Chatterbox: Pudding's Place

A Ski Lodge

You flop down onto your bed, exhausted from another long day of school. Is it really necessary for your teacher to assign you to write three essays this week? You have other stuff going on. Life. And you can’t afford to fail this class. Your academic success is hanging on a precipice, and one nudge will send it falling into an abyss so deep that it will never be found if it is lost.

The computer is open in front of you, the white, electronic pages of your word processor beckoning to you. You sit down at your desk.

And then you stand up again and go to the kitchen for a glass of water. You can’t work with a dry mouth. Then, once the water is drained, you grab an apple. It’s slightly withered, but you slice it and slowly eat. You glance over toward the counter where a digital clock squats, its red numbers blinking threateningly. 9:48. If your parents knew you were up this late on a school night, eating old apples, with three essays to write, they would go completely out of their minds.

But your parents aren’t here to boss you around at the moment, so who cares what they’d say? It’s not as if the essays were due tomorrow. At least, not all of them are. Just one.

The apple is gone, and you can no longer think of any stalling techniques. You are fighting a losing battle against yourself. It’s past ten at night, you have school tomorrow, and your teacher is expecting a nice, long essay from everyone’s favorite student.

You walk slowly back to your room and sit down at your desk. You type a few words, yawn, type a few more, open up a web browser, surf Wikipedia for a couple of minutes, yawn again. So far you have only twelve words.

You open up the CB. It’s late, you know, and no one will have posted a thing since you checked last, but maybe you can read an old ski lodge or two.

You click on Pudding’s Place, intending to look for Lake Lelilo or something, when a new thread catches your eye. A Ski Lodge, it says, in those red letters you know so well. You click on the link, and start to read.

“You flop down onto your bed, exhausted from another long day of school. Is it really necessary for your teacher to assign you to write three essays this week?”

What?

You keep reading, watching your own movements of that night laid before you in second person, right up to this very moment.

Good.

I’ve got your attention now.

My dear CBer,

You are having trouble at school. You have unwritten essays, and you don’t know what to write.

That’s okay.

We are offering you the chance of a lifetime, the chance to fix everything. Come to Camp Juniper, where you have the chance to be freed from the bonds of school. You will no longer have to study late into the night in order to pass a test. You will no longer have to struggle for hours on end in order to write a good essay. In short, we are giving you a Get Out of Jail Free card. And, if you choose not to accept this card, you will be given a free college scholarship.

There will be competitions throughout the days of camp. Each camper will have the chance to earn juniper branches. Anyone who is able to weave their branches into a wreath by the end of the camp session will earn this freedom.

Sounds nice?

We thought so.

All you have to do is fill out this form. And be prepared to die.

Name:

CBer, AE, CAPTCHA, or CAPTCHAE? (Note: CAPTCHAs, and CAPTCHAEs are not allowed):

Age:

Gender:

Companion(s) (up to 2 companions per person) (please fill out a sheet for them as well) (AEs only):

Appearance:

Personality in five words. (Any more or less and you will no longer have the privilege to eat popcorn):

Skills:

Quirks:

Brains or Brawn?:

Envy or Empathy?: 

Reverie or Realism?:

Luggage, in order from most to least important:

Choose a number:

Choose a color:

Other:

We are excited to see you. And yes, we WILL see you.

Your obedient servants,

L. Reine & B. Ambrose

P.S. The popcorn is free, as well.

P.P.S. Please be prepared to participate fully, whatever this may mean.

P.P.P.S. Obviously, this is a ski lodge.

You read over the letter again. Is it worth it? You could die. . . but people always come back to life after a ski lodge. You could be a murderer. . . but who cares about that? It’s just a story. And how hard could it be to weave a few branches into a wreath?

Yes, you decide.

It’s definitely worth it.

And so, you fill out the form.

