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I had a prompt to write a song for a famous music artist, but I'm not sure what kind of band/singer would sing it.  It's supposed to be called "It's Way Too Loud" and I really don't have any ideas on a music artist who would sing it.  So I'm asking all of you!  Here's the song:

Do
You hear the noise?
Thumping loud and clear
It bursts from the speakers

It's way too loud
The music beats our clap
Drowning out our heartbeats
Taking all the sound,
Sound,
Sound

What
Is the music?
Taking all the noise
Away from our ears

Who
Would do this?
Turning up the drums
It's breaking the windows

It's way too loud
The music beats our clap
Drowning out our heartbeats
Taking all the sound,
Sound,
Sound

So when
The sound
Is equal to
The thunder's roar

Then stop. 

 

Very nice, Lucy. Good job. I dislike music that's too loud. It can damage your hearing.

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submitted by Lucy B., age 13, California
(July 2, 2017 - 9:23 pm)

I'm not vey well versed in music artists... What kind of voice do you hear it in?

submitted by Viola?, age Secret, Secret
(July 3, 2017 - 7:59 pm)

Really, I hear it in my own voice.  I'm a female alto.  So a girl with sort of a low voice, I guess?

submitted by Lucy B., age 13, California
(July 4, 2017 - 12:54 am)

If you hear it in your own voice, sing it yourself!

submitted by Viola?, age Secret, Secret
(July 4, 2017 - 10:25 am)

My thoughts exactly! Maybe Regina Spektor? Or Ingrid Michaelson? Or Lenka? Possibly Yael Naim? And for some reason I keep picturing Anna from Frozen singing it.

submitted by Flowerchild
(July 4, 2017 - 8:38 am)

This is so good, Lucy! It sounds like something Emeli Sande might sing.

submitted by Bibliophile
(July 5, 2017 - 2:00 pm)