Oh, its okay Lea. I used to type with one finger. Ya, I know, it wasn't very productive. But I struggled learning the normal way and I still don't type normaly. Actually, I do something different every day. Anyway ya, maybe just try to use punctation marks? I personally can't stand run on sentances. So sorry! Its a pet peeve ;)

~Batpaw

(Sorry this is winding back some, before the Mistpaw Solepaw thing happened. Its just gotten dark Mistpaw is probably finding Solepaw as this is taking place) I come back into camp, following Nightstalker's tail with my whiskers. I saw the blurred stillhout of a cat standing in the clearing. "Goodnight, Shadepaw." She said with a purr. 

That voice. Oh, it was Jaydream. The dupty. Something flashs in my mind as my mentor starts talking with her.

hello? Hello?

It echoed through my mind as a shape transformed in my vision. I saw a beutiul older tabby, with eyes faded and ears wilting. Hello? Hello?

And then, more distant, an errie voice.

The dark of the forest will swallow the dreamer

Jays will wonder for days 

Only the echo can save the jay 

And only the sight will save the dreamer....

The tabby faded with the last echoings of the voice. I blinked, and everything was its usual hazy gray. I started foward, bumbing into Jaydream. She sighed, then asked with concern, "Where did this come from?" I felt her muzzled on my ear. Pain shot through it.

How do I have a wound? This was in the dream world! "Nowhere." I balled. I could sence she knew I wasn't telling the truth, but pushed me towards the new apprintance's den.

I walked inside the new place, my knew home, and many old sents greated me. "Batpaw! We made you a nest." It was Shadepaw.

"Thanks," I purred, as he nudged me to the fresh smelling nest.

I settled down, and felt my sister's pelt brush against mine. She curled up in the nest next to me and I could feal her concerned eyes looking over my chipped ear. Just like Jaydream. But she didn't metion it. I flicked my large ears and smelt my new home. I smelt the sents of Shadepaw, Flowerpaw, Fernpaw, Solepaw, the newer smell of Sprucepaw, and the staler sents of Owlwings, Moonbeam, Silvercloud, Frostflower, my mother, Nightstalker and Jaydreamer and even traces of Littlestar. Solepaw's sent was fresh, but stale, she hadn't been here since this morning. And there was no traces of Mistpaw. "Where is Mistpaw?" I asked casually. 

I heard the russtling of someone shruging. Then the same cat, Shadepaw, stammpered, "I don't know."

I flicked my tail. She had forgaten I was blind. Again. Then I heard comotion in the camp. I heard all of the apprintance's ears flick up and heads raise. "Mistpaw!" I heard my mother's voice. "Not now. Move."

Clammer. I heard a pained mewling. I sprang to my paws emedaitly. I felt the others get up as they saw me and follow me out the door. "Mother!" I meowed. "What happened?!"

"Not now Batpaw. Mistpaw's in the medicen cat's den."

Wow. First time an inncodent like that hasn't happened to me. "Can I see him?" I asked anxiously. "Is it bad?"

I could here his breathing. I norrowed in on it. It was struggling, rasping. And so was Solepaw's. I paniked a little and growled. "I need to see them."

My mother hissed for me to stay down but I pushed past her. I heard her lung to grab me by my scruff, but I darted foward and vanished into the den.

I stood watching Atumnbreeze dress the aprintences wounds. Well, I wasn't watching. I was listening. She moved with a paniked pace. She didn't realize I was there until I stepped foward and asked, "can I stay here for the night? I keep tripping in the apprintances den."

I felt her waves of sympathy. Something flashed before my eyes. Another cat and kits jumping around her. A lonley expretion crossing her eyes kile a haze. Then they vanished. And my vision retured to normal.

This has happened three times today. I thought crossly. Is this normal for a new apprinance?

"Its getting crouded, Batpaw. I need space to care for them."

"N-oo." Mistpaw suddenly responded. "P-please l-e-t hi-m st-ay."

Atumnbreeze glances at him then nodds and guesters for me to lay on the ground next to him. I do, and am soon in a deep sleep. 

Jaydream

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A drop of water rolls from a tree and splashes onto my nose, dark as the sky and strangely warm. I duck beneath a bush, wincing and waiting for the drizzle to cease. I have no idea how long I've been trapped in this endless dark forest, wandering among the black branches and trees, no light from a moon or sun to guide my way. Oddly enough, amidst all my others troubles I'm not hungry, and I don't need to sleep. But... perhaps that makes it worse. I can't get any relief from this nightmare. Growling, my claws slide out and I rake them against a tree, feeling the soft bark curl beneath my sharp claws. It slides oozily off the tree, just like everything else in this forsaken woods. Disgusted, I shake out my claws as scraps of the tree bark shower off them.

I look around me, knowing it won't matter which direction I take and choose to go to my left, padding steadily along. I'm just about to give up when I spot something in front of me, a strange glimmer of silver. I slowly break into a run, skidding to a halt when I reach the thing. It's... a pond. I prowl around it, my whiskers gracing the surface of the water. How odd, for something so seemingly pure to be in a place like this. I cautiously stick my head beneath the water and am greeted with a shocking sight.

