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Bellatrix and Kimberly
Bellatrix and Kimberly and whoever else wants to read this!
I'm writing a new story, called Flying Fantasy, and there's two unicorns, one named Bellatrix, and Kimberly! I don't know why I decided to call them that... just did! Bellatrix is the mother unicorn, and Kimberly is her baby! (Also, there's another unicorn called Alexa, and a fairy called Cindy plus a dragon named Sani and Pepin! and the Dragon Ruler Vasilis!!!)
submitted by Maggie S. , age 13, St. Paul, MN
(February 15, 2009 - 3:31 pm)
(February 15, 2009 - 3:31 pm)
If you want, I can post the story on here! :D:D:D:D:):):):):D:D:D:D
(February 16, 2009 - 2:18 pm)
That's a good title name! Can I read a snippet of the story?
(February 16, 2009 - 7:23 pm)
I'd love to see it too!
(February 17, 2009 - 9:00 am)
Ok, I guess so! Here's the first part (It might not have much about Bellatrix and Kimberly yet though...) Hope you like it! (Oh, sorry If I have a few easy spelling mistakes!)
Sani raised his head from his deep cave in Dragon Valley. He slowly marched up to the tall stone, so every dragon could see him. He looked gravely at his fellow dragons and nodded. He watched Pepin as he Pepin continued to snarl at the giggling fairies. The fairies were all over, and they were the most annoying creatures dragons could think of. Any other creature gladly left them alone, they were much to scared to come near. But fairies, they were small, quick, and could defend themselves easily. Vasilis nodded knowingly, he was a smart king, who ruled all dragons in Dragon Valley.
“I say...” Sani’s voice stumbled and cracked as he raised it, “I say, we declare war against the FIRES!” Sani roared, and to his delight, all the water dragons cheered.
The water dragons were called the Waters, and the fire dragons were called the Fires. The Waters and the Fires only once had gotten along, but time changed, and they started to hate each other. They would growl at each other’s site, and get into a big fight. And soon, they moved into different little colonies. Far, far away from each other.
© Maggie Sullivan 2009
Ok, It's not very much, but I do have a lot more. If you want, I can post more! Please post your comments, and if you don't like it, please don't be afraid to say so!
(February 17, 2009 - 4:01 pm)
I like it! :)
(February 17, 2009 - 6:23 pm)
:):):) Hee, hee, hee! :):):) Nice names!!!! :):):)
(February 17, 2009 - 7:08 pm)
Thanks! :D
(February 18, 2009 - 7:53 am)
Yeah...Unfortunately I don't think BellaTrix and Kimberly read Inkwell...
(February 18, 2009 - 12:16 pm)
Well... I guess that's OK! Too bad for them! Then they'll never get to see these awesome stories here! Should I post more?
(February 18, 2009 - 4:20 pm)
:):):) Hee, hee, hee!!! :):) They'll never know that they have characters in stories named after them!!!:):) Hee, hee, hee!!! :D:D:D YES!!! POST MORE, please!!! :D:D:D
(February 18, 2009 - 4:46 pm)
:):):):):) Oh, Maggie! You're an awesome friend! I'm sorry I don't check the Chatterbox much anymore--my parents started to get suspicious--but I'll try to check more often. You guys are wonderful! :):):)
(February 19, 2009 - 8:26 pm)
Your parents don't know? Why don't you tell them?
(February 20, 2009 - 1:03 pm)
It's SO sad!!! Her parents think we're empty-minded, so she's not really supposed to be on here!!!! I really hope she doesn't get exiled to the world of no CHATTERBOX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'll say hi to Hanna if I see her!!!! :) *sad smile*
(February 20, 2009 - 11:06 pm)
Oh. Can't you show them how un-empty-minded we are (well, I know we are sometimes, but not all the time?). People, let's start up a highly intelligent discussion!
(February 21, 2009 - 8:39 am)
Let's Google long Latin words, and add a couple 'a', 'the', & 'and'!! Empty-minded! Grr!
(February 21, 2009 - 7:47 pm)