Cloudpaw-

Ashpaw look! There's something wrong with Leafmist!

Ashpaw bounds over to where Leafmist lay unconscious in the middle of the camp. He turns around and sees Autumnstar padding out of the medicine cat den.

Autumnstar, what happened?Ashpaw demanded. What's wrong with my mentor?

Cloudpaw-

What should we do to help her? we can't just leave her there! Where's the medicine cat?!

(seriously, where is the medicine cat? and who is the medicine cat?)  

Sunblaze drags Ravenfrost into camp, Swiftfeather rite behind her. She looks up horrified at what she saw. Autumnstar crouching over an unmoveing Leafmist.

Sunblaze-

LEAFMIST?! Oh no! Now two of our warriors are passed out, one might be dead, the other is unconchous, the leader is still recovering from loseing a life, and Swiftfeather just seams distracted! The only one besidse me thats fine are Brighttalon, Rufflepelt, and Brightkit! What am i ganna do now?!?

Braken-

I rush into camp worried about Ravenfrost, and Swiftfeather finding out that im cheating. I knew I had to do something though. I knew how to be a medicine cat, and I had to save Ravenfrost, and whoever elce in her clan that needed help. That is the only way to make up for what id done. I look around, there are about 3 cats stareing at me. One, who i knew to be sunblaze thanks to Ravenfrost, had just finished yowling about how the clan was very badly ingured, and now she was stareing at me dunbfounded. Swiftfeather, of course, was glareing at me so intensely, I thought I was going to melt under her glare! I looked away, just to see 3 other cats walk into camp, and 3 come out of a den in the camp. I was confused. It took a while for me to remember why I was there, but as soon as I did I said, "I can help! I know how to be a medicine cat! I can save them!" I yowled pointing at the cat lieing almost dead at the feet of annother cat, and at Ravenfrost.

Sunblaze-

Then by all means, do it! *She snapped at the rouge who had offered to help.

Braken-

I took a step back, Ravenfrost had said that this cat could get angry whenever she felt that her clan mates were in danger. I nodded slightly, looking away, then rushed over to the almost-dead she-cat who looked like she needed the most help.

Braken-

After hours, I finaly saved the two cats. They looked up at me greatfully. Well, at least the cat called Leafmist looked greatfull. Ravenfrost's eyes were full of hatered. I had just told my story.

Sunblaze-

thank you, now go.

Braken-

I went, the last thing I said to them was, "I am sory Ravenfrost, and Swiftfeather. You will never see me again." Then I was gone.

No Swiftfeather, she's NOT dead. ((Read my post about Braken and Sunblaze, that explains everything.))

Whitestream-

*limps into camp whith a huge gash on her leg, and her ear is torn. Was clearly in a tough fight with a fox* Leafmist! What happened?!

Ashpaw-

*wails, in grief for his mentor* No!! My mentor!! She can't die... she can't!! *sends a silent prayer to StarClan* Oh StarClan, please let Leafmist live!!

Cloudpaw-

*races over to comfort her brother*  She won't die, you'll see. * turns to her mother* Whitestream! Are you okay? Oh, StarClan, your not! You hav a gash in your leg, your ear is torn, your belly is scratched!What happened in the battle?

Whitestream-

I was fighting one of the foxes, i jumped on his back, but was strong enough to throw me me off, and as I bit his leg from where I lay, he sunk his teeth into my leg and claws into my ear! I need.. a medicine.. cat.. *collapses*

Ashpaw and Cloudpaw-

Whitetsream! 

((Yay Hayfur! Theres been a battle with a fox btw.))

Name: Shadowbreeze

Description: Black. Black eyes.

Rank: Loner, rogue, loner, rogue, etc...

Traits: Dissapears quickly. Hardly anyone has seen anything of him but his shadow, unless he wants them to. Which isn't very often.

Other: anyone can play him if theyres a crisis he can come

Sunblaze-

NO LEAFMIST! For the first time in her life, clear teardrops fell from her eyes. She had never had a family, so there had never been any reason for her to cry. Until now. She looked up sharply, the rage in her eyes so fierce that Cloudpaw, Ashpaw, Autumnstar, and Braken took a step back. "Braken." She growled, "Do what you can for Whitestream, then get back to Leafmist, you must NOT let her die!"

Braken-

"Y-Yes Sunblaze!" I stammered. She was starting to scare me. Ravenfrost had said that she was deep, but not THIS deep. I immediately replaced the cobwebs on Leafmist's wounds with new ones, then walked over to Whitestream. Her wounds weren't HALF as bad as I had expected, but they were still bad. I sighed a sigh of relief. Her kits came up to me. "Is Whitestream gonna die?" Cloudpaw asked bravely. Ashpaw only shook with anger as fierce as Sunblaze's, and shock, and most of all: fear. "No, she's going to live; her ear will always look that way though." The kits were so relieved that they plopped down on the spot and started licking their mother's wounds. As I worked I noticed Sunblaze stalk into the warriors den. I turned and saw Ravenfrost and Swiftfeather both sitting down angrily shreading a pice of fresh-kill. I sighed. I guess that's what I got for cheating on them in the first place: Neither of them. But how could I have ever thought that I could keep that up? Or keep them?

Ravenfrost-

I angrily shread my fresh-kill. I didn't even CARE about Braken to begin with! He had made me like him! It wasn't my fault! I tore the poor dead rabbit that I had shreaded in half. I then sighed. I was never going to get anywhere like this. I needed to talk to my best friend: Swiftfeather. I got up, and gingerly took my shreaded rabbit with me. I slowly walked up next to Swiftfeather and dropped my rabbit on the ground. "Peace offfering?" I sat down. She did not move. "Look, I wanted to talk to you about Braken." I started, she flinched. This was NOT going to be easy. "I want you to know that at first I didn't even like him! He bassicly MADE me like him!" I looked at her hopefully, my stomach was doing summer-salts. I hoped this was gonna end well for us, but bad for Braken.

Sunblaze-

I stormed into the warriors den. Leafmist couldn't die. I had known her since I was a moon old, but nobody knew that. She was my best friend. With her gone I didn't know what I would do.

((Leafmist's role player, please don't make her die.))

"Hayfur!" he purred. "You're back!" He touched noses with her, and a pretty golden she-cat with stunning amber eyes padded next to him, purring as well. ''This is our daughter, Goldeneagle."

Hey Hayfur! Well, a few other things that you missed is that, umm, well, lemme think, well there was that fight with the fox. Owlclaw is gone, so Sunblaze is replaceing him untill he gets back, Swiftpaw became Swiftfeather, Ravenkit became Ravenpaw, then Ravenfrost, and Autumnstar lost two lives, Leafmist might die, Whitestream & family goined, oh, and, uh there's a huge emotional thing going on with Ravenfrost, Swiftfeather, and this rouge: Braken. Other than that, you prity much didn't miss much. You know, unless you count that as much. ;)