Okay here goses

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Okay here goses

Okay here goses nothing.

MJ stood at the front of the bank. She was supposed to robb it, but she didn't want to. She was not a robber, but her dad made her steal money from banks and stores. If she didn't give him the money by dawn he would punish her. He would beat until she curled up in a ball, wishing it would stopp. She couldn't call for help either. Her dad wouldn't let her. He was always watching her. Even though her dad owned a huge house and was rich she could never hide or get away.  

Recoulnatly she took her dagger out of her belt and threw it at a camera that was right in front of a door. The dagger struck, and if any was watching the screen became blank. She had been trained since she was a baby in crime and robbery. She rembermed how harsh and mean her dad had been when training. If she lost or failed she would end up my bruises and cuts all over her body from her dad.

She shruddered. Mj opened the door of the bank. Her dad wanted her to steal 20,000 dollars. She could do it, but she didn't want to it. The guilt would last for weeks. She quickly struck all the cameras with her dagger. 

Soon she arrived at a the door of a S.James bank money. He was a rich man everyone knew at her school and around the town. He would surely have 20,000 dollars behind this door.  She took a bomb from her belt and walked 40 feet away from the door.

She threw the bomb hasting a minute before she released it. The bomb exploded, and peices of metal threw everywhere, but none of them touched Mj.

Slowly she collected 20,000 dollars guilt bubbling inside her. Finally she collacted enough. She almost threw it back into the bank room, but then she thought about what her dad would do to her.

She exicted tears dripping down her cheeks. Someone would be mad in the morning.

"Sorry S.James" She said softly as she open the car door of her carr and hopped in. She drove away, guilt filling her up like water filling a room. 

submitted by MJ'S FRIEND, age 11, Californa
(August 6, 2017 - 6:21 pm)

Silene -

I skip down the hallway. It's m' first day at this school, and the people are looking at me like I'm considered insane. I am a bit eccentric, but maybe it's the western accent wi' a hint o' Yorkshire in it? It does sound rather strange, m' dialect. 

My papers are flying everywhere, so I toss my books, barely catching them for good measure. I hear a lot of "Hey!" and "Watch yourself!"s from the other students. I yell, "Sorry'!" back at them and continue my tornado. They have no sense of fun.

I slam into a locker, and since my books and papers were in the air, I fall down, and catch them. People are staring at me. "Howdy! No harm done!" I wave cheerfully back at them. Such cynics. Suddenly, a girl taps my shoulder.

"Um, that's my locker," she says nervously.

"Oh, well, th' lockers compl'tely fine, and you'll be getting to it anyway, so why tap on m' shoulder?" I say, turning around.

The girl looks completely flustered. "Uh . . ." she starts.

"I know, people call me eccentric all the time!" I tell her.

Instead of being at a loss for words, she continues, "Thank you for not giving me dirty glares, because I was accused of robbing the bank."

"Ah," I say, "well, m' great-grand uncl's staged a whole lot o' stickups, back in the days wi' sherrifs 'n all. Th' deputy lopp'd of their ears fur that."

Now the girl looked plain sick.

"Are you all righ'?" I ask, "Oh, and what you gal's name? M'ns Silene."

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I know, weird accent. I tried mixing outback, western, and yorkshire together. That was what I turned out with. 

submitted by Mirror
(August 22, 2017 - 1:28 pm)

I promise. I'll  post soon. Its just with school its hard to find a time to post.

submitted by MJ'S FRIEND, age 14, Californa
(August 22, 2017 - 10:07 pm)

MJ fiddled with her shirt, nervously. She wondered how the girl could possiblty ask that question? Of course she wasn't okay! She had lost all her friends, except Evergreen and everyone hated her. She had never been popular, but atleast she hadn't been known for robbery. 

