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Bellatrix and Kimberly
Bellatrix and Kimberly and whoever else wants to read this!
I'm writing a new story, called Flying Fantasy, and there's two unicorns, one named Bellatrix, and Kimberly! I don't know why I decided to call them that... just did! Bellatrix is the mother unicorn, and Kimberly is her baby! (Also, there's another unicorn called Alexa, and a fairy called Cindy plus a dragon named Sani and Pepin! and the Dragon Ruler Vasilis!!!)
submitted by Maggie S. , age 13, St. Paul, MN
(February 15, 2009 - 3:31 pm)
(February 15, 2009 - 3:31 pm)
Sigh . . . My Chatterbox friends are my BEST friends! *hugs everyone*
(February 21, 2009 - 9:28 am)
Seriously, though. I don't know your parents, but maybe you could compromise with them, like only going on for a certain period of time each day and then doing your homework and stuff. Also, we are not THAT empty-headed. Some of the time we are, but we have very important literary discussions on Blab about Books, talk about science and aliens and whatnot on Down to Earth, and the Inkwell is CREATIVE WRITING!!! Isn't that, like, good for you or something?
(February 22, 2009 - 8:17 am)
Aww, thanks Lena! *hugs* But I don't think that'll work. My parents are . . . hard. They'd say that I have "better things" to do with my time, and then they'd ask my why I want to go on, and then I'd say that I have great friends there, and then they'd look at me sympathetically and say that they'd get me a vegan pen pal, and then forget. So I might try, but I'd probably just get a lecture and suspicious silence. Sigh . . . I love you guys!! :):D:):D
(February 23, 2009 - 6:44 pm)
THANKS SO MUCH!!!!!!:D:D:D It's awesome!:D:D:D You're a really great friend.:):):) I love the story!:D:D:D
(February 20, 2009 - 5:23 pm)
WHOA!!!!:D:D:D That's so awesome!:):):):D:D:D:):):):D:D:D Thanks a bunch!:D:D:D:):):) I love unicorns!:D:D:D:):):)
(February 20, 2009 - 5:22 pm)
Thanks Kimberly the Unicorn! Should I post more???????????????????????? Thank you guys for finally checking the inkwell! ;) ;)
(February 21, 2009 - 9:08 am)
Empty-minded! I take umbridge at that!
Somebody mentioned Latin... I only know a few phrases... tempes fugit, and stuff like that, but my mind is blanking... Well, I know other impressive words. You can tell your parents that we use vocabulary like obscurantist, ailurophile, plegmatic, idiosyncrasy, vociferous, alfresco, and porcine.
(February 22, 2009 - 9:27 am)
:) But I think you mean umbrage.
(February 23, 2009 - 6:18 pm)
Thanks, Mary. :):D:):D Pan Troglodytes!! Canis Lupis!!
(February 23, 2009 - 6:47 pm)
My brother. sister, and I do Latin, and we just love learning it!:):):):D:D:D It's so much fun!:):):)
(February 23, 2009 - 10:31 pm)
I would check this section more, but I use up all of my time on the other sections, and since this is the last one, I never get to it!:):):) I'll check it more!:):):) I WOULD LOVE TO SEE MORE OF YOUR STORY!:):):)
(February 23, 2009 - 10:30 pm)
Oh! YOu want more? Here's some more! Pepin flew up to the stone, the one Sani was smiling, and when he saw Pepin all happy, he got even more smily.“Great choice.” Pepin snorted as he and Sani decided to walk along the valley, “Couldn’t have said it better myself.” “Looked like Vasilis approved. I sure am happy about that.” Sani flew up to the Dragon Valleys stream, and took a couple gulps of water until he was fully ready to defend himself, just in case. “I’m sure Vasilis liked it just fine.” Pepin breathed, “You don’t have to worry about it anyways. All these years, it seemed just like a war.” Sani’s eyes showed confusion, “I have no idea what your saying.” He sighed.“Well, think about it. Remember? You ran into that one... Fire... and you both got into a big fight.” Sani’s huge body started trembling, “That was many years ago, Sani. You were just a... child then. I’m surprised you even heard it.” “And I did hear it! How could I not? People were talking about nothing but that!” Yelped Pepin, he looked at Sani’s huge body, his eyes were fearful. “Oh.” Sani put his big head on a house that originally was built for a human, but they dragons had scared them all away. Then Pepin felt like he had to apologize. Not just for hearing, but for all the deaths of Sani’s loved ones. Sani’s wife had been killed by a Fire, and his young daughter (who would have been Pepin’s age) was too. “I’m sorry.” Pepin sighed, “I’m sorry about your wife, and your daughter, I’m sorry about that Fire that attacked them. I’m sorry that thing might still be alive, and I’m sorry that you used to actually like them, and now your going to war with them. I’m sorry that an old dragon has to see so much, and doesn’t have enough time to enjoy his life.”Sani looked at Pepin for a long time. He was trying to organize his thoughts. How he loved his small daughter so much, and seeing that Fire kill her- and his wife- was too much to see. Sani saw why Pepin had apologized. He wanted Sani to go after that Fire who killed his beloved daughter and wife. But how could he remember such an animal? Wasn’t he, for all those years, trying to get that thing out of memory? Of course he was! But Pepin had got it back in. Stupid Pepin, Sani thought, Stupid smart, intelligent, and high class Pepin. Tried to get me so angry that I’d actually go after that dragon! I don’t see that happening any time soon. I still want a little bit of peace. I won’t go after that dragon even if it was the last thing I could do! “I see.” Sani simply said, and he pushed his way into his deep cave.© Maggie S, 2009Tada! :D:D
(February 26, 2009 - 4:40 pm)
I like it, everyone usually thinks that all Mystical, and fancy, but I have a feelint that these unicorns arn't that kind.
ps. I just changed my name from nitelite, I ddidn't like it as much.
(Even though I didn't post much with that name)
(February 27, 2009 - 1:49 pm)