Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
I Wish
I wish someone would hold me,
love me,
give me a shoulder to cry on,
I wish someone would love me.
No one seems to notice me,
even when I notice them,
I wish I could be loved by someone.
I always seem to like someone who never likes me back,
I need a shoulder to cry on,
Someone to hold me and love me.
I wish someone would,
hold me,
hug me,
love me.
Sometimes no one knows that I exsist,
But maybe you're out there and you see me,
Just like I see you,
Or maybe you dont see me,
Yo see someone else.
I wish I had someone to hug, love, hold, and give them a shoulder to cry on.
I wish i had someone who would alway be there for me.
(September 4, 2023 - 12:21 pm)
Am I an imposter
In my own skin
Someone who knows what she knows
Yet doubts who's within?
Am I a dreamer
Who never sleeps, never wakes
Someone who's steady
But still wants to shake?
Am I a pretender
Who's only good at one thing
Who puts on a costume
Every morning...
Every mourning...
Every torn
Thing.
Who puts on a costume
At every torn thing
And calls it her own
Skin.
Am I an imposter
Who doubts who's within?
What's within?
I smile when I should cry
I laugh when I should sigh
I feel brave when I lie, guilty when I lie, I'll lie until I get caught,
I'm already caught
In this net
Of my falsehoods.
My own net saves me
When I fall
Yet will it be the end
Of it all?
I feel nothing.
My heart of stone beats
To the rhythm of silence,
Tears don't fall
From my eyes
Until they do.
Do you think I can control it
When I cry?
I am an imposter
But aren't we all.
(September 4, 2023 - 6:54 pm)
Boxes packed, moving truck loaded
Car is cramped, siblings goaded
Long drive in store
Leaving home forever more.
Goodbye to the familiar land
Adios to the friendly neighbors at hand
Farewell to all friends dear
I’ll text you year after year.
Later, to the birds and trees
I will miss dearly all of these.
But hello to new friendships, and home
Hey to new magic forest gnome
Hola to waterfalls of beauty,
Nature's treasure booty
Awaits in the new state
I will miss all of late
But now I have a new place
And I will put on a brave face
And embrace
Everything with good grace.
(September 7, 2023 - 2:10 pm)
CLOCK
Time is going
Very slow
For all my knowing
Time can’t go
Faster than a snail’s pace
When waiting to go
Find friends to race
To have fun
To talk to
As the sun
Sails in the blue
Time is going
Very fast
For all my knowing
Time won’t last
It speeds up when
Fun is had
Play just started then
Time to go, it’s so sad
Sun is down
Behind the town
Time is going
Out of whack
For all my knowing
Behind my back
It snickers and giggles
Laughs and cries
Speeds up when I get my wiggles
Slows when in boredom I lie
Time is naughty
It is clever
Very haughty
And it never
OBEYS
(September 7, 2023 - 6:48 pm)
(September 7, 2023 - 8:15 pm)
Oooooo, for some reason I really like this one! It's so well-written :)
(September 15, 2023 - 3:20 pm)
(September 7, 2023 - 8:17 pm)
The world is ending
I can hear it
The thump
Of the Earth falling
Off orbit
The total finality
Of never being able to come back
Of things never being able to be what they were
Before.
They're talking about me
They're watching me
Everywhere I go.
There is no freedom.
The world is ending
Slow motion falling
To pieces
And I am powerless to stop it.
It slips from my grip,
When had I loosened, I can't remember
I thought I had been holding tight but
Now I'm not so sure.
I thought I had been in control
But now I see I was wrong
Too late.
The world is ending
And I can only watch it fall
To
The
Floor
And
Shatter.
Also, @Sterling, agreed!!
(September 10, 2023 - 3:09 am)
Nothing Forever
All my life I've been
carefully calibrating a barrier blocking
thoughts and feelings from
leaking,
slipping out.
Nothing can get through it.
When I try to break through,
just a tiny bit,
It
Holds.
Unwavering.
I've given one side to the public eye;
I'm the excitable puppy,
always happy,
enthusiastic,
smiling
Completely perfect.
But - I'm not.
(Not all time time, anyway)
But I have to be.
If I'm not,
will anyone like me?
will they think I'm a liar?
Maybe that's who I am.