And then, you press submit.

submitted by Liberté and Basil, Camp Juniper
(October 31, 2020 - 8:09 pm)
submitted by Sammy EverTOP
(March 10, 2021 - 1:44 pm)

Day Five — Afternoon

The murderer looked down at the notebook apprehensively. It was a small thing, with a battered silk cover the dusky color of the sky just after sunset. If they tilted it in the right direction with the proper lighting, they could swear that they could see the evening star. They didn’t want to tilt it though, or even to touch it. This notebook… this notebook had the power to end it all. Somehow, the killer had broken the most important rule. Rule Number Five.

Don’t Get Caught.

Yet, somehow, they had dropped a clue, a hint as to who they were, what they had done. And the girl had seen it, picked it up and treasured it like a pearl in a chest of chaff. The one person who might, perhaps, be able to use the information she had and shape it into a narrative — most likely not a cohesive one, but when has a ski lodge ever been truly cohesive? She had almost caught on, she had been a moment away from realizing what she knew. A second later, and it would have been too late.

No, no,

It’s fine, the murderer reassured themself. She didn’t figure it out. She didn’t realize. And with those words ringing in their ears, the killer opened the notebook and read what the girl had written.

A Collection of Notes, Thoughts, Ponderings, and Clues

Compiled by Luna-Starr

  1. Zachary knows something. I don’t think he quite knows what he knows, though.

  2. There is only one correct way to eat corn on the cob.

  3. Snow is kind of scary. No, more than kind of. That child really scares me.

  4. Sammy Everlast is important.

  5. Music has power.

And then, right on that very paper. The killer’s name, and that single, vital clue.

...If only the rules would relax…

***

Zachary knows something.

Zachary Sìtheil Rìoghochad was on his phone again. He had a personal hotspot. That bit of data should have been enough to boost the phone signals, to send a single text message to his brother. Only a few words, but so important.

I love you, Alex. If anything happens, don’t forget me.

But it wouldn’t send. What kind of monsters were keeping him here, on this island, unable to escape or even to tell his little brother that he loved him? Why couldn’t he send a single text? And what was that something, those words that kept nagging at his mind, distracting him from everything else. Even now, when he had the perfect right to a mental breakdown after worrying over his brother, those words kept him sane. They were important. The words knew… something.

***

There is only one correct way to eat corn on the cob.

Nightfall, though, had no special knowledge, no nagging words that were able to keep xyr mind away from the knowledge that Inari was dead, gone. No longer there for xem to nag and argue and joke with. There was no one xey could talk to about what the right way to eat corn on the cob was, because no one but Inari could understand why that was important to make certain. No Inari to complain to about how tired xey was and how much xey needed ice cream right that very minute or else there was a high possibility of internal combustion after becoming unbearably hot because that’s what happens when you chase someone around a cabin 57 times in a place with high temperatures. No ice cream. No corn. And, most of all, no Inari.

***

Snow is kind of scary.

Yes. Yes, she was. For, at the very moment that the murderer read those words, the seven-year-old in question was screeching at the top of her high pitched voice for Autumn Artist to get off her bed that very instant and go shoot those awful mosquitos with her bow and arrow. No matter that the mosquitoes were quite as friendly as blood sucking insects could possibly be, no matter that the camp owned no arrows with points small enough to precisely hit the tiny bugs, no matter that being shot with projectile weapons would probably make the currently sleepy mosquitos mad enough to bit anyone within a ten-thousand mile radius of them.

The mosquitos had to go.

If someone disagreed with Snow… well. There would be consequences.

And it was very likely that those consequences would include extra-sharp fingernails and a toddler-worthy tantrum.

***

Sammy Everlast is important.

Sammy agreed. She was, in fact, very important. She was also still angry. One of her AEs was dead, the other was melting in longing for his little brother. She would get her revenge. And she knew something. Something very, very essential. Maybe she should tell the person who was always nagging her for clues. After all, they were the only person who was truly sympathetic to her. Then again, the nagging was getting annoying, and this was special. Maybe Sammy should keep it to herself.

