Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
I think that poetry is the way
buckbrush blossoms smell like freshly buttered popcorn
when they bloom in the spring.
and,
I think poetry is how
tiny flowers bloom in the cracks of my sidewalk,
and how the ants create paths that weave around them.
poetry is how
sinking your teeth into a fresh orange
feels exactly like the sun on a warm summer day,
or perhaps,
how a sip of hot chai is exactly like
autumn leaves skidding across a sidewalk.
I think poetry is the way
I would tell you every single secret hidden in the depths of my heart
except for the one titled "how I feel about you"
no,
poetry is the way they link their pinkies beneath the table,
as if they're constantly promising,
no,
pledging their forever and ever love.
poetry is tear-smeared mascara,
and the gentle hands that wipe it away.
poetry is flower crowns braided into hair,
and handmade mittens,
and the smell of freshly baked bread.
poetry is the way I never noticed the stars
until I went to the city
and they disappeared.
and,
poetry is the fog curling around the tip-top of a mountain,
and the swirling patterns cream makes in tea
right after you pour it in.
poetry is the symphony of summer insects that sing every night,
and the smell of jasmine flowers
creeping through my tattered window screen.
poetry is summer rainstorms,
and hot pink rainboots.
or maybe,
everything is poetry,
if the right person is paying attention to it at the right time.
(June 29, 2023 - 11:29 pm)
first off, pepperminttt!! hi!! how've you been?
oh gosh, i always love your poetry, and these are no exception. they're absolutely gorgeous, and the imagery is so poignant. i think the first one is my favorite -- i just love the nature imagery, and i find the last lines really relatable -- but they're all spectacular. you're such a good writer <333
(June 30, 2023 - 6:03 pm)
A buncha novel nonsense poems since I love them!: Also, @admins, is it easier for you if I post a few shorter posts or one longer post
went to the bar that elephant did
went to the bar for a drink
went to the bar with a suit and a hat
who would notice you think
went to the bar dressed with a rose
went to the bar to have fun
went to the bar that elephant did
what a funny one
and
you stare at me
glossy-eyed
never blinking.
you stare at me
glassy-eyed
never thinking
you stare at me
dead-eyed
till I turn you away
and
the lion went out for a glass of milk
and in search of some cherry pie
went to the grasslands
went to the sky
the lion went out for a glass of juice
and in search of some steaming chai
went out to the tundras
went to fly
the lion went out for a glass of cocoa
and in search of some bread on rye
went to the village
and was finally satisfied
but when the people came back to find a lion in their house
in their fridge
on their couch
they screamed and drove the lion away
why? asked the lion, why must I?
have to settle with bloody prey
like the other lions eat.
why can't I
be more dignified?
but alas it wasn't to be.
and (wow, idk where all this poetry is suddenly coming from)
the squirrel ran down the street
in search for something to eat
something to fill their thirst
the squirrel ran past the hot dog
vendor and the burger man
well, that's a first
the squirrel ran and ran
till they saw a somber man
and feasted on his secrets
and
Mama ant told Little ant to shower
but I don't want to Little ant whined
well, too bad, said Mama ant, because you're gonna have to
and then she took Little ant by the antenna
and dumped him in the tub.
It's for your own good
she said.
And I guess I shall announce this again, I used to be Celine but now I'm going by CelineBurning Bright!
(June 30, 2023 - 7:33 pm)
@peppermint, these poems are all amazing!! They're so poetic, even without rhymes and regular rhythms, and they're such vivid, heartfelt snapshots of life; the way you include all the tiny details from daily life, like the line "tiny flowers bloom in the cracks of my sidewalk," is so pretty and just makes the whole poem so cozy and beautiful <3 And then the way the poems conclude; it really makes you think and it's unexpected, yet it feels just right. Your poetry is seriously some of the best I've ever read <3
(June 30, 2023 - 8:34 pm)
Music
Music playing in my head
Pounding in my ears
My lips hum the tune
And my feet start to tap
The music playing, playing, playing
The music pounding, pounding, pounding
Like everything will be alright
When the tides grow strong
And the mountains become steep
The music keeps playing, playing, playing
When the storms grow vast
And the buildings collapse
The music keeps pounding, pounding, pounding
Like everything will be alright
(June 30, 2023 - 7:47 pm)
wrote this a while ago in response to the Canadian wildfire smoke but i guess i never posted it~
wildfire smoke
open your eyes,
look at the world around you, which
is a nonsensical dream even though
you are awake.
