A Ski Lodge~
Chatterbox: Pudding's Place
A Ski Lodge~
A Ski Lodge
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It's the middle of summer, and you're draped languorously on your couch, a thick book in your hands and a cool glass of lemonade within reach. A small fan whirs, a pathetic rival to the unrelenting heat. Your window is open, although it doesn't make much difference, for the air outside is still and humid.
Suddenly, you hear the symphonious tinkling of wind chimes. You couldn't remember ever hearing wind chimes around your house before, but this isn't a huge source of concern. The biggest thing interesting you is the cream-colored envelope that has fluttered in from the window and onto your living room floor.
You set your book down, and pick up the envelope, turning it over in your hands. On the front, in neat black ink, it spelled out your name. Odd. You slit the top of the envelope, and withdraw two pieces of parchment and a small, pressed purple flower - you recognize its delicate floral scent as lavender. You pick up the first piece of parchment and read,
Dear CBer,
You are invited on an all-expenses paid vacation at Lockaria House, located within the Osorthe Forest. While there, you will experience a fortnight of fun, adventure, excitement, and, quite possibly, danger. Sign up quickly, only fifteen guests are allowed. This includes any AE companions you may choose to bring. We will begin when spots are filled.
Your hostess,
Ms. Socie Grishelm
- Please note that the popcorn is not free.
- CAPTCHAs and CAPTCHAEs are not allowed.
- I advise you to pack warmly, the Osorthe Forest is trapped in an eternal autumn.
- Lockaria House is not responsible for any damage or loss of property or person during your time here.
- Please fill out the forms for both yourself and any AE you wish to attend.
The second piece of parchment, you soon discover, contains said forms.
Name:
Gender/Pronouns:
Appearance:
Personality:
Aura (Basically, what color embodies your personality?):
Biggest Strength:
Biggest Weakness:
Favorite Flower:
Luggage:
Other:
Something about this letter makes you wary, but those thoughts are quickly banished to the back of your mind. It's so hot here, and an all-expenses-paid autumnal vacation is just the thing you need. You grab the writing utensil of your choice and in careful print, fill out the forms.
Besides, what could possibly go wrong in fourteen days?
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Yep, I’m rebooting my ski lodge from several months ago! I don’t know if anyone remembers it, but I think I got fairly far in it, and it was fun, so I’m rebooting it! I promise this time it will not die! I was guessed last time, but still feel free to guess who I am. ;)
(January 18, 2023 - 5:32 pm)
I just wanted to say again how awesome this lodge is!!! (Spoiler: it's VERY awesome! No, it's the VERIEST awesome (if that's a word?)! It's the awesomest EVER!!!!! No no no. This is all wrong. It's not awesome. It's AWESOMESAUCE (which, in my opinion, is so much awesomer than the awesomest awesome topped with awesome awesome ever could be)!!!)
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(September 25, 2023 - 9:52 pm)
Top! Loving this lodge so much. Hope you're enjoying high school, friend! :) Sending positivity your way.
(September 26, 2023 - 11:15 am)
I finally wrote the next part! Just in time for Halloween, too :)
Thank you all for the comments! It means so so much <333
Enjoy~
Day 9, Part 3
Silver Crystal stepped out of the house and swung her flashlight around the dark gardens, darkness creeping in around the beam. Rain beat down around them, a chill already settling into her bones, even through her heavy raincoat. The trees swayed in an unruly wind, their boughs creaking and fallen leaves whipping by.
“You know,” Hex said distractedly, adjusting the hood of her raincoat so that it covered her tangles of short brown hair, “on Neptune, it rains diamonds.”
It wasn’t hard to imagine. Raindrops cut through the flashlight’s cold glow, sharp and glittering like crystal shards. And for everything that had happened in the last week and a half, Silver might as well have been on a different planet. She shivered, and glanced over her shoulder at the warm lights emanating from Lockaria House. But she couldn’t go inside yet.
“ECHO!” Reuby screamed beside Silver, but her voice was snatched up by the wind and the rain.
“That won’t work,” said Silver Crystal. “Wherever Echo is...I don’t think she can hear us.”
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Writing, Ronin, Reuby, and, of course, Wiccan, trooped through the forest, their footsteps silent on the soggy leaves amidst the pounding rain and roaring wind. They shouted Echo’s name, to no avail.
Reuby thought back to what Silver had said. Echo wouldn’t be able to hear them. They needed a different approach. “We should split up,” said Reuby.
“What? That’s a terrible idea!” Ronin snapped. “That’s how people always get killed in horror movies.”
“There’s three of us, not counting Wiccan, and a whole forest. If we split up, we can cover more ground,” Reuby retorted.
“She has a point,” Writing shrugged.
Ronin glared at them with an expression half incredulous, half exasperated.
“We have to find Echo, no matter what,” Writing continued.
Ronin glared. “Even if it means you get killed?”
Writing’s expression softened. “Ronin—I know you’re scared. I am too, okay?” He lowered his voice—they weren’t entirely sure they could trust Reuby. “Echo and I have almost gotten to the bottom of what’s going on here, and that’s why we need to find her. I can’t do it alone.”
After a moment of thought, Ronin sighed and reluctantly gave in. “Fine,” he grumbled. “We meet back at the house in an hour. You’d better come back.”
~~~
Writing wandered through the dark woods, methodically calling out Echo’s name. They racked their brain, trying to think of somewhere she could be—were there any caves in the forest, perhaps, where she was being held?