Maybe then she would be able to stop the killer with her own bare hands.

***

Music has power.

Yes. The killer knew that better than anyone. The music in this place had power indeed, more power than they could really understand. All they knew was that it was a tool, like a hammer and nails they could use to pound an idea into a camper’s head. The magic was powerful indeed. A single note could change the course of destiny.

If the murderer had believed in destiny, of course. Which they didn’t. Each person to themself, they thought. No one’s fate is written in the stars.

No one can control you except for yourself.

They had never been more wrong.

***

The girl with the frizzy hair was afraid.

She knew who the killer was, and she had thought that maybe, just maybe, she would be able to stop them. But she couldn’t. She had thought that she was close enough to the puppet master to take the strings. She wasn’t. She thought she knew what was going on.

She was really, really wrong.

 

***

 

The challenge for this afternoon is our first writing-based challenge! (Believe me, there are plenty to come.) Please write a short story about a swim meet. Perhaps you will take the point of view of the judge, a swimmer, or even the pool itself. I know that some people may consider themselves to be talented writers, and others may consider writing to not be their strong suit. Nevertheless, please participate as as much as you can. We look forward to seeing your stories!


Rules: Please keep your story between 500 and 2500 words. We will accept one submission per CBer/AE, and we will not be accepting re-submissions. Please have your story submitted to us by Saturday, March 13.

 

***

 

Dead: 5 (Hot Coco, Ydris "Masquerade" Dìomhaireachd, Felix, Inari, and Sunmer. May they rest in peace in the glory of Camp Juniper)

 

Alive: 15
Suspects: dreamy, Kitty Cat, Sterling, and Icarus
Enemies of Snow: Zachary, dreamii, and AutumnArtist.
Juniper Leader: Sammy and Summer (tied with two juniper branches)  
submitted by Liberté, Camp Juniper
(March 10, 2021 - 2:18 pm)

I am obsessed with the format of this part. It's methodical yet suspenseful and adds interesting developments without being action or dialogue-heavy. You two will never cease to amaze me. :D

Also, that is exactly how I take notes. Right down to the title. It's accurate to the point of being scary.

This... isn't really about a swim meet? At all? But I don't care anymore? So here's a sad, cheesy story for you :)

It's the kind of day where the air is so thick and humid that the whole world feels drowsy and distant. I fan myself with my baseball cap as a shrill whistle slices like a blade through the muggy air. Marina splashes into the water along with the rest of the kids in her race. I know it shouldn't anymore, but watching her feet disappear under the water still makes me a little nervous. Still, I watch her closely; mom will want a blow-by-blow from both of us, even though she knows the meets all look the same to me.

When it's over, I'm not shocked to learn that Marina didn't have any outstanding times- she's not good, she's not terrible. Sometimes she loves swim, sometimes she can't stand it. I try to avoid pools as much as I can. But with mom evolving into something of a workaholic, I'm the only one who can chauffeur my younger sister.

Swaddled in towels and a stormy attitude, Marina slams the passenger door shut before I can even start the car. Looks like today wasn't her day. I think I can guess why. The awkwardness of our silence thrums along to the humming of the engine. Finally Marina speaks.

"I wanna quit swim."

I laugh. "Mom would never let you."

"I don't care." She puts her feet up on the dash, staring death rays at her toes and crossing her arms so tight she looks like a pretzel. "I suck. There's no point. And she needs to get over it anyways."

I nearly slam on the breaks. "'Get over it'? Marina! Thank about what you're saying!"

Her defiant look softens into guilt. The reality of her words hit harder now. Jenna's birthday is soon and we both know what's coming. And it kills us to think about it, but I know we both are. It was impossible not to love Jenna when you knew her like Marina and I did.

"I think about her before every meet," Marina says quietly. Her eyes don't budge from her feet, but she's blinking quickly and I can tell she's holding back tears. "I look at the water and think, 'This is for Jenna.'" She kicks the seat and sniffs noisily. "I know you think I don't care, Celeste. But I do, just as much as you."

