Personal Poetry
Chatterbox: Pudding's Place
Personal Poetry
Personal Poetry
a.k.a.
Poetry by moi,
Yours Truly
Critique and/or feedback would be greatly appreciated.
I.
Stop sitting down,
don’t take a rest,
Do anything and everything you can to protest.
Protest the injustice,
The glances,
And no one should be
Telling oppressed masses
how to not lobby for equal
rights and justice.
Don’t focus on your
Own right to gaining wealth,
You have it
Don’t lean on that privilege, use it.
For voices unheard,
for stories unshared and
uncared for
’till diverse is the norm
and people don’t care
what you look like
your birthplace,
your love.
II.
Equal rights is only half the equation,
Next stop the “Other” that infects the populations.
Nothing is more powerful
than knowledge and compassion.
Pick up a book on the Constitution,
the Revolution,
an environmental pollution solution.
and apply it to our situation,
the second side of the equation.
III.
Listen to my words
and hear the meaning
behind them.
consider all views before
making core generalizations
With that, I close.
-OfElvesandSwords
(November 22, 2017 - 4:35 pm)
I love it! I did notice that the beginning seemed to be rhyming but then nothing else was? Anyway, it's great!
(November 23, 2017 - 12:11 pm)
(November 27, 2017 - 5:04 pm)