She had been filled with sadness all day, and from the hour she had spent  in the bathroom with Evergreen they had not come up with a plan to rebel against her father. Her stupid father, the absurer, the crimnal. The real crimnal. She had the one to commite robbery, but her dad had forced her too. She wasn't the enemy. Her dad was. She wish mal and the others could see that.

She felt sick. From the sadness,and from the hatered that was coming at her from evreywhere. If she was a ordinary girl she would of went to the offfice, but she couldn't face her father. He would beat her up till she was almost dead. She dreaded the moment when the bell rang, the signal for the end of school.

And why had she have to lose that barcelt? Thats what had started all of this, but if she hadn't told the truth to her friends even though it had felt good she probably woukdn't of lost them. She hated herself for that. She was a distater. A walking distater.   

MJ shook her head. "I'm MJ. I'm not ok.....you probaly can guess why"

Silene looked at her puzzled. Mj could tell she waa a newbie. She had never seen this girl before, and she had been to caught up in the excitment of the first day of school [ at least her first day of school. School had started a few days before.] to notice the dirty looks MJ got. She hadn't heard the gossipe about MJ, either. Newbies never seeemed to know that tpye of stuff. As the girl was about to speak Evergreen walked over.

MJ was grateful. Evergreen was the only bright spot today. "We need to talk.  Meet me in the girl's bathroom. OK?"

MJ nodded. "I gotta go" She told Silene as she ran up to Evergreen. She looked back at the girl. "Hope you find your locker" 

Evergreen looked back at the girl, smirking. "Newbie?"

MJ looked at Evergreen. She was so pretty and understanding. She was grateful that Evergreen had dicuieded to stay with her, and help her.  "Yup"

"I thought so. Will she prove a good asset?"

Mj was confused. "Why? I thought we wwre going to keep this between us?"

Evergreen smiled. "I may have a plan, not a very detailed one, but still a plan.

Relief coursed through MJ. Any plan would do. She needed to do something. Anything. "What's thge plan yoy came up with."

Evergreen smiled. "You'll see"  Evergreen laughed.

MJ groaned. She hated waiting, espically when it was waiting to be a told a plan to rebel against her father. Evergreen laughed.

MJ Laughed.   Something about her crush's laugh was cautsigus. Evergreen laugh was beatuful.

submitted by MJ'S FRIEND, age 11, Californa
(August 22, 2017 - 10:44 pm)

Silene -

I bang int' m' locker. I hurr'dly shove m' books in there, and head ov'r t' the bathr'm. I th'nk I left m' science t'xtbook there. I don't find it there . . . wait, I think I left it in the principal's office. I head over there. When I find my book, I ask the principal, "'s cartwheeling 'llowed?"

"Um, well, yes," she says.

I silently scream m' happiness.

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Algebra time. I absentmindedly doodle the first few 40 digits of pi in my notebook, hand lettering, of course. "Can any of you tell me at leat ten digits of pi?" the math teacher yells. He's one of those teachers who are rather enthusiastic about their subject.

I raise my hand with the notebook in it.

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BTW, I was thinking that you would look sick because of the whole bout about the "lopped off ears", and because you just had lunch. 

submitted by Mirror
(August 23, 2017 - 1:30 pm)

Oh yeah that is a great idea. Sorry i didn't get it

It was my b-day today. I turned 12!!!! 

submitted by MJ'S FRIEND, age 11, Californa
(August 23, 2017 - 10:22 pm)

BTW, I did say I was slightly eccentric too . . .

submitted by Mirror
(August 23, 2017 - 1:36 pm)

Yeah, I know that.  Sorry if I offended you in any way.

submitted by MJ'S FRIEND, age 12, Californa
(August 23, 2017 - 10:24 pm)

How do you guys like the story so far? 


MY captcha says "Ffar"

Do you mean I'v gotten far on my story? That is very true.

submitted by MJ'S FRIEND, age 11, Californa
(August 23, 2017 - 7:00 pm)

I'm tthinking about the plan Evergreen has, and I'm  ot sure what it is going to be. Thatis why I hav n't posted in awhile.

submitted by MJ'S FRIEND, age 11, Californa
(August 25, 2017 - 7:49 pm)

Oops so many tpyos . I guess I should of checked it. XD.  