It's I'm seeing through a spiderweb, it's so clear. I'm suddenly looking through the roof of the medicine den, gazing onto what looks like... me. Oh.... oh, no... I think helplessly, plunging fearlessly into the water, my paws spread wide. It definitely is me, curled in a nest in the medicine den. My eyes are glazed over, a milky, pale whitish-blue, and my limbs are limp, the fur around them spiked and messy. I frantically try to swim into the den, but I can't seem to get any deeper. I see Autumnbreeze and Soulpaw, milling around what looks like Mistpaw and my body, and Batpaw is there too, his blank blind eyes staring. Suddenly his ears perk up, and his head glances all around him, as if he's just heard someone call his name. 

it looks like he's about to see me, and I open my jaws to call his name when the water turns torpid and vile, just like the rain, and I nearly choke it. Writhing around in the water, I manage toswim back up to the surface and drag myself out onto the dark grass, feeling chills run downmy back despite the muddy warmth of the water. Shivering, I collapse on the grass, my tail tucked aroun my nose. I wouldn't admit it any sunrise, but I've never felt so helpless. All I can do is wait... 

Flowerpaw~

"Flowerpaw!" Slilvercloud yowls. "Where has that crazy cat gone off to?"

"I'm over here!" I mew, bouncing over to where my mentor is.

"Good, your here, we are going to do battle training." she growls.

"OK!" I mew.

I race infront of Silvercloud,happily chacing a leaf to the training ground. I bound around the clearing, waiting for Silvercloud to catch up.

"Flowerpaw! Would you please not run in front of me?"Silvercloud mews in asperation.

"But it's so SLOW!" I mew.

Silvercloud sighs, "We begin training now, attack me."

I stare at her, going into a crouch. This is my favorite training session, I try to attack her and hold her down, so far I've failed. Badly. Horrifitly. I fail--------- I jump out of the way as Silvercloud jumps at me. I knew that was coming. She says I take risks, but she can hardly wait for me to make the first move. I look around and spot a tree, Silvercloud hates climbing trees (most Moonclan cats do) but loved it. I race to the tree and take a flying leap onto the trunk, I race up it to a sturdy brach above. I look down, Silvercloud is about to tell me to get down.

"Flowerpaw! You get--------" Silvercloud breaks off, I jumped onto her back from the tree. She gets flattened to the ground. I jump away from her.

"So, did I win?" I mew.

Silvercloud glares at me.

"Don't you ever, and I mean EVER CLIMB A TREE AGAIN! DO YOU RELIZE WHAT COULD OF HAPPENED? YOU COULD OF FALLEN AND BROKEN YOUR BONES I COULD OF BEEN SEROUSLY INJURED FROM YOU JUMPING ONTO ME LIKE THAT!" Silvercloud roars.

"Sorry," I mumbled, "It seemed like a good idea..."

"A GOOD IDEA! YOU CALL THAT A GOOD IDEA! YOU NEED TO THINK ABOUT THINGS BEFORE YOU DO THEM!" Silvercloud growls.

"Well.." I start.

"AND DON'T YOU WELL ME! YOU ARE GOING BACK TO CAMP RIGHT NOW! AND YOU WILL CARE FOR THE ELDERS." Silvercloud growls.

"For how long?" I aks.

"Untill I say you can stop." Silvercloud growls. She turns around and races back to camp. I follow slowly behind.  

hi guys, I think I am going to quit this thread. I was not able to develope my charrie soon enough to become involved with the story. It is nothing against you guys and i sincerely apologize for dropping out. 

OK, thank you guys for understanding.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DRAGON don't leave! We can work something out with Sprucepaw and her becoming friends, or falling in love with Batpaw or Mistpaw. Please don't goooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!

Don't have time to post...sorry guys! 

Soulpaw~

I struggle to stay awake as Autmunbreeze confronts Ebony. Ugh... This is why having a family of rogues is so complicated. The thought floats through my head.

"Ebony..please..not here. Not now," I attempt to ease the tension.

It doesn't seem to work, as Autmunbreeze whirls towards me, "You know this cat?" she meows in disbelief.

Shaking my head to clear the cobwebs from my mind, I struggle to a sitting position.

"She's..." I glance at Ebony, "Um... My sister," I squeak watching for my mentor's reaction.

Ebony speaks up, "I live with Soul's mother in the area outside of your territories. I decided to visit because my sister has been upset lately."

I open my mouth with a sharp retort.

"I could tell because she's been visiting us more often than she used to," Ebony cuts me off.

Autumnbreeze stays silent, appearing to be thinking about something.

Suddenly, Littlestar appears in the entrance to the den. 

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Sorry it's short! I don't really want to control anyone too much for this part. I'm trying to let others decide how they want to react to all of this because I don't want to risk ruining the story for anyone. :)