Because no one has told me if Lily Evans, James Potter, or Snape are at Hogwarts, I will place them in 4th year. 2 times my chapter 1 has been erased, the 1st time by Mum, the 2 was my accident. So I am writing this on a typing program and will copy and paste this on Cricket later, so it won’t get erased for a 3d time! The first time I wrote this it was still not very good, the second time it had a bit more detail, but still wasn’t that good, so no guarantees on whether this will be good, half decent, not good, or immensely bad. So here it goes.

Elizabeth was standing on platform 9 ¾. She heard parents bidding her children good-bye, and a young girl saying “Gwenny, will you write to me?” Elizabeth smiled at this; she had had a similar question asked by Emily, her younger sister this morning. Emily had said: “Lissy, when you write, you will write won’t you? Will you tell me everything that happens? And, Lissy, will your letter come the way your letter did – by owl?”.

Elizabeth was the first person in her family to go to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Her parents had been hesitant to let her go, and even went to the extent that they wrote to the headmaster to ask him what kind of school Hogwarts was. Luckily for Elizabeth, she had a neighbor, Mrs. Evans, who had a daughter in Hogwarts and had assured Mum and Dad that it was a fine school to go to and had taken her to Diagon Alley to buy her supplies. Mrs. Evans had also insisted on bringing her to platform 9 ¾ , though Mum had been hesitant, but Mrs. Evans had only said, “Elizabeth won’t be a bother at all. I always take Lily to the station, and there isn’t any  reason that Elizabeth should not come too.”

Now Mrs. Evans was saying to her, “Elizabeth, the train is ready to go, you best find a compartment.” Though Elizabeth still had loads of questions to ask, she boarded the train and was walking down the corridor as the train lurched forward, she stumbled and continued looking for a compartment. She passed a compartment with the girl that had a little sister (supposing it was her little sister) had called her  “Gwenny” with another girl whose hair color changed from yellow to bright pink in an instant. She found a compartment that was empty and looked outside and pulled out her potions book (She had already read all of her other school books) and turned to the first page. In the middle of chapter 3 two people walked in, a girl with wonderful green eyes, that she recognized as Mrs. Evans’ daughter, Lily, and a boy with a unpleasant expression on his face. “May we sit here? Lily inquired.” “You may,” Elizabeth replied.

 After a chapter of uneasy silence Elizabeth spoke “You’re Lily Evans, Mrs. Evans’ daughte.” When Lily gave a puzzled look Elizabeth said, “I am your neighbor; your mum brought me here and  took me to Diagon Alley.” Lily laughed, then said, “So you’re the famous Emily’s sister, ‘Lissy’, Emily is all that Petunia talks about, she said that Emily is ‘normal’ or as she puts it ‘Not like you and Emily’s crazy sister, Lissy’”. Elizabeth looked up from her book and said, “My name is Elizabeth” in a cold tone. Lily, some how not sensing her cold tone said bubbling with  curiosity “Really, not Felicity? I thought ‘Lizzy’ was the nickname for Elizabeth.” Elizabeth said “It is, Charlie used to call me Lizzy to vex me, Emily tried to say it, but it came out Lissy, and everyone thought it was so cute that ickle Emmykinz  tried to say Lizzy, so the name stuck, but now it is only my Dad , Emily, and on occasions Charlie, no one at school calls me Lissy anymore, after I almost broke Sam Philip’s leg in the 2d grade. I went to kick it, and his body was thrust back; some people from someplace called St. Michael’s or somthing like that took him. They said somthing about modifing memories, maybe that is why no one remembers anything about me hurting Sam except that he was in the hospital.” “ St. Mungoes” (note to every one reading this I know I spelt it wrong!) Lily said, then continued. “Was that your first magical sign?” Elizabeth thought awhile then answered, “No, when I was 5 Charlie pushed me out of the tree house and I was airborne for about 2 minutes, then when I came down, it was almost like I was floating.”. For the first time the boy with Lily spoke. “So are you the only ‘magical being’ or is Hogwarts to be cursed with another mudblood from your family?” Lily looked shocked. She said, “Sevres, watch your mouth!” Elizabeth replied “Lily, I am afraid your wee sister is to be disappointed, Emily has also shown signs of being magical.”

Then the door of their compartment slid open and a girl with a shiny badge with a P on it came in and said, “You’d best get on your robes, we will be there within a half an hour.”

OK how is it, give me feedback( if in fact anyone still reads this)

~ Elizabeth

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