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I'm taking songs suggestions to turn into poems/stories about how they might make you/me feel.
What you have to do.
Song name Ex. Counting Stars, by OneRepublic:
How it makes you feel (optional):
A word you'd like in it (optional):
3rd, 2nd, or 1st person (optional) As in 3rd "They all said", 2nd "He/she said", or 1st "I/you said:
Please no explicit songs, thank you.
Also, try and guess who I am. 
submitted by Mysterious Poet, age Millenia, The Beautiful Place
(August 20, 2024 - 9:09 am)
(August 20, 2024 - 9:09 am)
Ex means example, sorry. (nervous laugh)
(August 20, 2024 - 10:34 am)
(August 20, 2024 - 3:42 pm)
Sounds cool!
Song name Ex. Counting Stars, by OneRepublic: Tell Me I Can't by Michelle Khare
How it makes you feel (optional): empowered, strong
A word you'd like in it (optional): is a phrase okay? Then "not giving up"
3rd, 2nd, or 1st person (optional) As in 3rd "They all said", 2nd "He/she said", or 1st "I/you said: 1st, I/you
(August 20, 2024 - 5:48 pm)
Yep, a phrase is perfectly fine!!! And this is the first time I've ever heard that song and I love it!! :)
Everything you go through
Every hardship
You worked hard
They told you that you couldn't
They said you'll never do it
Why should you listen to them
You don't, you laugh
You step in the Ring of judgement, expectations, and steriotypes
You were ready, you aren't going to be told you can't do something you really love
Your desicions are made by you, not them
You were not giving up, not now, not ever
You smile as you take your doubts from others head-on
You're stronger than you think, you ou can do more than you ever knew
You were made for this, you just had to accept the challenge
And you did
And you won
You won.
I didn't know if this was good enough, but this is what came to mind when writing it. I really hope you like it, I had a lot of fun writing it!!
(August 21, 2024 - 9:07 am)
Thanks!! I love the poem- it captures the mood perfectly.
(August 21, 2024 - 4:38 pm)
I think evryone can agree that this song deserves to be a poem
Song name Ex. Counting Stars, by OneRepublic: space song, by Beach House
How it makes you feel (optional): Sad, emotional
A word you'd like in it (optional): IG phrases are ok, "Every beat of the heart like a sword"
3rd, 2nd, or 1st person (optional) As in 3rd "They all said", 2nd "He/she said", or 1st "I/you said: 1st "I/you said (I)
I love this song
(August 21, 2024 - 9:21 am)
OH I LOVE THIS SONG!!!!
Have you ever wondered what it's like beyond the stars?
I know I have.
I pictured myself so far out I could see my loved ones there
Waiting for me to pick up my feet and move on
Waiting for me to understand that they never left me
They're still there.
Wanting me to bring them back to life
Waiting for me to make them travel through space to arrive
Travel through the galaxy,
just for my reassurance
Sometimes, it's not even family, sometimes it's just people I've held dear, SOMETIMES it's my friend who was never really gone but still had to leave.
Now I'm the one waiting
Waiting for life to catch up
Waiting for love to flutter away
WAITING for everything to go back to normal and fall back into place
It never did.
I still hurt
Every beat of the heart like a sword
Every breath a struggle
Your absence is awful
Yet...
Yet I still feel your warm embrace
Yet I still hear your laughs
The glorious sound
It assures me,
It assures me that I will see you again
That you're safe
That you're happy
I can be happy too.
I can.
Because of you.
I'm happy.
We're happy.
You're happy.
I fell back into place, not into life, but into acceptacne and love.
I'm good.
We're good.
You're good.
We're here.
This song does something to my brain, I love it. i hope this is good enough for you. :3
(August 23, 2024 - 12:05 pm)
THIS IS A MASTERPIECE!
(August 24, 2024 - 5:53 pm)