"I've always know that you care," I spit back. "I hate that you think you're above showing it." I see the way Marina looks at Jenna's empty room. The way she stares at her empty chair at the dinner table. Even how she changes the channel when Jenna's favorite show comes on because she can't stand to watch it without her. Marina cares. She has to. We lost a sister and it's not going to be the same. But Marina's fourteen, stubborn, and too cool to grieve.

My knuckles are white against the steering wheel and the car in front of me is blurry from tears. We're both crying now, there's no good in denying it. I should say what's on my mind before the moment's gone and Marina goes to sulk again.

"I know you care, but you can't pretend this isn't real. We both see it, everywhere she would be, we see how she's gone. But sometimes we can't just carry on, Marina, cause sometimes we're not okay."

The car behind me honks at me. I've been sitting at a green light for the past five seconds.

"She'd always get cupcakes from Mario's," Marina whispers. "Strawberry cupcakes for her birthday. And every year she'd get frosting in her hair."

I hate Jenna's birthdays. It just feels like a big reminder that my baby sister won't get to grow up.

I hate that it had to be Jenna. She was always so good. And not just that she followed all the rules- though she did, all the teachers liked her even though she was way behind in reading and she wasn't good with numbers either- she was just so good because she was happy and she was never fake about it. She could find a million and one reasons to smile and they were always real. Jenna might not have gotten good grades, but she was smart in the way that counted- she could say things in a way that stuck with you and made you want to think about them for weeks. She'd compare sunsets to symphonies and chat about the endless faith the stars had in us to shine long after they died. She used to talk about eternity, and now she's part of it. She might never grow up, but Jenna's a tragedy and she'll go on living forever.

Jenna drowned, that's why Marina's swim meets are so important to mom. The logic seems backwards to me, but I guess Marina makes up for what Jenna didn't have. Pools still scare me to death. Marina's braver than me that way. 

"Marina, do you like swim?" I ask.

"I like it. I don't love it. But now I couldn't quit and.... I don't wanna be mean, but Jenna makes it all different."

I nod. "You can't just approach it like any other sport."

"Exactly!" she exclaims. "But I want to. If this was any other sport mom would let me drop it, but..."

After thinking it over for a few seconds, I say, "Tell you what. We'll talk about it with mom together. It's not like you'll never go to a swimming pool again. She shouldn't just go on making you do something you don't want to because it makes her feel a little better."

"You'd do that?"

"Of course I would."

Tomorrow is Jenna's birthday. She would be twelve. Tomorrow we'll all have a good cry and lay flowers on her grave and I'll tell myself about my baby sister and how she's a shred of eternity. Tomorrow we can go on telling ourselves about the ways we can finish what she barely started, but we'll forget that our lives aren't supposed to make up for hers. We're just supposed to be us.

I look at Marina. She has the same hazel eyes as Jenna. I give her a smile, mess with her hair. I do what I can. Jenna, she's more than a bunch of memories, but she's disappeared and left us scarred. And her goneness is always going to hurt. But we had our years with her, and now we've got to see that there's life beyond it. 

I can't promise it will be okay, because it won't all the time. But I can promise some light when we bother to look for it. 

submitted by Luna-Starr, age 27 eons, Existential Ponderment
(March 14, 2021 - 9:27 pm)
submitted by NEW PART OUT!
(March 10, 2021 - 2:19 pm)
submitted by New part out! (top)
(March 11, 2021 - 11:02 am)

Of course I'm important! *hair flip*

All jokes aside, I'm running out of thesaurus words for 'amazing'!

Soooo supercalifragilisticexpialidocious job!

submitted by Sammy Everlast, age Immortal, The Everlasting Mansion
(March 11, 2021 - 12:58 pm)
submitted by TOP
(March 12, 2021 - 9:29 pm)
submitted by top top
(March 14, 2021 - 9:39 am)
submitted by top!
(March 14, 2021 - 12:29 pm)

Day Five — Evening

The air around the dining table was tense.