By the way, you can top this if you want. 

submitted by MJ'S FRIEND, age 11, Californa
(August 25, 2017 - 10:10 pm)

I promise I'll write tonight.

submitted by MJ'S FRIEND, age 12, Californa
(August 29, 2017 - 9:30 pm)

And i didn't... Sorry. My grandma's here so I don't have really have anytime time to write

submitted by MJ'S FRIEND, age 12, Californa
(August 30, 2017 - 10:51 pm)

Finally I came up with a plan.

~~~~~

Evergreen and MJ stood in the bathroom. Lunch had started, and no-one was there. MJ was excited for Evergrreen's plan, but worrided. Her plan could be a fail.  MJ leaned on the wall "Whats the plan?" 

Evergreen gulped, nevously. Worry filled MJ. Was Evergreen getting cold shouldrs about her plan? Was she realizing it wouldn't work? "This a really extreme plan-"

MJ stopped Evergreen. She needed to know how extreme this was. Would it comprise her safety? Would it hurt Evergreen in anyway?? "How Extreme. On a scale of one to ten what number would you pick? Ten being the highest"

Evergeen looked at MJ,  worrided. "I really want to help you-"

MJ looked Evergreen in the eye, scared. "What number?' she demaned.

Evergreen gulped. "7" she whispered.

MJ didn't hear her. "What number?"

Evergreen held up 7 fingers.

A little relief coursed through MJ. She had eccepted a ten. She would agree to a ten, but she was worride about Evergreen's safety.  If you were to rate her  heists it would be a solide 20. "My saftey or yours?" 

Evergreen gulped. "I think this could work, but both of your safety."

MJgulped and raised her eyebrows. She didn't want Evergreen to be hurt! "No were not doing something thats a 7. I don't want you to be hurt!" Mj exclaimed, taking Evergreen's hand.

Evergreen ran her hand down MJ cheek, but she pulled away embrassed. Mj was confused about what Evergreen had doone, but excited. "Please MJ. Hear me out. I want to help you"

MJ was about to say no, but she saw the despration in Evergreen's eyes. "Blow me away" She said, half smiling.  

I will write more, later tonight. I swear, and swear some more.  

submitted by MJ'S FRIEND, age 12, Californa
(September 3, 2017 - 9:22 pm)

"I was thinking" Evergreen began. "That you would get home, and then run away. You get to some object we chose and me, and others would tackle your dad"

Mj was agasht. Evergreen would surely be hurt. "NO! You can't. You'll be hurt. Your not me, you couldn't do this!"  MJ said, looking Evergreen sternly in the eye.

Evergreen's face turned red. MJ winced. She had said the wrong things, and made Evergreen angry. "Are you sayng i'm weak?!" she spat, eyebrow raised.

Mj stepped back, scared. The fury in Evergreen;'s eyes were freice, and scary. "No....I'm saying you don't know how to fight! How would this work if you don't know how to figh!?"

Evergreen stepped foward, determined. "Teach me"

"First do you really think this will work?" she asked, Evergreen.  If Evergreen had any doubt in this plan it wouldn't work. 

Evergreen stared at Mj. "Do you?"

Mj swallowed a deep brearth of air. She did think it would work. "Yes."

"Then teach me how to fight" Evergreen, grwoled.

Mj nodded.  

 

submitted by MJ'S FRIEND, age 12, Californa
(September 4, 2017 - 11:47 am)

write tommorrow if i have time. i promise. Heres a little teaser.

Will Evergreen be able to learn to fight? if she doesn't their plan will go down in flames, 

submitted by MJ'S FRIEND, age 12, Californa
(September 6, 2017 - 11:49 pm)