Ruins in the

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Ruins in the

Ruins in the Mist!!

Hi this is my first story so sorry if you don't like it. I will try to post every day. This is a story that I have already started writing in google docs so I will copy and paste. I can fit 5 more charachters in this story. I am sry for the limit of characters, I have already started this story. Thanks!!!!!!!!

Charrie info: please create one charachter and only one. The age also has to be 8-15. If you want to be an adult,(16-25) please note at the end.  

CHARRIE SHEET:

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Age: 

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submitted by Regan B, age 11, Massachussetts
(March 12, 2017 - 10:18 am)

Chapter one

A Weak Point In The Forces

It was another boring day at Auntie Lauren’s farm house. There were no birds chirping today, which was unusual. There was no sound coming from the Fleming family farm, no cows mooing,  no sheep bleating, no horses whinnying. Then i realized that today was the day! School was finally out! No more teachers, or books, or homework! I get to see my friends, and we can have a pool party, and go to an ice cream bar and-Oh. I was now going to a different school in a whole different state. Usually, my friends and i have a big end of school party when i lived in San Francisco, but now i live in Maine which is like the opposite of San Francisco. I got dressed and trudged down the stairs. Auntie Lauren was making her belgian waffles with cream and berries. My little brother, Duke, was sitting at the table playing Solitaire by himself while eating a bowl of berries that he stole from Auntie Lauren.

“Good morning Auntie Lauren. Good morning Dukie.” i said.

“Good morning Mackenzie, have you seen my berry bowl lying about anywhere? It was right here.” she pointed to the centre of the table and Duke looked down quickly and stuck the berry bowl, which was in his lap, underneath the table.

Auntie Lauren saw Duke look down. “Duke William Culfrey. What did you do the berries?” demanded Auntie Lauren.

Duke slowly pulled out an empty bowl from underneath the table. He smiled a guilty ta-da smile at Auntie Lauren. Then, she burst out laughing.

“Oh Duke, it’s alright.” She opened the cupboard and pulled out another bowl of freshly picked berries from the garden.

She put the berries back in the middle of the table. I sat next to Duke to watch him play Solitaire. When Auntie Lauren’s back was turned, i snatched the berries and a napkin. I pulled out the blueberries and the strawberries and put them in the napkin. I put the berries back on the table exactly where they were before. You can see that Duke and i thought a lot alike.

After breakfast, Auntie Lauren sent me out back to water the tulips along the boulder wall. Duke and i have never figured out why she never wanted us to go past the boulder wall. That back area was still under Auntie Lauren’s name so wasn’t like we would be trespassing. As soon as i got to the North Eastern border of the wall, i noticed a small crack in the rock i was passing. It looked about big enough to fit possibly two alpha wolves at a time, side by side and one above the other. Isn’t 2x2 4? So about four alpha wolves at a time. I decided to check it out. It could have possibly been made by wolves. Auntie Lauren said that she didn’t want us back there because of the wolves, but i knew that there was another reason. I looked back one more time and crawled in.


submitted by Regan B, age 11, Massachussets
(March 15, 2017 - 7:21 pm)

Name: Anne Harley

Gender: Female

Age: 14

Personality: A little quiet, sad but very smart. Is good at hidden puzzles.

Appearance: Deep violet hair and brown eyes. Her hair reaches the middle of her. back. Usually wears jeans and a jacket.

Backstory: She was born on a farm in Indiana. Her little brother died when she was eight and it's effecting her even now, which is why she's quiet.

Is there ay more room? 

submitted by Pepper Star
(March 15, 2017 - 7:36 pm)

@Pepper Star

you took the last spot!! 

how does she come to Maine?

 

@EVERYONE

No more spots left!!!!!!!!!!!

sry might add more

 

P.S.- I will try to attach a map of the world. i will be drawing a bigger one but this will have to do for now. 

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submitted by Regan B, age 11, Massachussets
(March 16, 2017 - 6:29 am)

@pizzaboy

you have another option.

you could be the mysterious boy in the ruins (you are still alive)

or you could be Mac's little brother

or you could be Elena's little brother 

submitted by Regan B, age 11, Massachussets
(March 16, 2017 - 6:36 am)

Pretty pretty please write more. Please!! 

submitted by Lindsey H., age 11, MA
(March 16, 2017 - 4:37 pm)

After her brother died, her famly was too hurt to stay in Indiana. They move to Maine to live on her grandparents' farm.

submitted by Pepper Star, @Regan
(March 16, 2017 - 6:13 pm)

Regan write more. I might die!

submitted by pizzaboy , age 10, Massachusetts
(July 3, 2017 - 8:11 pm)