WHOA!!! Now what?  Should Nell die?  (I would think not in the real PJ series, but this is different.)  WHERE'S ANALESIA???????  I think she was Nell originally.  Nell!  Do you mind dying?  Or would you rather live?  Hello?  Nell?  Are you there?

I won't post any part of the story until there's an answer.

Thanks for the HB things, and the finger stuff. They still hurt. I'm gonna have to get them looked at. EM I put this in one of the first posts and I don't really care if you change it but Tray told them she was going double agent blah blah blah, Nick and her are now fake together sorta blah blah blah exc. For Oregano yes Tray has three lives, but in real life the curse is fake. In the story it is real. Oh, and Admins words like floor and begin are being underlined and they have links to other pages that don't look like their from Cricket. I don't know why.

What thread are these underlined words on, Sam? I just looked through 8 pages of comments on this one and didn't find any underlined words. Thanks.

Admin

Tray-

I just sat in my room flipping through channels looking for something decent to watch. I finally stop on some Glee episode that I'm not really paying attention to. Jenifer walks in with an annoyed look on her face. When doesn't she wear that look? We stare at each other for a while. Eventually the silence gets to me. "What do you want?" I ask. "I know you're lying when you say you hate them. I know you don't really like Nick," she says. I almost laugh. How did she figure it out so quickly? I know, Jason. He's hers now and when that little bit of relief flashed through his face I know that set her off. She's a bit short tempered. "You're just mad because Jason looked relieved when I said I hate them," I say, a little smirk creeping up onto my face. She immediately goes into defense mode. "I am not!" I laugh this time. "Please, you're mad because every guy we've ever encountered has liked me first. Jason, Blake, Nick. You just can't stand it. I think it's the fact that you're half guy now." This sets her off. Her face goes red in anger, her silver eyes glaring. But I see a flicker of doubt come to her eyes. "You know I'm right," I say. She leaves. I smile to myself. I know now how to set her off. Maybe I can use this to my advantage now? Jason. Someone I never thought I could use as a weapon. Then Nick comes in. A smile on his face. "Nice job with Jenifer. I've never seen her so angry." I know immediately that he's trusting me over her now. She's right. But now I know I've got Nick fooled completely which is enough for me. I know this is going to take some effort though. I can't just kiss him once and expect smooth sailing after that. I stand up, and walk closer. "So are you sure you're done killing me?" I ask. He nodds. "I've been sure for a while." Then he kisses me and I can't wait for the moment when I can get off this dump. I know I want it to be soon. We break apart and he's staring at me with a triumphant smile on his face. Man I wanna leave. Something breaks on deck, and we run. I can't see anything through a dense fog. Then I can't believe who I see. I want to crawl in a rock and never come out. I want to hide behind Nick at least. "Hades, what a nice surprise." Nick smiles. I want to puke. My dad was here. This put a major knife in my plan. "I must speak with my daughter, in private. If I detect that anyone is watching I will crush them. Even Uranus as long as he stays in that puny human body." My dad spat. I know I'm in for it for switching sides. He doesn't know that I'm faking yet. "Yes Hades." Nick leads us to a room where there are no windows or even a door. Nick says something to the wall and it opens. I know this is a private place. When Nick is gone Hades ronds on me. "How could you?" He spits. "On that very long list of 'how could yous' which one would it be?" I ask. "Two actually. Be with Nick and switch sides," he says. There's pain in his voice. I can tell he wants our side to win very desperately. "I'm faking" is all I say. He looks confused so I try to explain. "I realised they wouldn't leave me alone if I said no, so I said yes. I knew it would take a lot to convince them so I took desperate measures. Then I called my friends and told them I was faking. I still am. There's not one part of me that doesn't hate all of them. Also you can't say anything because I want to destroy a plan or two of theirs before I reveal who I'm really helping," I say. He nods like he believes me. I know he does. "Okay fine. I believe you. But I'm not happy about it," he says. "Neither am I," I say. We both walk out of the room together and I watch him leave. Then I return to my room.

