The Poetry Challenge!
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The Poetry Challenge!
The Poetry Challenge!
Welcome, wonderful poets of the CB! With Bluebirds Regular Poetry thread, and Booksy's Poetry Contest, I was just thinking how much I like to click on those threads and just read through everyone's poetry that I haven't seen yet. But sometimes there is no new poetry to read, which is depressing. Thus The Poetry Challenge was born.
I'm sure you're all dying to know what this Poetry Challenge is. Hang in there a second, I'm getting to that. The basic idea of this is that we exercise our poem writing muscles, practice, improve, and at the end we have a beautiful Poetry Gallery to scroll through. It's a bit of a game, a bit of a prompt, and a bit of a competition all in one.
The rules are simple. We will write as much poetry as we can in the course of one week, and post it here. One poem a day for a week, although you can do more if you feel inspired. I will start by posting a theme, a prompt, or a technique, or any combination of those, and the rest of you will have to write a poem that corresponds with those things each day of the week. Then we can all vote for the most inspiring poem, and that person will become the next 'announcer'. The fun part is, the announcer can play too! Feel free to illustrate your poems and post those, too!
GUIDLINES:
No voting for yourself.
Please don't choose a category just because it's one you'd like (although don't choose a category you don't like either).
You can drop out at any time.
Be kind and respectful (obviously).
The categories must be pretty wide ranged since so many poems will be written from them.
Have fun!
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To start off the first round, the theme is.............
SUMMER!
Whether you write about the beach, the pool, or the hot sun, summer is here and in full fling!
The optional prompt is: Warlike Arts (This is completely random. Jeopardy is on the Tv and I saw those two words and typed them down on the spot).
Nugget says gven. Given? I've given the gift of this wonderful Poetry Challenge to the world.
(July 10, 2017 - 6:35 pm)
I'm joining! Cool idea, Leeli!
(July 13, 2017 - 10:41 am)
Joining!
Does sailing count as a warlike art?
Ah. I thought not.
(July 13, 2017 - 4:21 pm)
@Bluebird, Thanks!
@EG, I have no idea. XD I'd say it could.
(July 13, 2017 - 4:52 pm)
Hello friends and poets, today is Friday, thus the day we start. I wrote this to start us off:
Do you remember
The little red cottage
We used to rent
In the summer
By the lake?
Do you remember
the way we would
always run inside,
Excited,
Pulling our luggage behind us.
We would
Always eat our cereal
At the little breakfast table
by the window
And eat our dinner
(Pizza)
At the tall bar.
We shared a bedroom
I would sleep on the twin
And you would sleep
On the pullout.
But no matter how hard we tried,
They would always
Roll away from each other
In the night.
Do you remember
How we would take our
morning walks
On the same path
Every day.
We would climb up
On the playground
In the sand
By the beach
So early
That no one else was there.
I had my fortress,
And you had yours.
You
Never wanted
To climb up into
My tower.
You thought
You would fall.
But I,
I thought I was
On top of the world.
And then we would run
Down to the water
Get our toes wet.
We would say,
“We'll only get in
Up to our ankles.”
But
No matter how hard we tried
We always ended up
Rolling up our pants
to the knee.
Do you remember
How we would
Save up our money
All year
Just to spend it
At all our favorite shops
Downtown.
We knew the shopkeepers
And they knew us
Because we
Were their
Best customers.
Do you remember
That day
Last summer
When the landlady
Walked into the
Rental house.
She greeted us,
And smiled.
And we talked awhile.
But then she told us
That she was thinking
Of selling the place.
And she crushed
My dreams
With her words.
Now, tomorrow,
We are going to drive
Up to the lake.
We found a new house
To rent.
But
It won't be the same.
I will always
Remember
The little red cottage
We used to rent
Every summer
By the lake.
(July 14, 2017 - 9:12 am)
@Leeli, yours is beautiful! I feel such a sense of melancholy from it.
Summer is the color of your voice, the voci bianche
Summer is the heat of the sun turning the sunflowers in their clockwork dances like your magnificence, your radiance, your gross incandescense, turns me in circles until I'm dizzy, spellbound by your wonder
Summer is the taste of watermelon melting under the tongue as your jokes, your laughter, your appetites fill me like a balloon and send me spiraling into the sky
Summer is the sight of young men in shorts playing tennis and being a metaphor for our own games and machinations, both evil and benign
Summer is the smell of hay and wildflowers springing up from the ground as if they have no fear of being mown down, no fear until the end approaches, just like you, courageous until the end.
