Written Picturings!
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Written Picturings!
Written Picturings!
I've never done these, but they look very fun! I also need to improve my descriptions of people/animals. Here's the form!
Name/nickname:
Age:
Gender/Pronouns:
vague personality:
other:
submitted by Red Starlight
(June 13, 2021 - 1:17 pm)
(June 13, 2021 - 1:17 pm)
Name/nickname: Milly Sunstar
Age: 12
Gender/Pronouns: she/her, female
vague personality: you know me ;)
other: thank you!
(June 13, 2021 - 2:21 pm)
Since I know you irl, I made a written picturing of what I think someone named Milly Sunstar would look, kind of mixed with your CB appearance. So here you go! :)
On a rock by a shallow creek, a girl sits peacefully. She's holding a large book, smiling to herself. A beautiful canary flies by, rustling the pages of her book. She laughs faintly.
The girl has long chocolate ringlets, with orange streaks curling and twisting through the curls. She's wearing a knee length flowy white dress, with a pastel red ribbon that has a bow at the back, wrapped around her belt line. Her white sandals have an off-white zipper trailing up them. Her lips have soft pink lip gloss, and her eyes are dark brown.
She puts her finger out, and the canary lands on it. The girl smiles as she strokes its soft feathers. "I'll call you Oak," she says with a soft smile. She looks into the sunset with her new friend, and can't help but think today was a great day. She can't wait for the days to come.
(June 14, 2021 - 11:02 pm)
(June 13, 2021 - 4:02 pm)
I'd love one!
Name/nickname: Pangolin
Age: 11 almost 12
Gender/Pronouns: She/they
vague personality: Introvert, awkward in social situations, loves to read and write, likes nature
other: Thanks!
(June 14, 2021 - 7:27 am)
Hi! I've finished your picturing! I've never written about someone with she/they pronouns, so I have an alternating between them version and a version that's just she/her, just in case. So here's the alternating one, and let me know if you want to read the not alternating one! I hope you like it!
Atop a snowy mountain in deep snow, a person stands. She’s holding on to something black and rubbery tightly. It looks like a zipline. They strap a velcro and hooked harness around themself.
They have auburn hair in a low, loose bun. Her eyes are crystal blue, and she has long eyelashes. She’s wearing a blue snow jacket with black snow pants. Her snow boots are caramel colored. Their face is peppered with freckles, and they have dimples. Her dark eyebrows are pressed together, her mouth unsmiling. She looks nervous.
They take a deep breath. In.... out. She walks back a couple paces, and she takes a running start and jumps. Beautiful, snowy scenery whips around her, and she smiles. This isn’t so bad, she thinks. The wind flowing so fast knocks the rubber band right out of her bun, and her long auburn hair flows quickly behind her, blowing and twisting with the wind.
All too soon, the ride ends. The person takes her ski gear from a tree trunk and skis down the mountain. She can’t wait to do it again!
(June 16, 2021 - 1:43 pm)
Thank you so much! I'm sorry, I should have been clear on what those pronouns meant, but yes, either alternating or using one works fine. I love the imagery and how it's so cleverly worded. I love it!
(June 16, 2021 - 4:01 pm)
I'd love one, if you don't mind!
Name/nickname: Peppermint, aka Pepper
Age: 13
Gender/pronouns: female, she/her
Vague personality: Shy around most people, but more talkative around those I know. Tends to daydream a lot, loves reading and writing, usually pretty upbeat!
Other: Thank you so much!!
(June 15, 2021 - 1:26 pm)
Here's yours, I hope you like it!
In a large classroom, there are many students. Most are working on a worksheet, particularly of the math variety. Although there are so many kids, one girl stands out.
The girl is staring out a large window, daydreaming. She daydreams a lot, and she loves doing it too. She imagines wonderful, exhilarating things happening to her, like they do to her favorite book characters.
The girl has big hazel eyes, with small specks of gold like tiny suns. Her lips are curled in a slight smile. The girl is a little taller than the other kids, her collarbone-length golden-brown hair a little higher than the others. She has hundreds of freckles dotting her face, like little stars fallen from the sky. Her sea foam green blouse is half-covered by a dark denim jacket. The girl is wearing grey jeans, and has yellow converse.
The girl keeps daydreaming until an earpiercing bell knocks her out of her trance. She smiles wider, and rushes out of the school building. Weekend, here I come!
(June 19, 2021 - 9:20 pm)
Ahhhh, I love it!!! Thank you so much!!!
(June 22, 2021 - 9:44 pm)
Name/nickname: Silver Crystal
Age: 14
Gender/Pronouns: She/her
vague personality: Shy with people I don't know, very talkative with friends, kinda nerdy
(June 15, 2021 - 3:16 pm)
Here's your picturing, Silver Crystal! I hope you like it!
In northern Wisconsin, there is a huge party. From miles away, you can hear the music and see the streamers. A girl sits watching atop a tall roof. She smiles at the way the people dance, the music, the laughter.
The girl has long, sleek place hair pulled up in a high ponytail with a yellow rubber band at the top of her head. The girl's earrings have a gold frame with a circular crystal in the middle. Her eyes are a dark emerald green. The girl has a wide smile, a happy face. She is wearing a pastel yellow shirt with sunflower yellow sleeves, dark blue Jean shorts, and no shoes. Her skin is a little bit pale, her cheeks a rosy pink that matches her glossed lips. She has hombre pink to orange glasses perched atop her nose.
The music gets louder, and the girl stands up and runs down to the foot of the building. She puts on soft brown leather boots, and sprints all the way to the celebration. She joins in with the festivities.
All too soon, it's over. The girl stays behind and lays down under the stars. Just one more year, and then it'll all happen again.
(June 25, 2021 - 3:56 pm)
I've never been anywhere near Wisconsin, but if it's anything like this than I'll have to visit!! This was wonderful, thank you so much!!
(June 25, 2021 - 9:53 pm)
I'm glad you like it! Autocorrect changed it when I said "long, sleek black hair" to "long, sleek place hair" so sorry! I meant to put long sleek black hair! I'll try to get to most of the requests today!
(June 27, 2021 - 10:29 am)
Name/nickname: Lightning Girl "LG"
Age: 12
Gender/Pronouns: She/her/female
vague personality: Friendly, loves ropes courses, loves meeting new people, chattterbox
other: Could I do one for my AE?
(June 17, 2021 - 6:58 pm)
Hi! Your picturing is finished, sorry it took so long! My day became super busy yesterday. Yes, you can do one for your AE! Id love to do one for them!
During a snowy winter, camping is a usual thing for families in some places in Illinois. For others, during winter break from school is good for kids to go to camps, much like summer camps.
Camp Heat is very busy this particular winter. As the buses come raining in, the kids can go wherever they want to explore. One girl knows exactly where she wants to go. She runs straight to the rope course.
The girl has big blue eyes, with long eyelashes. Her face is covered in layers of freckles. She has a reddish-orange pixie cut, part of which is weaved into a neat braid against her right cheek. She has a yellow t shirt on, with white stripes. The jacket she's wearing is black with a silver zipper. Her dark jean have a few tears, and her shoes are sky blue.
Despire the snow, the girl's clothes are rather light. She keeps running, all the way to her destination. She smiles, and easily succeeds with finishing the course. She laughs and does it over and over again until it's time to regroup. She runs to regroup with her friends, and tells them all about the rope course. She smiles, she gets to do it again tomorrow!
(June 28, 2021 - 11:57 am)