Reverso Poetry Contest!
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Reverso Poetry Contest!
Reverso Poetry Contest!
~❤️~
I know, you guys are probably getting tired of all the contests I'm making. But thanks to Cho (Everyone say thanks to Cho), I've gotten into reverso poetry, and I LOVE IT!!!!
A reverso poem is a poem that has one meaning when read one way, but still makes sense when read the other way. It usually has opposite meaning, but Cho had her own style, so you can either use her style or the original style. Just saying, the original way is much, much harder. We'll decide whether there should be just one judge, or everyone should vote on their favorite later.
Have fun!!!!!!!
submitted by Mei-xue (May-shreh) , Fairyland
(July 8, 2016 - 10:27 pm)
(July 8, 2016 - 10:27 pm)
FINALLY SOMEONE DID THE HARD VERSION FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY!!!!!!!
(July 10, 2016 - 5:32 pm)
Okay, this isn't for the contest or anything, but you inspired me to write a couple (fairly short) reverso poems that I would like to share. They actually can be completely reversed word-for-word, instead of line by line, which is probably why I couldn't manage to make them very long. I think I was making it harder than it had to be. Oh well. :-)
The Villain and the Hero
(July 10, 2016 - 3:46 pm)
I can't believe it! It's a miracle!
Two hard versions in a row!!!!
(July 10, 2016 - 5:33 pm)
I think the second one was the original version? Anyway, they're both really good.
Rainbows
Transforming, but still, misty illusions.
Changing life, coming and going quickly,
Wonders painted
Rainbows
~~~
Flipped:
Rainbows
Painted wonders
Quickly going and coming, life changing
Illusions misty, still, but transforming.
Rainbows
~~~
They kind of don't make sense, but oh, well.
(July 10, 2016 - 6:26 pm)
I guess I'll try the hard version.
~~
Opposite Ends: A Reverso Poem
Wishing.
For company,
Not
For quiet—
(I have too much.)
Someone to talk to. Please.
I don't want
Peace, solitude.
I wish for someone.
To leave me alone?
A nightmare.
To come to me?
A dream.
*REVERSE*
A dream. . .
To come to me?
A nightmare.
To leave me alone,
I wish for someone.
Peace, solitude.
I don't want
Someone to talk too. Please.
(I have too much.)
For quiet
Not
For company—
Wishing.
(July 10, 2016 - 5:43 pm)
Come
Pheonix rising
ashes falling
the moment
sparks
small things
and big ones
life of moment
invincible
and fragile
life, easily broken
Complex,
reversable
inside out, backwards
Icarus and Ares and Athena
dreams of glory
Thinking of life
Dreaming
*flips*
Dreaming
Life of thinking
Glory of dreams
Athena and Ares and Icarus
backwards, out inside
reversable
complex,
broken easily
fragile and
invincible
moment of life
big ones and
small things
moment the
ashes falling
pheonix rising
come
Well, I'm ridiculously proud of my accomplishment. That was fun! *disclaimer: inspired by the song I was listening to's general theme!*
(July 10, 2016 - 8:50 pm)
Also, just going to put in my opinion: Cho's way is muuuuch harder. I tried both and ended up doing Cho's way for a challenge, but honestly? You have to pay attention to the order of the lines AND the words using Cho's style, so... I really do not get how Cho's way is harder.
(July 10, 2016 - 8:55 pm)
Wait, what are you saying? At first you sound like you're saying my way is harder. Then you say it's not. Please clarify.
(July 11, 2016 - 3:51 pm)
Sorry, yeah, as I reread it I think it doesn't make much sense. Sorry!
I think your way is harder, and I'm mildly irratating because I don't feel like people are realizing that.
(July 11, 2016 - 6:36 pm)
Love Letters: by Brookeira
Blood, dust, tears, rust,
The dreams of two souls are faded, tattered,
Wind, sweep, breeze, gust,
Wind sweeps away dreams that once surely mattered,
Can, need, shall, must,
Maybes captured in old photographs,
Lost heart, lost trust,
Scarred wounds, abandoned laughs,
All sit abandoned on the floor,
All sit beside the attic door,
Unbroken silence
Spiteful Silence
Silence
REVERSE
Silence
Spiteful Silence
Unbroken Silence
All sit beside the attic door,
All sit abandoned on the floor,
Scarred wounds, abandoned laughs,
Lost heart, lost trust,
Maybes captured in old photographs,
Can, need, shall, must,
Wind sweeps away dreams that once surely mattered,
Wind, sweep, breeze, gust,
The dreams of two souls are faded, tattered,
Blood, dust, tears, rust
(July 10, 2016 - 9:00 pm)
I hope this is right.
Katherine's Temptation
From The Enchanted Castle
Don't slide the
ring
upon your pale, slim
finger,
don't let it's cold metal
enclose your hand
with magic
like a chain;
don't murmer the words
"I wish"
~
Utter the words "I wish,"
enclose your hand with
magic,
let it's cold metal
slide onto
your pale, slim
finger.
(July 11, 2016 - 8:04 am)
YAY!!!!! Hard version!!!
(July 11, 2016 - 3:10 pm)
Oh, I made one! I have flipped words order, but I think it still counts!
Remember
Don’t learn
Remember
I can’t
Remember
Less to
Remember
Don’t die
Remember
To want, I
Remember
Flip
Remember
I want to remember
Die, don’t remember
To less remember
Can’t I remember?
Learn, don’t remember.
(July 11, 2016 - 9:46 am)
Art
A line forms.
Twisting,
turning,
something emerges.
It crawls out,
as if hatching from an egg.
A light grows.
Shadows fall.
A cloak creases.
Movement sparks
That face peeks out,
then-
finished.
~~~~
Finished?
Then that face peeks out.
Movement is sparked,
A cloak creases.
Shadows fall.
A light grows,
as if hatching from an egg.
It crawls out,
twisting,
turning,
something emerges.
A line forms.
Questions
To be,
or
not to be,
that is the question.
But what is the question?
A question?
Confused,
am I?
~~~
I am confused.
A question.
But what is the question?
That is the question.
Not to be,
or
to be?
(July 11, 2016 - 2:54 pm)
It's not right to be abnormal.
I'm not normal
It's true
I know
Don't listen to yourself
I'm just as sane as you are
When did being normal ever matter
I'm good enough
Sometimes you need to listen to the abnormal
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sometimes you need to listen to the abnormal
I'm good enough
When did being normal ever matter
I'm just as sane as you are
Don't listen to yourself
I know
It's true
I'm not normal
It's not right to feel abnormal
-----------------------------------------------------
Water is Life
Water
Is not
A flood
Water
Is
A rainbow
Sun shining through
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sun shining through
A rainbow
Is
Water
A flood
Is not
Water
Water is life
(July 11, 2016 - 6:24 pm)