Summer is a feeling of loss and although they say humans have five senses I feel this sense as sharp as any other. An omnipresent, acute sense following me home
(July 14, 2017 - 10:36 am)
Thank you! I like yours too. Very intriguing.
(July 14, 2017 - 1:37 pm)
Ruby, I like yours a lot!! I have to say, I don't know who it's about, but it's very good.
(July 18, 2017 - 10:49 am)
I'll join even though I'm leaving for camp in two days and won't be able to post for two weeks then. I will hopefully still write at camp though.
So, here's my poem:
It is hot
Very, very hot
I am almost reluctant to go to the pool
Why
Why can't I stay
In the cool air conditioning
Of our house
But I go
To the pool
And when I jump in
I forget home
I only feel
The cool touch of the water
Enveloping me
In its soft, blissful touch
I swim
I would stay in the pool all day if I could
But I can't
(July 14, 2017 - 11:33 am)
Wow, Leeli! Your poem was really sad, and really good! I can almost see the cottage in my mind. Ruby, your poem was amazing!! Kitten, I wish I could stay in the pool all day, too. I love all of your poems!
Here's something I wrote, it's supposed to be about my past summers, sort of? I'm not so great at staying on topic :( It's also pretty long, sorry. (I'm sorry if all the poems I write for this stink!)
t-shirts
summer, 2004
there are 100 pictures of me in my
dad's football t-shirts, wide-eyed and
innocent, not knowing that he
wanted a boy
two summers later with the same wide eyes seeing
things that would soon be forgotten
(isn't it strange what you remember?)
(always be careful what
you say around
kids)
summer, 2007
i'm wearing a smock over my
t-shirt, painting my
room, painting the windows,
painting the people in my
coloring books,
painting
summer, 2008
my sister and i sit in the grass with
the same yellow t-shirt,
getting called by each other's names
we are so different but
our smiles are the same
summer, 2010
this photobook is filled with pictures of
me in old camp t-shirts and my
softball team with dirt on
our clothes and faces,
we didn't care about winning then
(it was so nice to not care)
summer, 2014
i returned to wearing loose football
t-shirts, this time because i wanted to,
i began to stop
taking pictures and
stop
smiling
summer, 2016
i am wearing a tie-dye t-shirt that i
made with my friend and no
longer are my shirts dark colors,
you can finally see the
light in my eyes
i'm still smiling a half-smile but
that's alright
summer, 2017
i sit under a dusky sky with
glowsticks around my head and neck,
eyes wide and
smiling
i wear t-shirts that look like a pollock
painting and i wear colors all the
time
and i still cry sometimes but that's alright
that's
alright
(July 14, 2017 - 5:21 pm)
Seasonal~
in the spring we are born,
in the summer we grow
in the fall we heal
in the winter we break
only to begin again
(July 14, 2017 - 6:42 pm)
I love this, September!
@Bluebird, Aaaaahhhhhh that's so beautiful I love it!
(July 15, 2017 - 7:54 am)
@Bluebird, wow! I love the concept!
@Leeli, thank you so much! I love your poem too!
once upon a sunny day~
once upon a time, we were
laughers we were dreamers
we were runners we were
believers we were living and
we loved it
once upon a time, we drank up
sunshine like gatorade, we ran
the beaches in the early mornings,
because we all could do with more
sunrises and warm air,
once upon a time we swam under
the cordoned off areas, feeling
rebellious and hearts pounding
we went back because we don't
really want to know what's out there
once upon a time we remembered
and we wished for sunny days
once more, once more
(July 15, 2017 - 12:45 pm)
WOW, this is incredible! I absolutely love the whole first part, I think the way you didn't use much punctuation there fit this poem really nicely :)
(July 15, 2017 - 9:14 pm)
I love everyone's poems! This is my second one, about warlike arts.
I'm learning to fence
Why?
I don't want to learn to fence
Neither does my brother, who's taking lessons too
My mom doesn't want me to
My dad doesn't want me to
No one I know wants me to
But I will
Because the government wants me to
They need more soldiers
Or so they say
I think they just want us tired
So that they can sneak in
And take our parents
You see, my dad disappeared two days ago
Leaving behind nothing
But a hastily scribbled note
'Don't trust'
(July 15, 2017 - 5:21 pm)
Ooh, mysterious!
I'm about to hit y'all with an acrostic.
Summer
Sunshine on my face,
Under a huge blue sky.
More time to dream
More time to fly.
Ever bright the
Rays of sun cast shadows.
(July 15, 2017 - 10:43 pm)