Part of that may have been that Liberté had insisted that every five days, the campers had to have a formal meal together, five courses plus dessert over a mahogany table. Part of it may have been that no one brought any formal clothing to an outdoor summer-y camp (Liberté didn’t understand their reasoning), and so they had to borrow from the camp wardrobe, which had only two options: the sort of tuxedo you might wear to prom or a wedding, and a sort of medieval princess gown, which, according to Snow, was 100% historically accurate.

Almost everyone chose the tuxedos. The dresses were better fitting — for some reason, the counselors seemed to have gotten everyone’s exact measurements, fitted each gown to the t, and made sure that no one could perfectly fit into any of the suits — but they were also made of heavy brocade velvet that probably cost about a million dollars. No one wanted to get steak sauce on something like that. And, more importantly, they didn’t want to have to run from a murderer in something like that. Not that any of the victims actually had the chance to run away, but you never know what might happen.

Or part of the tenseness  may have been the fact that a quarter of their companions were dead and Liberté insisted on setting places for them at the table. But it was more likely because of the clothing.

Everyone was in the kitchen. The Lilac Cabin, consisting of Nerd, Zach, dreamii, Braoin, and Kitty were on Kitchen Duty, helping Palenia Piper add the finishing touches to her meal. Everyone else was sneakily eating the finishing touches, and when the cook finally finished and loaded everything onto an enormous Dinner Cart, she was followed by an entire camp into the dining room. Or, rather, the door outside the dining room, where the amazing, incredible, beloved Palenia Piper would stand for the next hour or so, occasionally entering to present a new course.

The campers peeked their heads around the doorway all at once in the sort of way that people do a lot in movies but seems creepy and unrealistic.

The table was round.

Aspen made an extremely bad pun about the knights of the round table, the fact that they were eating at a round table, the fact that knights die a lot, and the fact that Nightfall was wearing a dress similar to something that someone needing to be rescued by a knight might wear. Half the group groaned loudly and the other half inched away from Night, who started yelling about the fact that xe had no need to be rescued by anyone ever, xe was perfectly strong, independent, and clever, and any dragon who wanted to eat xem must be sustaining severe mental damage if it thought that would be a good idea. Aspen shot back that no dragon or any other self-respecting sentient being would bear being called “it” and that is probably why the poor lizard would want to eat Nightfall, who then decided that it would be a good idea to throw half a steak and a large ladleful of mashed potatoes at Aspen to prove how strong, independent, and clever xe was. Aspen responded by screaming about the fact that a dead animal had just touched her, and threw a tofu steak at Night, who screamed about the fact that processed soybeans had just touched xem.

Then, Basil decided that the only way he would be able to eat his salad in peace is if the Food Knight and Food Night (which were the names given to the brave warriors by Ari) were escorted to their respective cabins and sent to bed without supper. Snow pointed out that they shared a cabin, to which Basil responded that, no, they didn’t anymore, because Aspen was moving into the Lilac Cabin with her. Nightfall stuck xyr tongue out at Aspen, who was quaking in her boots at the thought of spending the night in the same building as a small child with long nails. Snow was furious because she had to get a new camper. Liberté was furious to be deprived of a camper, but calmed down when Basil pointed out that she probably would not want to share a roof with both Aspen and Night, who were still screeching and throwing food at each other. Then, she got angry again after Sammy pointed out that she didn’t seem to care about being deprived of campers after they had died, so Basil decided that Liberté should spend some time in their private lounge before she started to throw food as well. Liberté’s anger did, at least, calm Snow down, so she was relatively sweet for the rest of the evening.

A few minutes later, Aspen was shivering because she was now sleeping in Summer’s old bed. Apparently, no one had thought that it would be a bad idea to put her in the same bed as the girl whose cold, dead body she had found by the lake that morning, causing a mental breakdown. Or, if they did think of that, it didn’t matter.