Tray-

When I saw the constelation in the sky I almost broke down. I was outside on deck with everyone on the ship watching me. It took all the self control I had ever had to stop from breaking into tears. My face distorted itself, trying to remember what emotion to show. I couldn't do this anymore. I had to find them. I hadn't expected Nell to die, but now she had. I quickly scratched a word into the side of the ship. Traitor. Then I jumped over the side. I'd left another surprise for Nick that he'd figure out later. I couldn't exactly swim so at first I was drounding, then for some reason the currents started to carry me. They sped me off in the direction of land. What in the whole wide world had made Poisidan bring me to them? I was Hades daughter! No one helped me. Suddenly I was washed up on shore. Panting, soaking and freezing I saw a fire ahead. It was stupid to go to it, but I was cold. I walked into a clearing where my real friends were. Sam's face was puffy and red but she was leaning over some boy. Adonia and Sophia were helping. It was Blake who noticed me first. "TRAY!" He shouted. Sam turned around with pure hatered in her eyes. I was actualy a little surpirsed. She turned on me. "What? How could you the little traitor come back?" She spat. "Run out of reasons to live?" She asked. "Harsh. But no. I saw the new constilation." I said. Her face, still puffy, turned pale. "Shut up." She said. She was pulling out a knife. I was to tired to react. "Sam stop!" Adonia cried. It was no use, only Nell could have gotten to her while she was like this. But Nell was dead. "Sam, stop. I have to tell you what I did first. Why I was there." So I explained everything. Even that little surprise for Nick. In no time we saw the first whisps of gray smoke out in the distance. So much for Nick's precious ship. "Belive me now?" I asked. She nodded. "Sorry." "It's fine." Then the boy started to wake up.

Sorry I can't post more. My computers dying and I can't find the charger.

Okay, you've gone along with the dying thing so I guess I will, too. Hmm... Okay, the knife had some instant killing poison and the left shoulder is near the heart, right? *cheesiness* And Nell was a hero, the whole way through! Yes, heroic dramatic deaths. Please ignore my last post. (The one under this!) 

 Sam—

Nell?Why Nell? Why not myself? Why had she died? And so fast? Why now? Why… Sheshouldn’t have died. She should’ve taken my place instead, gone on while herstupid sister went to Hades.

She died well.

Diedwell? What ugly words? She’d been hit with a knife in the shoulder. Nice death.

“Sam,it’ll be okay.” Adonia whispered in my ear.

Isobbed. It would never be okay. I’d have to wait until my dying day to see mysister again.

“Look!He’s alive!” Blake’s voice broke into my wounded thoughts.

Theboy… Did he men the one lying on the ground? The who’d just killed my sister?

Iripped away from Adonia, grabbed my knife and put it at the boy’s throat.

“If youmake one move, I’ll kill you on the spot.”

Hedumbfoundedly looked at me.

“Sam!”Sophia pulled me back.

I letmyself be dragged back into the sand.

“Whoare you?” Blake had advanced on the boy.

“Why amI here?” The boy retorted.

“Youdidn’t answer his question.” Sophia stood on his side.

“Well,you didn’t answer mine.” He said.

I threwmy knife, grazing his leg. “Answer.” I demanded.

“I amTravis Warner.” He told us.

“Youarrived on a snake.” Adonia answered his question in return.

“Hmm…Oh, yes. Quite dead, green scaly?”

Adonianodded.

“Youkilled Sam’s sister.” Sophia said simply.

“Aha.Was she as crazy as her?”

“No, ahero, brave and soft.”

Thanks,Sophia for admitting that I’m insane.

“Sorry.”The boy turned to me, his blue eyes big and soft. He reminded me of a two yearold apologizing for stealing his friend’s toy.

A tearrolled down my cheek and I hid my face in my shirt.