Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
Ooh, this is really good! I might submit a late poem, too, actually...
(January 14, 2021 - 3:34 pm)
(January 15, 2021 - 10:18 am)
(January 15, 2021 - 10:55 am)
Oh my gosh, I feel so bad! So so so sorry I'm late with the judging. And I gotta say: This was hard! I kinda wanted to put all your poems in first place, becuase they ALL deserve it. Not lying. And with nothing else to say... THE RESULTS!
Honorable Mentions: Wreeboo! I love it! It's such a beautiful way to describe birdsong, and how it's music that we all ignore. The message of the last two stanzas is especially powerful, and I really like the lines, "Birdsong is such/ an old kind/ of music". The way the stanzas and lines are sort of dropping off the page is reminiscent of birdsong as well. Great job!
Nightfall DreamFire (Great name, by the way)! I love the way the words are placed, almost one by one, onto the paper. It's beautifully short and sweet, and emanates such a feeling of bittersweet freedom, like the listener (to the music) knows that their perfect is escape isn't forever. It's beautiful. (Also, I'm really sorry to hear that you've been going through depression. Especially right now, when you can't interact much with friends and are doing everything online... I encourage you to keep writing poems. Take all your feelings and put them into your poems. It can really help!)
Sunbeam! Wow. I love the eloqunece and the sweetness and love in every line. The first one is a great intro, both mysterious and crystal-clear. The second gives me such a clear image, sweet and tender. The third and fourth lines work so well together, showing where you are, and what you're like. It's amazing. THe fifth line brings it all home in such a powerful way. It shows that even though you don't know why this moment is so beautiful, you still "understand this just fine." Amazing!
Luna-Starr! I love this one. It's so short and sweet, beautifully rich and poignant. I especially love the line, "these veins sing with untold stories". Talking about carry lost melodies and symphonies in your hands... I honestly had a hard time not putting you in third place.
Third Place: dreamiing! Whoa. That poem was amazing. It's such a beautifully told story, so sad and joyfull all at once. I love the whole thing, but I especially love the last stanza. It's just... wow. It so flawlessly tells the whole story. Heart shattered, but the cracks filled with song. I have no words.
Second Place (Tie): Kitten and Jaybells!
Kitten: I love this so much. It's unlike any love poem I've seen before. So melodic (haha puns) and flowing. It's a beautiful thing to describe a person and love through both music and a poem. It's so amazing. I really like the repition of, "The music of your ___ lingers in my ____" and "even if you're no longer here." It really ties the whole poem together. Beautiful.
Jaybells: Your poem was stunning. It so eloquently describes how music flows and whirls, all through the eyes of memory and regret. Just... Wow. The lines "That moonlit/ cursed song" and "Chaos subsiding/ or so we thought. but we were wrong. Oh, so wrong." This is so beautiful. I'm speechless.
First Place: Luminesence! Hollllllllllly molllllllllllly. This POEM!! It's so mirrorlike, the reflections so similar but whole-heartedly different. THe two girls are so alike, wondering about the future of the past, always asking, "did you?" or will you? Especially amid the pandemic, the thought of other children just like us, in the same situation we are, watching the world fall apart and being powerless to stop it, is somehow comforting. And you've captured that so well. It's so melancholy sweet, just two girls in their crumbling worlds, asking, begging, for a voice to talk to, for someone to hear them, someone a hundred years away. This poem is so powerful, it leaves me breathless.
(January 16, 2021 - 10:25 am)
Oh my goodness this basically made my day. Thank you so so so much, and congratulations to everyone else! Everyone's poems were wonderful and although I didn't have time to compliment all of them this week (school started again--) I did read all of them.
The next theme is wander and judging is January 30, 2021, which gives everyone 14 days to submit poems.
(January 16, 2021 - 5:02 pm)
Congrats, Lumi!
Wandering, huh...? Ooh, I can already imagine all the different things we can do with this!
(January 16, 2021 - 6:12 pm)
I really dont write poetry but this theme is so pretty!
Traveler's Tale
i do not have a home
although this oak tree is cozy
and the birds that live in it want me to stay
i do not have a love
but i feel for the wide blue sky
and the ground beneath my feet likes me
i do not have a family
except for the friends i've made along the way
and the flowers that grow on my heart
i forgot what i used to have
but this is enough for me
because i am just a wanderer
the birdsong will tell my tale
and one day i’ll live among the stars
(January 19, 2021 - 1:01 pm)
Really? You don't write poetry? Because this is SO good! I especially like the second stanza.
(January 19, 2021 - 8:25 pm)
To Wander into a Story
There is a certain wonder,
or wanderlust, one might say,
in picking a book
at random,
a happy accident, one might also say,
and flipping pages
headfirst
into a whole other world
with whole other people
and problems and beginnings
and endings,
endings you wished wouldn't happen,
but that is the way of stories and of everything.
And after the last page
is reluctantly shut,
you
are just a wee bit
different, wiser
from your travels
and there's always
another story
to wander into.
(January 20, 2021 - 7:58 pm)
Sometimes, when
No one’s watching
I escape into
My own mind, spinning
Tales of wonder
As I wander through
The splashes of
Color and light and
Glimmering imagination.
Then, when my inside-myself’s
Feet hit the inside of my mind,
I’m in my library,
Shelves and shelves of
Old-looking books stretching
Farther and farther into the
Amber light of my head.
Red carpet under
My feet and the smell of
Books in my nose and
So many sights to see, but
I always know exactly what
Book to choose.
And when I’m finally noticed
I reemerge from that library
And smile,
And say
I was just
Wandering.
(January 22, 2021 - 5:49 pm)
remember that time
when you picked me up
in your clunky little car
and we just started driving
who knows how far?
past the gray buildings that march down my street
through the sweet-smelling orange groves
and fields of wheat
far past the cities
where we spent all our days
and into the countryside
where the cows calmly grazed.
we wandered through meadows
filled with flowers just beginning to bloom
and we basked in the sun, free of gloom
but then the sun began to set
and we knew we had to go
so we made a wish on the first star we saw
and took one last mental photo.
you promised to take me back there
at least one more time
but I never did see that meadow again
for we could never find our way.
I look at that photo tucked in my mind
each and every day.
(January 23, 2021 - 1:45 pm)
I really, really like this! I just have one piece of critique I wanted to say- maybe split up "filled with flowers/ just beginning to bloom" and possibly "and we basked in the sun/ free of gloom"
(January 23, 2021 - 4:14 pm)
That would sound better. I was having trouble with spacing those lines. Thanks for the critique! :)
(January 23, 2021 - 6:39 pm)
This poem is really short, and I don't love it, but here's my entry! I feel like there was so much I could have done with this theme, and I'm not quite sure why I decided to go with this, but It's not bad! This was such a good theme! <3
Someone to wander with~
I can walk alone-
i can wander alone-
i can be alone,
but wandering with you-
wandering with anyone-
would be better.
i want someone to wander with.
I can watch.
i can be.
i can wander.
and so can you.
so why can't you wander with me?
why can't you be the person i wander with?
(January 23, 2021 - 10:46 pm)
i live in a radio world-
a fold in the dress of the universe where all the cars are twenty years old and people shout from fire escapes and all the melancholy gets crumpled into a ball and tossed into the depths of my heart where it only grows.
i walk cobblestone roads on bruised feet and i am walking paper with no song within me, only icy veins and a longing for a home
the noise around me is a symphony too beautiful for the broken glass in my soul;
"if only", comes the whisper from my head to my spine through the tips of my bloodless fingers-
if only the wisp of hope within me could leave this cage behind and wander among the stars
where i would truly be home
(January 24, 2021 - 10:26 am)