Written Picturings!!

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Written Picturings!!

Written Picturings!!

Hello! I am doing written picturings because... Well, why not? Just fill out this form:
Name:
Gender/pronouns:
Other:
And I'll have your picturing out as soon as I can! Thanks! 
submitted by Periwinkle , age Pi, Somewhere in the stars
(April 27, 2021 - 2:20 pm)

back to the Pudding's Place

Thank you so much, Peri!  It's beautiful, I love it!  And, funnily enough, archery is another of my interests though I rarely include it among them when I write them down.  Mostly because I've only done it once.

submitted by Peregrine
(May 14, 2021 - 10:27 am)

I would love one!

Name: Milly Sunstar

Gender/pronouns: female, She/her
Other: I'm very bubbly and talkative.
submitted by Milly Sunstar
(May 28, 2021 - 11:14 am)

Ahh! I'm so sorry Milly! I didn't see this! I'll post your picturing soon.

submitted by Peri@Milly, age Pi, Somewhere in the stars
(June 5, 2021 - 7:13 am)

That's fine! Thanks for telling me!

submitted by Milly Sunstar, age 12, Where the sidewalk ends
(June 6, 2021 - 1:52 pm)

Sorry for the long wait, here is your picturing! 

A small candy shop sat on a street in New York City. The whole street was dark and gloomy, and it was pouring rain. But the candy shop was bright and lively. Light came from it and the scent of cookies and chocolate wafted from it. 
The shop only had two customers, and there weren't any waiters. Just the shop owner behind a counter. 
The owner had long brown hair. She had put the front of her hair in two pigtails. She was wearing big magneta hoop earrings and had some light pink blush on her face. She had a purple sweatshirt and black leggings, and one purple high top shoe and one pink one. 
The owner put some peppermint ice cream onto pancakes and started squirting hot fudge all over them. Then, she rang a bell.
"Order up!"
An old fashioned phone that looked to be from the 60s or 70s rang. It was the same color as her earrings. She answered it.
"Oh, hey! How've you been? You know, you should really come down to the shop! We've got new flavors now.... Yup! Wait, really? Omg yes!.... Okay, bye!" 
The owner looked at a clock. "Break time!" She grabbed a spoon, grinned, and took a nice big bite of cookie dough. 
submitted by Peri@Milly, age Pi, Somewhere in the stars
(June 13, 2021 - 7:30 am)
submitted by PeriTOP!, It’s Periwinkle <3
(June 13, 2021 - 9:22 am)

Ah! This is awwweeesssoooommmmeee. Thank you so so much Periwinkle! Now I wish I had the phone you described ;).

submitted by Milly Sunstar
(June 15, 2021 - 10:54 am)

Ah! This is awwweeesssoooommmmeee. Thank you so so much Periwinkle! Now I wish I had the phone you described ;).

submitted by Milly Sunstar
(June 15, 2021 - 10:54 am)
I'd love one!
Name: Red Starlight (Star)
Gender/pronouns: female she/her
Other: I can be quiet and can be loud, and I love cold weather
submitted by Red Starlight
(June 13, 2021 - 1:13 pm)

Okay, here, finally, is your picturing! I'm so sorry for the long wait. I hope this includes enough of your personality in it!

 

 

BOOM!

It was freezing outside at the December Christmas Fireworks Show. A girl sat on the front of her family's old fashioned red car, holding a cup of hot chocolate and looking amazed. She had never heard of a December Fireworks Show, but she was loving it. 

 

BOOM!

 

A big, white firework illuminated the girl's face for a moment. She had dark brown hair in a low ponytail, and a blanket wrapped around her. She wore a big, red-orange jacket, jeans, and navy low-tops. Her big brown eyes were wide with enchantment as the sky was lit up with color. Her skin was pale from the cold, but her cheeks remained rosy. 

 

 

She took a sip of her hot cocoa and closed her eyes for a minute. Suddenly, she felt a little tap of coldness on her forehead.

 

 

Snow!

 

 

She opened her eyes and smiled at the snowflakes. This was the most magical night ever. 

 

 

submitted by Peri@Star, age Pi, Somewhere in the stars
(June 24, 2021 - 12:59 pm)
submitted by PeriTOP!, It’s Periwinkle <3
(June 24, 2021 - 5:17 pm)

Peri, this is beautifully written! I love your word use and your onomatopoeia! Thank you so much, you are an amazing writer! Your descriptive words build up to each other in a wonderful way, and it makes reading your writing magical, like you're watching a movie, or there yourself. Thanks again!

submitted by Red Starlight
(June 26, 2021 - 11:42 am)
Name: Lightning Girl
Gender/pronouns: She/her/female
Other: In the story can I have a pet cat opr is that to complicated?
submitted by Lightning Girl, age 2,000,000, Bortron_7
(June 29, 2021 - 12:10 pm)
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