Fred Thread 3

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Fred Thread 3

Fred Thread 3

In a secret closet where s/he lives, our villain keeps something that no one else alive has ever seen. What is it?
 
 
 
 
 
 
submitted by Fred Durbin, Ukraine
(June 5, 2014 - 1:16 pm)

The small piece of paper slept in the corner of the closet. Nothing evil, you might say. But  a piece of paper can be evil if a young girl you might not know was to right on it. A young girl who will right the future of her, the villian, their land, the world, and the universe. So, you may see now that the piece of paper is evil, in it's own way.

submitted by Danielle P., age 10, California
(July 4, 2014 - 9:23 pm)

Sorry, should we write, not right.

submitted by Danielle P., age 10, California
(July 5, 2014 - 11:15 am)

It's a magical doorway that lets him spy on the main character. 

submitted by Arianne N., age 12, California
(July 5, 2014 - 1:57 am)

In the closet is a locked safe. It has a small, seemingly innocent Midnight Blue box.It holds a bracelet. The villain's goodness is woven into it. It is nearly impossible to let the goodness out.

submitted by Christie M., age 10, CA,US
(July 5, 2014 - 7:33 pm)

It is a book of sorcery, so powerful that the slightest touch could send you to places unknown and things unseen. The only way the villain can touch the book is by using his magical silk gloves, which he keeps on at all times.

 

Sorry if I'm not a very good writer, this is the first time I've really tried writing.Smile 

submitted by kittylover, age 12, Virginia
(July 6, 2014 - 4:38 pm)

I like it.

submitted by Sophie p., age 10, MD
(July 7, 2014 - 1:25 pm)

Me too !

submitted by Someperson, age Sometime, Somewhere
(July 20, 2014 - 2:02 pm)

. . . if you were to go further, you would have seen a skull, the size of a marble, in the center of the room.  Magic seemed to glow within. . . .

submitted by Sophie p., age 10, MD
(July 7, 2014 - 1:24 pm)

In the closet is his journal. It includes the whole stories of why he doesn't like kids anymore, why he turned his house invisible, and why he became evil. It also has a hate poem about Brandal Thatcher, Fable's father. It tells you his plan on how to get rid of Fable and what a terrible mistakes he made that helped Fable become powerful. Oh, and it also has a how-to on turning things invisible. He's also hiding his journal because he think people will make fun of him for keeping it.

Confused? Go read my entry for a villian. His name is Invincent Jenteal. I really hope this helped you, Fred. 

submitted by Ellie, age 11, Place in PA
(July 7, 2014 - 4:35 pm)

The villain falsely accused somebody on purpose, and keeps the thing he accused the person of stealing in the closet.

submitted by Peter E., age 11, Saratoga, NY
(July 8, 2014 - 10:50 am)

It is a scepter called the astral wand. On the day that comes once in 400 years, when the moon , sun and planets are all lined up, the villain will burst out of his closet and use the wand to freeze the celestial bodies in a perfect line forever.

submitted by John E, age 12, New York
(July 9, 2014 - 10:29 am)

This isn't an entry I just have a question. Will these ideas be voted on? Or will maybe a few be put in the story? Or all of them?

submitted by Fairen S., age 12, Vermont
(July 12, 2014 - 5:42 pm)

Hi, Fairen! This is a good question you asked! No, none of the Fred Thread ideas or Fantasy Dictionary will be voted on. And I certainly won't be able to fit all of them into a story. But before the story gets written, I will study all these ideas on Fred Threads and in the Dictionary, and I'll use some of them. It will depend on which ones seem to match up naturally with the story or which ones spark ideas that help the story to develop. All of them are inspirational for us writers -- and that includes all of us, young and older, who are enjoying Crowd Sorcery. I predict that many of these great suggestions will find homes in many stories and pictures. That's one wonderful thing about this project: it's a way to get us all thinking and creating. Everyone has already been writing a lot here! It's lots of fun, and it's also excellent practice for anyone who wants to be a writer!

submitted by Fred D., Pennsylvania, U.S.A.
(July 13, 2014 - 12:19 am)

Step cautiously into the cave entrance, for this is the ancient lair of the evil sorcerer Khaos. What will you find inside? Bats? Snakes? Magic potions? You tread down a worn stone passageway, your footsteps echoing as you try to avoid the slime oozing from the low ceiling and seeping through cracks in the floor. Soon you find yourself in a large cavern. It appears completely empty. But inside lies the Magical stone of something that hold all human knowledge of infinite power. Look into the the stone -- an image appears. It is the face of Khaos the sorcerer! 

submitted by Luthien
(July 26, 2014 - 11:10 am)

Inside a locked box, there are thousands of tiny scraps of paper, each with a letter on them. The villain scatters a handful of them, and it spells something. But always only one word.

 
A word that condemns you to depression for days, or a word that will make you float on clods of happiness for weeks afterwards.

But litttle does the villain know, it is all a lie. it was made by an evil magician.

submitted by Liz B., age 100000, Mighigan
(July 27, 2014 - 6:22 pm)