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Glossy hair and
Glossy hair and whistful eyes
Sweetly sing for my dimise
Full red lips and gentle curls
Hearts are captured and worlds unfurl
A whispered want
A tear filled eye
Not many could have passed her by
Voice like honey sweet and tender
Only broken by the mender
A tell tale heart
A broken spirit
You should know how much to fear it.
Yay! My first post! Tell me what you think!
submitted by Cinnamon, age 14, Candyland
(April 7, 2016 - 7:16 pm)
(April 7, 2016 - 7:16 pm)
Hello! May I say when I introduced myself it wasn't nearly as classy at that. I love your name! It is great to see new people on the CB! Though my first post was sometime in January so I am not entirly older either. Anyway my cat is eating something he probably shouldn't be eating so I should go.
LB~
P.S. MY CAPACTHA says ofxo so I think he means xoxo.
(April 9, 2016 - 1:24 pm)
Thank you so much! I like your name too! I'm sure that when you introduced yourself it was as classy as Cinderella entering the ball!
(My CAPACTHA say nrxy, IDK what that means :P)
(April 9, 2016 - 9:11 pm)
Haha thanks, Lemon Banana! I am really new here, I just started getting the magazine this year and my first post was last week.
P.S. I think your cat and mine would be good friends!
(April 9, 2016 - 9:17 pm)
Wow, that's awsome, Cinnamon! That was truly an impressive poem! And might I add that I love your name? I'm dabbling in the art of poetry as well, although my poem isn't done yet.
My first impression was, let me just say, pretty awful. I had no idea what I was doing, so my first comment ever, with no introduction thread or anything of the sort, was, "Can I join this warriors RP, Coconut the Dog?" Now I look back and wish I'd made an introduction thread. Oh, well, too late now! (c; <-- Smiley face with nose (c: (c: (c:
(April 9, 2016 - 7:33 pm)
Absolutely incredible, Cin. I wish I could write poetry like that. So short, but so lovely. I love it.
Taxicab says daii. Day? It's Sunday. The tenth. What's up? Is something happening today?
(April 10, 2016 - 1:03 pm)
HOLY CATS, THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!! You truly have an amazing gift! How splendid it is indeed! It's also nice to meet fellow orchestra students! Hehehehh, a cello, violia, and now a violin! Who plays the bass? ;)
(April 10, 2016 - 3:51 pm)
I don't know. My orchestra has four, but I'm sure none go here.
(April 10, 2016 - 4:54 pm)
Hey Cinnamon! That's such a good poem! Welcome to the CB!
(April 10, 2016 - 4:47 pm)
WOW.
That.
Was.
AMAZING. You're a great poet, Cinnamon! You've definitely made a good first impression! Unlike me, I joined literally the EXACT same way Micearenice did. I commented on Coconut the Dog's Warriors RP and asked if I could join. I didn't even make in introduction thread.
But seriously. That poem is awesome. Who is it about? When I read it, I guessed a Siren. Like the mermaids from mythology that sing and lure sailors to their deaths. But I'm curious as to who it is actually about. =)
Misty says crzm. I'm pretty sure that means 'hi' in CAPTCHA speak.
(April 11, 2016 - 9:54 am)
Hi, Cinnamon! Lovely poem!
(April 11, 2016 - 12:31 pm)
Thank you so very much! Who is my poem about? Hmmm. I like making deals, so I'll make you one! If you can guess what letter my real first name starts with in three tries, I'll tell you.
(April 11, 2016 - 7:28 pm)
Hi Cinnamon!! Welcome to CB, where many NON insane NORMAL people hang out. *Walks out of room and laughs hysterically* *Walks back in*. You're so good at writing poems! That was awesome!
(April 11, 2016 - 7:16 pm)
@Cinnamon- Okay... challenge accepted... Does your name start with an A?
(April 12, 2016 - 11:00 am)
@Cinnamon- Okay... challenge accepted... Does your name start with an A?
(April 12, 2016 - 11:00 am)
Sorry for not replying earlier, but no. It does not start with an A. Next guess?
(April 15, 2016 - 8:54 pm)