Then, as she shivered, Aspen remembered that Summer had probably been shivering before she died. This made Aspen both much warmer and much, much colder, a contradiction that made her brain so tired that she finally fell asleep to dream about snowflakes with the face of a girl.

It wasn’t until much later, after Aspen had fallen asleep, Liberté had calmed down and returned, Palenia Piper had recooked her multi-course meal in, and Basil had cleaned down the walls of the dining room (which was the multi-purpose/funeral room serving one of its multiple purposes), wiped down the table, and hunted down a new table cloth, that dinner was finally served for real.

It was fantastic, despite being eight at night and peppered with anger and illness.

The argument over the appetizers was only light. No one can be supremely furious over Caprese salad crackers, especially when the mozzarella is fresh and homemade and the basil was picked just minutes earlier. In fact, it might have been fine if Ari hadn’t bragged about baking the crackers herself. And that might have ended up all right if her AE hadn’t pointed out that they had been together all day and she had done nothing over the sort, and besides, these are Ritz crackers from a box. Besides the chairs that got knocked over and Freak’s fancy new bloody nose, it went very nicely indeed.

Then was the bread and seafood course. Real crabs, Palenia Piper said, which caused a few people to rush to the bathrooms for a few moments. But they were only slightly green when they returned, and managed to force down a few bites of sourdough, before the salads were served, so everything turned out alright in the end. When you have your bread, you have the world.

Salad was pleasant and refreshing after that, with a mint and arugula salad with a light mustard vinaigrette. Freak’s nose, unfortunately, had begun to bleed so richly and profusely that he had to be excused to the nurse’s office, but, since Palenia Piper worked double time as the camp nurse, he was given the rest of the evening alone in the room. And, since he had long ago figured out where the supply of chocolate meant for recovering from a dementor’s attack was, you couldn’t really call that unpleasant. Time alone with bandages and chocolate? Truly, the salad course wasn’t that awful either. It was a lovely course overall.

And then the lemon sorbet. Truly the most delightful of palate cleansers, the queen of fourth courses. Nothing could be more awesome than lemon sorbet, intense and icy. This case could be made even for Kitty Cat’s personal recipe, which contained about a quart of extra lemon juice. It was certainly intense, the iciness was undeniable, and there were many awestruck looks from those who managed to swallow a bite. That could be mistaken as excruciating pain, but, since it would be much nicer if Adrian and Pine were merely struck with the wonder of extra lemony sorbet, that’s what we’ll call it. And after that, they were allowed to join Freak in the nurse’s office, so that’s an extra good thing! Another successful half hour was passed.

The fifth course was where the unpleasantness began. It began, as so many unpleasant things do, with steak and Liberté Reine.

Now, it is an unpleasant truth that speeches are boring. Unless made by true geniuses like Martin Luther King Jr, they can truly bore a person to sleep. In different circumstances, Ari would have said that they bored her to death. In fact, if Liberté had not, at that very moment been discussing the deaths of 25% of the campers, Ari would probably have shouted out loud, “this speech is boring me to death!” Luckily, her tact was not yet a fossil to be examined by museums, although it may have been close. So, she refrained.

Liberté’s tact had fossilized many years ago.

“My dear friends and companions,” she said, taking another deep swig of hot chocolate. Many people could confirm that she was on a serious sugar high. “I regret to inform you that we… I mean many of us… I mean one quarter of our beloved campers are dead.”

Sammy screamed and tried to hurt Liberté. Pine started crying again. But, other than that, the reaction to the counselor’s fossilized tact was underwhelming, and truly not worth comment. No serious injuries were sustained by any concerned parties.

“And Luna-Starr won our swimming competition, I’m so sorry, Everyone Else.” She attempted to hug Everyone Else. “Please accept a consolation prize.” At this point, Basil was wrestling between the need to get Liberté off her pedestal and the wish to see her make a fool of herself. Since humans are weak, he succumbed to the latter, and she banged her spoon against Kitty Cat’s water glass, apparently in the attempt to get the attention of the people around her. She broke the glass.

