me?
I suppose one must start at the beginning.
A wave of emotions -
But this wave is made of words,
Not droplets.
They tumble,
One over the other,
Pounding against the dam in my mind
Until they drain out onto the paper.
It doesn't matter if I want it.
It doesn't matter if the words I write
Immortalize my joy
Or my pain.
But just as the tree must sway in the wind,
Though it risks toppling over,
I, too,
Must obey,
Must write.
Sometimes I wonder,
How is it for you?
Do you feel the pull of emotion
Pushing you to create?
Are you caught in moments where
All you can think about
Are the words that are waiting,
Urging you to put them on the paper?
Each poem is a message,
A memory,
A feeling.
I look back on each,
Like a timeline
And each I can feel as vividly as the moment those words took shape.
Is it like that for you?
As you read these words, what do you feel?
Is what we see of other people
Ever all that they are?
Maybe not, but
If one read all my poems,
I think that might be as close as you could get.
Sometimes I wonder,
Will anyone?
Will anyone ever read them all?
Will I ever let anyone?
One could never know how much courage that would take me.
If ever I give you one of my poems,
Hold it as a sign of immeasurable trust,
Because what you are really holding is a piece of my soul.
A poem is no small thing,
Though it may be few in words.
For that is the art of poetry -
Saying so much with so little.
(November 18, 2019 - 11:11 pm)