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Glossy hair and
Glossy hair and whistful eyes
Sweetly sing for my dimise
Full red lips and gentle curls
Hearts are captured and worlds unfurl
A whispered want
A tear filled eye
Not many could have passed her by
Voice like honey sweet and tender
Only broken by the mender
A tell tale heart
A broken spirit
You should know how much to fear it.
Yay! My first post! Tell me what you think!
submitted by Cinnamon, age 14, Candyland
(April 7, 2016 - 7:16 pm)
(April 7, 2016 - 7:16 pm)
Wow, that was epic. Also, nice to meet you! Welcome to CB! I love your name.
(April 7, 2016 - 8:54 pm)
OMGoodness, thank you so much! I LOVE your name too. :)
(April 9, 2016 - 2:08 am)
Whoa. Who is the person you depicted? That's an awesome poem!!! Wow. Oh my gosh. My orchestra teacher always says "You don't get a second chance at a first impression," and you certainly made your first impression with style.
(April 8, 2016 - 6:46 pm)
Aww you're so sweet! I'm glad to meet a fellow orchestra nerd!
(April 9, 2016 - 2:09 am)
Awesome!! You're in orchestra, too? What do you play? I'm 2nd chair cello. Speaking of cello, I'd better go practice....
(April 9, 2016 - 1:49 pm)
I play second chair viola in regular orchestra and first chair in chamber.
(April 9, 2016 - 9:13 pm)
Cool! I just now noticed that you're fourteen. You're probably in an advanced orchestra.
(April 10, 2016 - 11:31 am)
I am! And actually, I'm almost 14. But my birthday is so close, I just say I am 14.
(April 11, 2016 - 7:43 pm)
Wow. That was beautiful.
(April 8, 2016 - 7:11 pm)
Thank you so much! I'm so flattered you think that!
(April 9, 2016 - 2:11 am)
You're welcome!
(April 11, 2016 - 11:04 am)
I love it!!! P.s. Dimise is actually spelled demise.
(April 8, 2016 - 8:05 pm)
Thanks! And good to know!
(April 9, 2016 - 2:12 am)
Wow! That is really good
(April 9, 2016 - 7:28 am)
Thank you so very much!
(April 9, 2016 - 4:23 pm)