(there will be no waking up
from this nightmare that is
real life.)
stare at the apocalyptic horizon,
at the smoke obscuring the iconic
new york city skyline.
(watch civilization crumble
before your eyes.)
now the world — and our future —
is veiled in a vividly orange haze,
and is
burning burning burning
and you are still asleep.
will
you
wake
up
before it all turns to ashes
and smoke?
(June 30, 2023 - 8:00 pm)
Woah. @Pangolin, that's beautiful! I love how you use parenthesis and I especially love the line "(watch civilization crumble/before your eyes)"! Is it ok if I write a poem inspired by this? Because the lines: the orange haze on the horizon/the orange blaze below/the uncertain future and/ civilization in shambles all/because/of/you or something like that are just begging me to be written! But it's fine if you don't want me to also
(July 1, 2023 - 2:11 am)
Thank you! Yeah, of course you can write a poem inspired by this! The lines you shared sound really cool. Once you write the poem, I hope you post it here because I'd love to read it! <333
(July 1, 2023 - 7:12 pm)
Oh, I didn't see your reply before now, yay, thank you! I might write multiple because there are lots of different things running around in my head rn! Umm... how bout:
Civilization burning to the ground
the blaze so bright it could be another star
in the universe
ever expanding.
Out of the ashes
Hope is reborn.
and
It all starts with one
One person
One company
One cigarette
Still smoking.
It only takes one
To raze it to the ground.
and
The butterfly
Spreads its wings
Blowing away the smoke.
Blowing,
Blowing,
As it is surrounded
Until it is surrounded,
And falls to the ground,
Limp
Its wings fluttering in the breeze.
You think it is dead
But is it?
and, just because:
Mr. Alligator
Crawled out of the swamp
And watched an ember drift.
Past the blades of grass,
Past the trunks of oak
Past the mossy greens
To a pile of twigs.
Mr. Alligator shook his head, shaking out the water
Drenching the ember before it could land,
And set out to work
Not knowing what he had just done.
and (sorry, last one)
The city is glowing
The wind is blowing
The fire is spreading,
Spreading.
The people are shouting
Nobody's doubting
The fire is spreading,
Spreading.
It turns the world on its head
And nothing looks the same
Because the fire is spreading around the whole globe.
It's spreading,
it's spreading
Across the whole globe
It's spreading,
it's spreading
Through the whole world
And nothing will ever look the same again.
The fire is spreading.
I'm not certain whether that last one is about a fire and tragedy and disaster or the news and secrets being revealed and stuff...
(July 1, 2023 - 9:33 pm)
Wow, these are all so good! I can see how they were inspired by my poem, but they all have their own meaning and tone, and I think that's really cool. The last one's my favorite (though they're all good) because the rhymes are really well done and I find the repetition of "spreading" to be very effective -- both in the rhythm of the poem, and emphasizing the message.
(July 2, 2023 - 6:28 am)
This is such a good poem!! It just encapsulates everything I feel about the wildfires and how people aren't reacting the way they should, plus it's so heartfelt and poetic... The imagery and the way you use parentheses and line spacing are really effective, too. I love the lines "now the world — and our future — /is veiled in a vividly orange haze,/and is/burning burning burning/and you are still asleep." But the whole poem is really well written <3
(July 1, 2023 - 8:00 pm)
Aah thank you so much! <3
(July 2, 2023 - 6:22 am)
Ode to the spider
Oh, you eight legged,
Hairy,
Sometimes scary arachnids.
Even just a common gray,
Everyone stops
To get out of your way.
Oh, and your web, always flowing.
In the morning, dew-speckled, glowing.
I love your webs construction,
Saving us from destruction.
I wish people would stop and stare,
Entranced by your be-au-ti-ful glare,
But no, they just walk past (very fast).
(July 1, 2023 - 1:16 pm)
@Cloud Bunny, beautiful!! And I love that quick rhyme at the end, so true! I wish people would stop to look at spiders more, they're so amazing and there's so much we can learn from them! And because Ig I'm going around echoing people's poems (well, only just Pangolin's so far, if I'm allowed?), could I write a poem inspired by yours too pls? Something like: The glistening web/dotted with dew/your work of art//I wish that more than a few/would see//would appreciate//but you don't care, do you?/as long as it does its job,/you feast. Or something like that, if I get your permission, I'll try to write a much better poem than that!
(July 1, 2023 - 9:14 pm)
Nvm, Pangolin, thank you! I see your response now, I posted the poems below it!
(July 1, 2023 - 9:35 pm)