The answer came suddenly. The treehouse he and Firelily had discovered the day Kyanite had been killed. How had they forgotten about that?
He ran to the treehouse, stumbling over tree roots, swatting away rain-soaked branches, until he arrived at the base of the treehouse.
“ECHO!” they shouted.
“She’s not here.”
Writing’s blood ran cold as he warily turned around, clenching his hands into fists.
A person stood there, leaning casually against a tree, with dark brown skin and a crop of curly brown hair.
“Who are you?” Writing snarled.
“Calm down, I’m not going to hurt you.” The person held out their hands, palms up. “I’m Carnelian.”
Writing’s breath caught in their throat. Carnelian—that was the name in the diary. But—
“We found your diary,” said Writing, the words coming out in a rush. “How—how are you still alive?”
“That’s the thing,” said Carnelian, turning to face the trees. “I’m not.”
Indeed, in turning around, Carnelian had revealed a bloom of red staining the back of their white sweater.
“But how—”
Writing stopped himself. It made sense, in a crooked sort of way; the AE ghost Ronin had encountered, and now this ghost they were talking to right now....
He wasn’t going to dwell on it. There were more important questions to be asking Carnelian.
“The last few pages of your diary—they were ripped out. Did—did you figure out anything about who the murderer was, or why the murders were happening?”
“Yes, I—I did,” Carnelian said, their voice barely a whisper under the pouring rain. Writing had to step closer to hear. “But I have to be sure I can trust you.”
“Of course you can trust me,” said Writing. “Why would a murderer ask you that? It’s not like they can kill you, or anything—you’re already dead.” They seemed to realize that that might be a touchy subject, so they added, “Sorry, I didn’t mean to—”
Carnelian waved a hand dismissively. “I guess you’re right. Besides, the murderer would probably be with Echo now. It’s nearly eight o’clock.”
Echo.
Writing had nearly forgotten that he was supposed to be looking for her. “Please, just tell me what you’ve figured out. I need to find Echo.”
“It’s too late for that,” said Carnelian. “Even if you do somehow manage to find her in the five minutes you have left, it doesn’t change the fact that someone is going to die today. If not Echo, then another one of your friends. Maybe even you. Maybe even your AE.”
Writing’s hands clenched again. Carnelian’s words seemed threatening, but they spoke so matter-of-factly. That was the scariest part.
“You knew what would happen,” Carnelian continued, “when you filled out that form. You knew that your friends would be murdered. And you still signed up. You still came here. And now you’re trying to stop it. You can’t stop it, Writing.”
Writing was too stunned, too frightened, to even wonder how Carnelian knew their name. “What are you saying?” he asked, voice shaking.
“Can’t you see it?” Carnelian cried, flinging their out, gesturing to the entire Osorthe Forest and everything in it. “We’re in a ski lodge.”
~~~
Rough rope cut into Echo’s skin and floorboards creaked overhead, sending dust drifting down into the basement. It was nearly eight o’clock, and no one had found her yet. She hadn’t expected anyone to.
The basement door creaked open and the murderer clomped down the stairs. “It’s eight o’clock,” they said.
I know, Echo thought, but her mouth was stuffed with cloth and she couldn’t speak.
“You certainly got close to solving the mystery of Lockaria House,” said the murderer. “One more day, and I’m sure you would’ve figured it out. But we can’t have that, can we?”
Echo glared at the murderer. No, clearly they couldn’t. She’d realized that, as she sat there in the basement, waiting for someone to come save her. But now that she’d figured it out—or at least had an inkling of an idea—there was no way she’d be able to live.
It was just too dangerous.
For all of them.
“Well, as much as I’d hate to kill you, promises are promises,” said the murderer, taking the cloth out and forcing belladonna berries into her mouth.
Bitter berries exploded across her tongue, but Echo didn’t struggle. She knew she’d never get out of here alive.
And then the world went dark.
~~~
Alive: 6
Dead: 9 (Pangolin, Oliver, Daisy, Eclipse, Kyanite, Artemis, Sterling, Echo)
(October 26, 2023 - 10:17 am)
Oh. My. STARS. Pangolin, how could you? (Kidding, of course!)
This ski-lodge is INCREDIBLE. Also, thank you for the awesomely dramatic death! Wow, those are words I thought I'd never see myself type. Well, thanks anyway! :D
(October 26, 2023 - 2:21 pm)
NOO Echo/Endless!! And yay, new part! Awesome as always!! The descriptions were great and I especially liked that part with Writing and Ronin! Hmm.. I wonder what Writing can figure out from Carnelian? :DD
(October 26, 2023 - 8:17 pm)
OH MY GOSH I can't believe I missed this when it came out!!!!!! Echo!!! Carnelian!?!? The ski lodge reveal!! It was a little sus what I said about Echo not being able to hear us.... but hopefully that doesn't mean anything. So so masterfully done I love it sm!! We're really getting into it now, can't wait to see how the mystery unfolds.
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(October 26, 2023 - 12:23 pm)
Oh noooooo, it's too late to save Echo...deadly nightshade is called deadly for a reason. Why is its other name sound so pretty?
And also @pangolin, this new part was amazing as always and I sympathize with having not much time to write. I've barely done anything since the end of summer except schoolwork (I'm also in highschool too). *sighs*
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I totally forgot about this ski lodge over the summer, but I'm so glad I rediscovered it! Last year I would read along and check for a new part every day. I love this ski lodge <3
(January 8, 2024 - 1:37 pm)