(Or, at least, partially)
How will anyone really know?
Who am I, anyway?
Who do I want to be?
Will society accept me if I am myself?
The Barricade bars all pondering from
pouring out.
But —
what if it does fall?
Like a dam, water destroying everything
that once stood tall?
Then what?
Am I destined to be a social outcast
Forever?
The Blockade has to be demolished,
yet, it must stay strong.
Can I ever push past this perpetual paradox?
(September 10, 2023 - 12:41 pm)
Nooo! The formatting didn't go through despite working on it FOREVER... I wonder if I do it on a write it out or somethin', then take a picture out that, it'll work... @Admins, is that okay? If I do that way so the formatting goes through? And if it is, would you mind maybe deleting the not-formatted poem in my previous comment? Thank you!
Yes, I can delete your previous submission of the poem when you specifically tell me to do that. Formatting may be disrupted when you copy and paste into the Chatterbox window from some other applications. It's more likely to work if you type the poem directly into the CB window. But I know that's more work for you if you've already written the poem elsewhere.
Admin
(September 10, 2023 - 5:00 pm)
I think I actually like it better now that I put it onto the digital art program bc I can that the background and the colors... also now it's not just poetry but also an art piece (like that other thing I did, except that was more of a mental breakdown on paper, so...)
(Inkling says "navin" that sounds like a name...)
(September 10, 2023 - 7:38 pm)
Wow, this is so achingly gorgeous! If I were to read this without context, I'd think it was professional! (In fact I did just that when I first read it, and then was like, wait, this is on the chatterbox!?!?!)
It really is such a beautiful journey through the loneliness forged by deception and feeling pressured to put on an act to remain socially acceptable.
(September 11, 2023 - 6:23 pm)
THATS SO COOL OMG--
I'm a sucker for visual poetry (despite having never really experimented with it myself?) and this is just that -- i love the idea of combining art forms (in this case poetry and visual art) to create something beautiful and this is so COOL. the formatting and message and everything is just so well donee!!
it's really cool how blue-highlighted, pink-highlighted, and non-highlighted texts all have slightly different messages, but overall it goes really well and combines to make an really beautiful (and very relatable, i might add) piece!
my favorite lines are probably "All my life I've been/carefully calibrating a barrier blocking/thoughts and feelings from/leaking,/slipping out." and "But--/what if it does fall?/Like a dam, water destroying everything/that once stood tall." but I really love all of it!
i always enjoy reading your writing, and it's awesome to see you experimenting with different styles of poetry!! can't wait to see what you come up with next~~
(September 11, 2023 - 7:31 pm)
The world is such an ephemeral place.
Delicate, yet fierce and fearsome;
Blink and you miss it
And all you can do
Is regret all the
Never-was-
dones
When I was little I used to think that
There must be so many ghosts
Out there in the world, lost
Wandering – sad and
Scared and lonely.
Long ago,
I used to
Think I wanted to help
Those poor
Lost souls; reunite the torn
Pages and drive back
The tear-stains,
Back into the shimmering
Eyes that squeezed
Them out, and roll the rain
Up, retracing its path, back into the clouds
Then with one swift blow
Maybe all the dust in
The sky would
Go away.
I had not yet seen
How deep those tear-traced gorges went.
I had not yet felt
The relief and exhaustion of a summer-shower.
I had not yet thought
Myself to be a poor lost soul myself.
Indeed, when objects phase through my hands
And I observe people who never respond to me,
Perhaps it is not the world that rotates
As one big phantom.
No, perhaps the ghost is I, instead.
(September 11, 2023 - 6:53 pm)
Here's a poem I made for 9/11:
Now
Morning
Cold and cloudy
Shading the city
Against the harsh sun
History
Long forgotten
Yet remembered
Vague and blurry
Deeds
Good things especially
For today even if it should
Be done every day
News
That repeats itself
Again and again
Unfamiliar and detached
Delay
Beneficial for me
Yet none for those
Thousands of people
Roses
Scattered red petals
Against the grassy ground
Some on smooth carved stone
Wish
That time could change
That it could be more than
A lingering embrace
More
Than just a whisper
Or a wind in the air
That it could be someone here
Now
(September 11, 2023 - 7:11 pm)