“My favorite consolation prize was from when I was five years old. It was my sister’s birthday, and I started crying because she was getting presents and I wasn’t…” She drifted off into reverie. “Then my sister cried. I saved her tears and encased them in a locket. I still have it, actually. It was a lovely locket. My grandma welded it herself for my sister. I stole it when I was three. Snow, darling, would you like to see it? It may well become a family heirloom.” Snow edged away from her aunt. “You know, Snow, you’re the only person in your generation. Your mother, my sister, she always said she would have twins when she grew up. Well, all I can say is HA HA to her. I’m going to have twins, my doctor said… The football players always loved me. They thought I was sweet.”

At this point, no one could contain their laughter. The idea of a football player or anyone else thinking that Liberté was sweet seemed truly unthinkable. At this point, the chaos began. Liberté fell off her chair, Basil caught her by the wrist and dragged her out of the room. Palenia Piper wheeled in the five-tier chocolate cake. Sterling was caught with a fit of mischief and threw a handful of frosting at Sammy Everlast, who yelled something unintelligible and threw one at Pine, who was still crying a little, but managed to grab an entire layer off the cake and throw it at Zach, who caught it like a footfall, threw it at Adrian, and tumbled backwards, landing face first on the floor and getting a shard of glass from Kitty’s cut stuck in his hand. Luna-Starr then decided to eat cake, and everyone who wasn’t bleeding, crying, or yelling joined her.

It was, after all, a lovely dinner.

 

***

 

Congratulations, Luna! You were the only person to submit a story so it's an automatic win, but you pretty much made me cry, so yay for you! You get a juniper branch!

 

 

***
Dead: 5 (Hot Coco, Ydris "Masquerade" Dìomhaireachd, Felix, Inari, and Summer May they rest in peace in the glory of Camp Juniper)
Alive: 15
Suspects: dreamii, Kitty Cat, Sterling, and Icarus
Enemies of Snow: Zachary, dreamii, and AutumnArtist
Juniper Leader: Sammy (with two juniper branches)  
submitted by Liberté, Camp Juniper
(March 16, 2021 - 2:20 pm)

Y'know, I'm awfully surprised I haven't become an enemy of Snow, with my obnoxious personality...

But wearing a comfortable dress and screaming at how im already INDEPENDANT AND CAN RESCUE MYSELF is definitely me. 

I put comfort before looks. i would rather wear a t-shirt and a half-sleeved gray sweater along with pants with cuffs at the bottom to school than the school t-shirt *its itchy okay* and jeans...fun fact, i actually do have that in my wardrobe. also, be surprised..I can run VERY fast with a dress on...

yeah okay I can't suspect myself- but it is kinda sus how i was the first to find inari...or maybe that's just an empathy link we- okay fine, no i dont have that...

but it is kinda sus...

 

submitted by SNS
(March 17, 2021 - 12:01 am)

I really can't articulate how much I love this part. It's suspenseful and funny and full of personality and oh so fun to read. There are several quotes here that I would like you to put in a book so I could give you money for them. And your portrayal of me is fantastically on-point, as always. :D 

submitted by Luna-Starr, age 27 eons, Existential Ponderment
(March 20, 2021 - 11:11 pm)

Oh my goodness, thank you so much! I kind of based this part on a toned down version of your ski lodge style, which I COMPLETELY idolize, as you know, so I'm honored that you approve! All three parts of this day were super fun to write, I had/have really bad writer's block at the moment, so I was experimenting with various styles and events, and I really like how the last two turned out.

submitted by Morning, yonder
(March 29, 2021 - 10:24 am)
submitted by NEW PART OUT!
(March 16, 2021 - 2:20 pm)
submitted by NEW PART OUT! (top)
(March 16, 2021 - 8:28 pm)