CensorshipOf
Chatterbox: Pudding's Place
CensorshipOf
Censorship
Of celebration
Hidden differences
and description
Like sleeper
agents
Lying in suspension
For time to pass
Their is no
Place for the squares and cirles in a world of triangles
And what is the colour
of the sky
When betrayal and
back stabbing runs wild
Allowed yet severly
Disapproved
That is the colour of the sky
The slow beat of funeral calls
and the lonely
playing of a
Flute and trumpet
What happens to
a dream
differed
Does it slowly moan
or does it EXPLODE
IS AN EXPLOSION
I BEG OF YOU'
AND ANSWER!!!!
WHY MUST MY HOARSE SCREAMS
RING INTO THE EMPTY DARNKESS
LIKE A WATER BALOON POPPED
I BEG OF YOU- WHY ARE MAY CALLS UNANSWERED
WHY MUST MY
DREAMS EXPLODE?????
Distortion of celebration
Loss of celebration
Goodbye
(June 17, 2017 - 2:18 pm)
There's something
out of reach
it's on a cabinet on the top shelf but it's not that i'm not tall enough
that's not why I can't reach it
I want to yell
I want to be loud and clear
I want to scale the shelf, jump on top of it
let it sag under my weight
I want to say exactly what I mean
I want to be the bluntest
most obvious
most tactless and loudest person in this universe
but instead I relax
grab something from the shelf below
one I can reach easily
say simply
"you will be accepted"
I don't go any higher.
I don't want to break the shelf.
~"~"~"~"~"~"~"~"~"~"~"~"~"~"~"~"~"~"~"~"
So I'm afraid to be too obvious, but if you mean what I think you mean, I think it's perfectly fine. Maybe it explodes. Maybe the dream that differs flies away and explodes somewhere safe. Somewhere where everyone loves explosions and everything is either fire proof or on fire already.
P.S. That was a great poem.
(June 19, 2017 - 2:28 pm)
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(June 20, 2017 - 4:19 pm)
The ending based off of Langston Hughes' poem, right? Dream Deferred? We studied it in both English and History last year.
I think that the explosion that was in Langston Hughes' poem wasn't a bad thing though. I think it meant that when a dream keeps being pushed back, "deferred," it eventually won't be pushed back any more and then "explodes." I'm guessing that what you mean by your dreams exploding is that they no longer are possible, or that they don't hold anything for you anymore.
(June 25, 2017 - 1:52 pm)